Drabble ::" it's over ..."

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Drabble ::-" it's over ...."

Dressed in a pink saree she is thinking something ...a rose is kept on her table just in front of her ..is she ready to choose this now ..

Is she ready to give him now ...but if she will not give it now then when will ..it's perfect she has to do it

She stands up to put her clothes in the cupboard just while settling it some paper falls down and she bent down to take it .

Reading the heading of first it shocks her but then it has to be one day ..they has to come to this decision ..

Holding the paper in her one hand she took the rose in her other hand .

He comes .,his jeep sound alert her ,listening the footsteps sound her heartbeats increased wiping off the tear fall from her eyes she opens the door of the room

Getting shocked she sees him and he stares her back but suddenly his eyes travelled from her face to her hand in which she is holding those papers, awkwardly he sees her but could not find any emotion ..

" Tumhein pata chal gaya ..wo..oo main batane wala hi tha par phir sab itni harbadbi main hua ki.."

" Main jaanti thi sabkein baad yehi sab hoga .." she said with cracked voice no she cannot become weak in front of him not now

Sampada nein maafi maangi hai ..itne saaloon baad aaj aisa laga ki vo sachmain apne kiye pein sharminda hai ..kalyani i am extremely sorry hum pati patni lein jhagro main tumhari jindagi barbaad ho gayi ..aur abb moksh bhi bada ho raha hai ussein ek family ki jaroorat hai ..main aur sampada iss rishte ko chance Dena chahte hai .." he said hopefully

She nodded her hiding her internal storm well ..her eyes is looking a like a river now but no she cannot cry ..

" Maine bhi yahin socha hai ..some relationship are not mean to be duniya ko hamare beech ek compatibility lagti hai lekin ..it's over main bhi yahin kehne wali thi .."

He nodded his head , signing paper and when she bid him a good bye she don't know ..

But now she knew everything where on other side of house she stand alone in darkness and sees how her beautiful rose is now withered in her handa .

He don't love her there is no love in their relationship she gets attracted towards him and now it's all over ..it's all over he got his family back now its time for her to see her broked life ..

Pink became white she didn't know..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tagging few more

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Vanshu itna acha kaise likh leti ho😍😍😍This is so beautiful and emotional at the same time🤧🤧 I can't see Kalyani like this💔 uss bechari ne kitni kurbaniyan di hai🤧 Hoping insab ke peeche Malhar ka koi plan ho.. Wo apni Kalyani ko khud se dur kaise bhej sakta hai? aur that sampu wo kabhi nahi sudhar sakti..😒😒😒 Can't wait to know what will happen next😍😍 Ye end nahi hai na??? Yaar please KalMa ko jldi se mila dena🥺🥺 Mujhe Malhar ji ke muh se sun na hai confession sabse pehle😭😭😭 Poor Kalyani.. Literally vanshu I had tears in my eyes while reading this... Aur ha ek aur request hai please apne 'Sweet Start' story ka next episode please upload kar do.. Please yaar!! Mujh uska bhot jada wait hai🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️ Your stories have my heart❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aww my anu baby sorry for making you crying but this is the end of this drabble ..ye ek short story thi yahin end ho gayi..it's a harsh reality agr sampada ko samajh aajata aur Malhar ussein maaf kar deta to kalyani ko jaana hi padta ..isliye maine yahin show Kiya ..agr tum log ideas doge to something i will do with this 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Finally vanshu is back with the another jatka😂🥺

Sach mein poor kalyani kitni khush thi but ek sec nhi laga us khushi ko duk mein badalne ka liye she thinks ki wo aaj apne dil ki baat bol hi dekgi but Wo paper

Malhar ne sampada ko maaf kar diya malharji aise kaise kar skate hai apni kalyani ke saath I hope ki malhar ye sab natak kar raha ho mai nhi dek sakti kalyani ko aise

The story is to interesting vanshu plzz continue plzz vanshu mat chodna is story ko

Plzz continue karna and agar tumhe time mile to plzz continue your ek aashiyaana apna sa

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Koi baat nhi vanshu ❤️❤️ It's totally fine.. Thoda bura laga Kalyani ke liye 🥺🥺 but it's all right.. I will try to give you ideas ❤️❤️ Thank you for this❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's so emotional yrr....

Don't know it's right or not..... But the emotions you pour into it was so pure

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Haaww, gande Malharji ... iss kaam ki unhe Sampu dayan se punishment milni chahiye! Meri bechari sweet si Kallu ka dil toot gaya! 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I still think there's some scope for a part 2 of this, though... let the tables be turned, for a change: have Mallu come back begging at Kallu's feet while she's dating someone else (the dream of every fan who wants more fair writing on indian/pakistani dramas with a more feminist pov and not watching them treated like garbage by their in-laws and husbands: in 2022 it isn't a good look!).

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Kallu ke liye bura laga... Poor girl loves him, lekin he doesn't..

Sampu ne maafi maang li... Sach me??

Malhar iske baaton me aa gaya? Ya phir she's genuine now..?


It was emotional update.. Nice Vanshu

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