A Shivi FF |Maami ki Behen ki Beti |- LAST CHAPTER pg 54- 23/02/202 - Page 41

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

I m so so sorry for not been able to comment on chapter 20 but gonna put my emotions for last 2 chapters togther

Chapter20

"Haan, I know, par main ek jagah hamesha rahungi, aur tu nikaal nahi sakta."

"Yaha," She placed his hand on his beating heart, and her eyes still holding his gaze, "aur na main tujhe nikalne dungi."

These line gonna forever engrave in my little shivi heart 💞

I m so happy with the change of events from being in dilemma about shiva to realisation to dev-raavi exchange of words(much needed communication) to finally getting confirmation about her feelings for shiva this whole set of thing was jst brilliantly written with right set of emotions 💗💗💖💖

I m still happy she is leaving somnath specially jab raavi ko wapis aane ki wajha mil gyi hai and i.e none other than her shiva, bandar ,bhoothnath and gadhedha

Lastly her saying mai zarur wapis aaungi and her kiss hayeeee dil le lo mera❤❤❤😭😭😭 all i can say the wait was worth it 💗

Chapter 21

First chapter left me with heavy heart and teary eye last chapter left me with happy heart and teary eye this wholesome journey was just amazing i m really reallly thankful for writing this amazing piece 💗 sending you a very big hug 🤗

Coming to chapter

What can i say it was rollercoster of emotions ahhhh 😭😭💖💖💖special mention to 2 scenes

1)raavi giving presents to all i don't know it made me so emotional plus shiva watching her from distance ahhhhh my heart❤️

2) shiva having flashbacks of all the moments of them literally that was the portion when i realised i was actually crying 😭😭😭

Shiva giving duppatta to raavi like all their moments this one particular scene had too became a moment between these two from shiva having dream of multicolour duppata to actually buying duppata to finally giving it to rightful owner here take my heart💗💗😭😭😭

And finally that goodbye kiss it completed everything it was cherry on top in this whole chapter

I loved every bit of this whole story ❤❤❤

Sending you a my shivi heart and hugs🤗🤗❤❤

I cannot tell you how much your support, your kind words and your appreciation has meant to me all these days, thank you so much, for not just liking this story but also penning these beautiful remarks. Love you loads and thank you sooooo much 🤗

Read last two parts together... I loved everthing about it. How symbolic was raavi's realisation about shiva that he the the only constant in her life.. Gawd.... I so love that she considered herself lucky as she is the one whom Shiva loves..which indeed is true considering the way shiva loves and prioritizes raavi.. This shiva is pure goals... Any girl's dream. Maami witnessing them kissing was sone pe suhaaga😆loved the farewell party ... Raavi is the sweetest and she deserved all of the love she is getting. It leaves warmth in my heart to see her happy.

Coming to last part...

Raaavi... Finally usko wajah mil gayi wapas ane ki... How adorable was that she knew she resides in shiva's heart and wont even let him to nikalo her from there❤️

Oh.. The fight.. The angst and the intensity... The magic that you created with your words. Raavi getting gifts for all was pure love.

The besst part... Shiva getting all their flashbacks from childhood ...it was alll soooo meaningful...him giving her that duppata held sooo much significance.. I was awed,touched and moved... Wanted yo go into the screen and hug them❤️

Dear Roch!!!

Coming to this piece ending... I feel like someone close to my heart is moving away.. This story always screamed awesomeness, fabulousness and perfection. Your version of shiva was a perfect boii and raavi a purest soul.All other characters were lovely too be it mami anita dhara dev or rishita... Thankyou for writing this beautiful piece.

I respect your decision of ending this and also your decision of keeping its novelty alive by not posting any other fiction.. But yeah the reader in me would love to read more of your works.. So yeah one can always hope🙈

I definitely would love to hear from you often.. Even if you are not writing... Try and be active on forum..amazing people with amzing conversations..be a part of us.Many of us dont even watch the show anymore still sticking around in the forum.

Originally posted by: nolee3097

I am all sentimental to see it end 😭
I rarely feel that way when I read. But this one is special and I am so so glad I got a chance to read this beautiful piece of writing ❤️

I think this was such a wholesome and satisfying Shiva-Raavi love story!
I love how you've portrayed both the characters keeping intact their essence.
Thank you for this one! 🤗

It's been a pleasure reading it and I will definitely be re-reading it whenever I feel like I need a warm hug and fuzzy feeling!

Aww, thank you so much and happy re-reading lmao, and loads of love

Originally posted by: Pritha_31

God!! I'm so much attached to this story, I'm a very emotional person and I'm literally crying rn, this whole FF was so so beautiful, I loved every bit of it and how. I need more of your stories❤️

aww, thank you! I do not write more on the same couple, but do check out my wattpad if in case you wanna read more! 🤗

Originally posted by: kushigupta162

Wow nice story yar

Yar plz must write epilouge of this story plz plz

Thanks, and no epilogue, it is an open ended story, feel free to imagine the end!

Originally posted by: Jia21

Such a beautiful ending to an amazing story! ❤️

Can't believe it's completed so quickly. I wish it continued forever.

Reading the update first thing in the morning had became a routine for me. Will surely miss it.

Thanks so much for writing this ❤️

Thank you so much for your kind words

Originally posted by: Amu2908

Ummm this was the last chapter !!😒

I am emotional right now...😭😭

I don't know what to say..I have been so much connected to this ff coz of your punctuality..you keep updating 1 or 2 chapters everyday and I,from the first day started reading this and kept waiting for daily updates..👏

The connection you have made b/w childhood shivi and adult shivi was awesome and we won't be getting this connection in this show ever..then you kept it very realistic,everything happened on its own time and they realised and fell in love for eo gradually...😳

I really loved this ff and it wil always remain close to my heart❤️

The last chapter was very emotional and it ended giving a hope on shivi's future(we know what is gonna happen😃) and to us,readers.So if possible try to write an epilogue too

Thank you for this lovely ff🤗

Haha thank you so much, the childhood shivi has been the essence and honestly, they made me wanna keep writing. Thanks for the appreciation and loads of love to you, and no epilogue, because it is an open end story, feel free to imagine the end

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Why is this over? How? I mean.. abhi Abhi tho sab theek hua hai.. so typically of the hot headed couple to be fighting one minute and then kissing each other senselessly the next.. not bothered by who is watching!

And the dupatta finally gets to its rightful owner! So beautiful!

Im so sad though that this is over!

All things come to an end, sadge, but thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

Read the last 2 chapters - got a little bit emotional. How adorable are this Shiva and Raavi. They deserve to be with each other. I am so glad shiva confessed before he left, he brought her to the party, thoroughly enjoyed the time with Pandya parivar. The Shiva who was in front of her brought a new life into Raavi, it was beautiful to read how grateful she is and he single handedly made sure her life was back on track. In this day age who loves someone unconditionally like this,

Raavi is indeed lucky to have Shiva in her life and Shiva deserves to get his happiness as Raavi is the only girl he hated and loved at the same time. Their first kiss, Raavi’s little bit reluctance for making him wait, Shiva’s anger all part and parcel of their relationship. I liked Raavi’s goodbye to the Pandya parivar mrmbers, she bought something for everyone. Girl has no malice or evil intentions inspite of going through so much. She is such a pure soul. Shiva rushing to meet her and give her the dupatta is the perfect ending to the story, His resolve to wait for Raavi until she is ready to come back is something very few people would do and that’s where he stands tall.

This is one wholesome love story of Shiva and Raavi, how long they have come in their lives starting to hate to loving each other unconditionally.
This is easily one of the best FFs I have read in this forum. Kudos to your writing skills and special thanks to you for giving daily updates and keeping us all engaged throughout. Thank you for writing this story ❤️

P.S: If you happen to change your mind in the future, would like to read another one of your creations on Shiva and Raavi, eagerly looking forward to it would be an understatement.

I am for sure going to miss your so amazing comments and thoughts on each chapter and thank you so much for taking an interest in this story, It was so good to keep waiting for your inputs and reviews, seriously. Few of the people here have been so kind, one of them being you with the support that made me write more and loads of love to you 🤗

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Wow what a bittersweet ending, brb while I collect my feelings because what do I do with them now? 😭

awaiting for you to return, dw, you can let those feelings flow in words 😉