A Shivi FF |Maami ki Behen ki Beti |- LAST CHAPTER pg 54- 23/02/202 - Page 42

Originally posted by: I_am_snj

they did not just in the middle of road ,did they ? 🤣🤣😍😍😭😭I am going to miss waiting for your updates every day 😭😭❤

yep they did haha, and thank you❤️

Originally posted by: mandira2

I have never felt so connected to a Shivi story like this. You are a fabulous storyteller and I enjoyed reading each and every chapter. I used to check this forum every morning to see if you’ve updated and not having more of Shivi from your end makes me so upset :(( However, I’m glad that I can comeback to this story whenever I want. The fact that this version of Shivi exists in this world is so heartwarming.

I can’t thank you enough for giving me this shivi :)

Thank you so much!

Do not make me cry, argh 🤗

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: prernapewdie

It got ended 😭, I wanted more and more out of this story. It was such a real life based experience that they kissed but Raavi was unsure on her part, which is a natural thing after Dev fiasco.

Shiva went with dupatta and the second kiss is magical. I loved it, also the jamai dialogue.

Can you please write an epilogue to help us know what happened after jamnagar.

Thank you so much for your constant support and no epilogue, feel free to imagine the ending

Originally posted by: Sakshi2.8

The dupatta has reached to it's owner how lovingly he make her wear it and kiss in middle of road in front of all.

My heart is so full now. How badly i m still wishing they could meet again for forever but but but i loveeddd itt each and every chapter, dialogues and the connections❤️

Thank you for your kind words and constant support and yes, the dupatta landed where it had too

Originally posted by: Butterfly28

💜 What a beautiful story! This story was my daily sweet pleasure. Such innocence and love! I’m reading your other stories now and you are such a fab writer. You bring the characters to life giving each their due diligence.

I’m in love with this Shiva. All he wants is Raavi to be happy and it’s just so heart warming. This was my daily dose of love, how love should be! I’m a romcom sucker and this was so beautiful. How you tied in little Shiva and little Raavi, was my favorite part of the entire story. I do selfishly wish you would have showed Raavi’s realization before ending it , but I don’t have the gift you have so I can just make comments 😂

Wish you would do a couple of epilogues where Raavi realizes that it always was Shiva in her heart, where she returns to him and maybe another where she enacts out Shiva’s dream about the dupatta and the Khaman. Just a full circle😊.

Again you are way more creative than I can ever be and I’m just glad I ran across your stories. Thank you for sharing your craft with us. I wish you would write more regardless of the show. Sending some positive vibes to make you consider doing another story here!

Aww, thank you for this beautiful note and loads of love to you. I am really glad you liked this story and hope to see you soon somwhere, some other story too 🥳

Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

Read last two parts together... I loved everthing about it. How symbolic was raavi's realisation about shiva that he the the only constant in her life.. Gawd.... I so love that she considered herself lucky as she is the one whom Shiva loves..which indeed is true considering the way shiva loves and prioritizes raavi.. This shiva is pure goals... Any girl's dream. Maami witnessing them kissing was sone pe suhaaga😆loved the farewell party ... Raavi is the sweetest and she deserved all of the love she is getting. It leaves warmth in my heart to see her happy.

Coming to last part...

Raaavi... Finally usko wajah mil gayi wapas ane ki... How adorable was that she knew she resides in shiva's heart and wont even let him to nikalo her from there❤️

Oh.. The fight.. The angst and the intensity... The magic that you created with your words. Raavi getting gifts for all was pure love.

The besst part... Shiva getting all their flashbacks from childhood ...it was alll soooo meaningful...him giving her that duppata held sooo much significance.. I was awed,touched and moved... Wanted yo go into the screen and hug them❤️

Dear Roch!!!

Coming to this piece ending... I feel like someone close to my heart is moving away.. This story always screamed awesomeness, fabulousness and perfection. Your version of shiva was a perfect boii and raavi a purest soul.All other characters were lovely too be it mami anita dhara dev or rishita... Thankyou for writing this beautiful piece.

I respect your decision of ending this and also your decision of keeping its novelty alive by not posting any other fiction.. But yeah the reader in me would love to read more of your works.. So yeah one can always hope🙈

I definitely would love to hear from you often.. Even if you are not writing... Try and be active on forum..amazing people with amzing conversations..be a part of us.Many of us dont even watch the show anymore still sticking around in the forum.

you are going to make me cry, aww you are the sweetest, I swear.

Firstly, thank you, you just with your beautiful words, every single update, i'd find you and your kind support and honestly, thank you, seriously And yea, I do keep one story only for one couple and try to give my best in that one story, hopefully it did show in this story.

And about the forum, for sure, I'll hang around, people here seem like fun.

Also, if you do wanna read some other stories of mine, feel free to come hi to me on wattpad and have a great day ahead 🤗

She looked back at the house, and sniffed, "bye Shiva," She whispered, "bahut yaad ayegi teri, gadheda."

Okay! I cried here. 🤧

Finally Shiva gifted the multicolour duppata.

They kissed in front of maami.🤣

ShiVi babies deserve all the happiness, I'm emotionally attached with your version of ShiVi. ❤️❤️❤️

The way you wrote this story, i can't explain how much i love this, one of the best FF on the forum.

Thank you wirting this masterpiece, I'll come back to read it again. ❤️❤️

PS. I'm waiting for epilogue 😝

Originally posted by: Unnati05

She looked back at the house, and sniffed, "bye Shiva," She whispered, "bahut yaad ayegi teri, gadheda."

Okay! I cried here. 🤧

Finally Shiva gifted the multicolour duppata.

They kissed in front of maami.🤣

ShiVi babies deserve all the happiness, I'm emotionally attached with your version of ShiVi. ❤️❤️❤️

The way you wrote this story, i can't explain how much i love this, one of the best FF on the forum.

Thank you wirting this masterpiece, I'll come back to read it again. ❤️❤️

PS. I'm waiting for epilogue 😝

Thank you so much for the kind words and for the support 🤗 and i am really glad you liked this, also there is no epilogue, since it is an open ended story, feel free to imagine the same.

What a bittersweet ending 💔

Something that makes you cry happy tears and also leaves a lump in your throat. How i wish this never ended and i could go on shivi journey through your words. But every good thing comes to an end, so did this story.

This is one of the best shivi stories i have ever read, where you have captured their Essence so nicely. Perhaps in an au world this is what would have happened. The progression, the character growth and the emotions felt so real.

I am in love with the way shiva loves raavi. So pure, so selfless. Raavi won't be back to being raavi 1.0, she is raavi 2.0 who is in love with shiva 2.0. true. Isn't it? When we face something life changing, we can never go back to who we were before the event. The marriage day changed both shiva and raavi. How real and at the same time how magical was your story.

Thank you for writing this and for giving regular updates that made me feel like watching daily episodes rather than reading a story ❤️

I have always tried my best to express the live I have for this story by giving detailed comments and when the story has finally reached to its I am feeling speechless. Currently I am feeling both happy and sad.

Happy because finally Shiva-Raavi become Shivi after going through tornados of emotions they finally got their peace in each other.❤️

And upset because with this it comes to an end. Trust me when I say this I have never been this much invested in any story like I was in this one. Reason being the connection I felt with your Shiva and Raavi.

Raavi the girl whose dream was broken by the person she has loved her whole life (or she thought so). She has went through so much pain, fear, heartbreak, loneliness, but couldn't find her comfort until Shiva happened to her when she thought she is dying. I felt her emotions when she thought she died , when she thought this is end. But she got her anchor who brought her back to life.

Shiva the angry young man who claimed to hat his MKBKB all his life got scared at the moment he saw her ending her life. Never in his widest dreams a thought a girl whom he claims to hate will turn his life upside down with just one attempt of going away from him. The way he went through all their previous memories realising she was always their with him, for him, the realisation of his love everything was depicted so beautifully that I can't stop myself from loving this guy. (Though I have always been in team Raavi but here I was in team Shiva).

Now coming to this update this cannot have a better ending than this.

Them kissing under a dupatta in a middle of road. That's our Shiva and Raavi who doesn't care about world when they are together.☺️❤️

And the best part Shiva reminiscing their journey...It gave such an aesthetic touch to their story ❤️

"Tujhe jitna time lena hai, tu le Raavi. Tujhe main kabhi force nahi karunga, ye rishta waise hi chalega jaise tu chahti hai. Bas tu Raavi 1.0 ho jaa."

Raavi smiled, teary eyed at his comforting words, "main Raavi 1.0 wapas kabhi nahi ban sakti Shiva. Woh Raavi mar chuki hai," She said, holding his face in her hands, "par main Raavi 2.0 hu, jisse Shiva 2.0 pyaar karta hai aur main jaisi hu, khush hu."

"Tera Shiva Somnath mein tera intezaar karega, hamesha." He kissed her hand, "Saaru?"

Raavi smiled, melting in his arms, "Saaru."

This whole conversation deserves a special applaud 👏 . These two are love love love and love. Ye ek dusre k hai aur humesha rahenge❤️

Thanks for giving us such an amazing story Roch🤗

This was special for me as a reader and will always be.

As you said in A/N may we all find a Shiva in our lives, maybe be a Shiva to someone. ❤️

Sending you bahut saara Pyaar❤️❤️