A Shivi FF |Maami ki Behen ki Beti |- LAST CHAPTER pg 54- 23/02/202 - Page 40

I have never felt so connected to a Shivi story like this. You are a fabulous storyteller and I enjoyed reading each and every chapter. I used to check this forum every morning to see if you’ve updated and not having more of Shivi from your end makes me so upset :(( However, I’m glad that I can comeback to this story whenever I want. The fact that this version of Shivi exists in this world is so heartwarming.

I can’t thank you enough for giving me this shivi :)

Thank you so much!

It got ended 😭, I wanted more and more out of this story. It was such a real life based experience that they kissed but Raavi was unsure on her part, which is a natural thing after Dev fiasco.

Shiva went with dupatta and the second kiss is magical. I loved it, also the jamai dialogue.

Can you please write an epilogue to help us know what happened after jamnagar.

The dupatta has reached to it's owner how lovingly he make her wear it and kiss in middle of road in front of all.

My heart is so full now. How badly i m still wishing they could meet again for forever but but but i loveeddd itt each and every chapter, dialogues and the connections❤️

💜 What a beautiful story! This story was my daily sweet pleasure. Such innocence and love! I’m reading your other stories now and you are such a fab writer. You bring the characters to life giving each their due diligence.

I’m in love with this Shiva. All he wants is Raavi to be happy and it’s just so heart warming. This was my daily dose of love, how love should be! I’m a romcom sucker and this was so beautiful. How you tied in little Shiva and little Raavi, was my favorite part of the entire story. I do selfishly wish you would have showed Raavi’s realization before ending it , but I don’t have the gift you have so I can just make comments 😂

Wish you would do a couple of epilogues where Raavi realizes that it always was Shiva in her heart, where she returns to him and maybe another where she enacts out Shiva’s dream about the dupatta and the Khaman. Just a full circle😊.

Again you are way more creative than I can ever be and I’m just glad I ran across your stories. Thank you for sharing your craft with us. I wish you would write more regardless of the show. Sending some positive vibes to make you consider doing another story here!

Originally posted by: VNuts

It's over. 😒

But it was such a lovely, bittersweet ending. Dil ko rona bhi hai aur hasna bhi. ❤️

Poor Raavi wants to make sure of her feelings, but Shiva and his anger. Uff! But then he gave her the dupatta!! And then they kissed again in front of everyone! 🤣

I both, love & hate, that you ended it this way but there is something so incredibly sweet about it, the heart sighs.

I loved all of it!!

Thank you for the wonderful journey!! ❤️

Thank you so much for always giving your review and supporting me 🤗

It is an open end journey, feel free to imagine whatever you want at the end of it and have a nice day

Originally posted by: Kfof

Its over 😭

It is one beautiful journey of Raavi and Shiva.😊

I truley connected to both because of them being realistic and I have fallen in love with them as Journey of Shiva realising his love and Raavi overcoming the grief started...

It was one faboulus story ❤️❤️

Loved it😍❤

Ps - Will wait eagerly for bonus and additional chapters ❤❤❤

haha, all good things have to end, but thank you for your kind words and loads of love 🤗

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

It's over.........

I loved the end but it ended too fast........

It is one of my favorite stories ❣️❣️

it did not end fast, I updated it daily and hence it seemed that way haha 😆 thank you

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Why am I feeling like crying 🥺🥺

Sorry I didn’t comment after each chapter but man I read and loved all of them.

It’s over 😭😭

Please give some epilogue and bonus chapters 🥺please 🥺

Loved how you have portrayed their story ❤️

Thank you ❤️ and it is an open ended story, feel free to imagine the end. No epilogue but maybe bonuses ahead. Not sure.