A Shivi FF |Maami ki Behen ki Beti |- LAST CHAPTER pg 54- 23/02/202 - Page 43

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

I have always tried my best to express the live I have for this story by giving detailed comments and when the story has finally reached to its I am feeling speechless. Currently I am feeling both happy and sad.

Happy because finally Shiva-Raavi become Shivi after going through tornados of emotions they finally got their peace in each other.❤️

And upset because with this it comes to an end. Trust me when I say this I have never been this much invested in any story like I was in this one. Reason being the connection I felt with your Shiva and Raavi.


Raavi the girl whose dream was broken by the person she has loved her whole life (or she thought so). She has went through so much pain, fear, heartbreak, loneliness, but couldn't find her comfort until Shiva happened to her when she thought she is dying. I felt her emotions when she thought she died , when she thought this is end. But she got her anchor who brought her back to life.


Shiva the angry young man who claimed to hat his MKBKB all his life got scared at the moment he saw her ending her life. Never in his widest dreams a thought a girl whom he claims to hate will turn his life upside down with just one attempt of going away from him. The way he went through all their previous memories realising she was always their with him, for him, the realisation of his love everything was depicted so beautifully that I can't stop myself from loving this guy. (Though I have always been in team Raavi but here I was in team Shiva).


Now coming to this update this cannot have a better ending than this.

Them kissing under a dupatta in a middle of road. That's our Shiva and Raavi who doesn't care about world when they are together.☺️❤️


And the best part Shiva reminiscing their journey...It gave such an aesthetic touch to their story ❤️


"Tujhe jitna time lena hai, tu le Raavi. Tujhe main kabhi force nahi karunga, ye rishta waise hi chalega jaise tu chahti hai. Bas tu Raavi 1.0 ho jaa."

Raavi smiled, teary eyed at his comforting words, "main Raavi 1.0 wapas kabhi nahi ban sakti Shiva. Woh Raavi mar chuki hai," She said, holding his face in her hands, "par main Raavi 2.0 hu, jisse Shiva 2.0 pyaar karta hai aur main jaisi hu, khush hu."

"Tera Shiva Somnath mein tera intezaar karega, hamesha." He kissed her hand, "Saaru?"

Raavi smiled, melting in his arms, "Saaru."


This whole conversation deserves a special applaud 👏 . These two are love love love and love. Ye ek dusre k hai aur humesha rahenge❤️


Thanks for giving us such an amazing story Roch🤗

This was special for me as a reader and will always be.

As you said in A/N may we all find a Shiva in your lives, maybe be a Shiva to someone. ❤️

Sending you bahut saara Pyaar❤️❤️


Taking your pyaar and storing it deep down in my heart so it can help me live through tough times. Nicky, yaar, main bata nahi sakti, how much I have loved and appreciated your thoughtful comments on each chapter. And when you missed a few, you'd still take the time to write about it. Kaha se dhundo aisa koi. 😭

I love you loads, and thank you for being so so so sweet and kind and I wish to see you around, thank you once again for being the best and I will for sure miss you and your inputs ☺️ Have an amazing day ahead and loads of love 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

What a bittersweet ending 💔

Something that makes you cry happy tears and also leaves a lump in your throat. How i wish this never ended and i could go on shivi journey through your words. But every good thing comes to an end, so did this story.

This is one of the best shivi stories i have ever read, where you have captured their Essence so nicely. Perhaps in an au world this is what would have happened. The progression, the character growth and the emotions felt so real.

I am in love with the way shiva loves raavi. So pure, so selfless. Raavi won't be back to being raavi 1.0, she is raavi 2.0 who is in love with shiva 2.0. true. Isn't it? When we face something life changing, we can never go back to who we were before the event. The marriage day changed both shiva and raavi. How real and at the same time how magical was your story.

Thank you for writing this and for giving regular updates that made me feel like watching daily episodes rather than reading a story ❤️

Aww, thank you for reading this story and taking time to even give such beautiful and thoughtful comments, and that too constantly throughout the story. Seriously, I am going to miss you and these inputs and I am glad that you liked the story, hoping to see you around. Appreciation for all support throughout

Have a great day ahead and loads of love 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Gadbad_Ghotala


Taking your pyaar and storing it deep down in my heart so it can help me live through tough times. Nicky, yaar, main bata nahi sakti, how much I have loved and appreciated your thoughtful comments on each chapter. And when you missed a few, you'd still take the time to write about it. Kaha se dhundo aisa koi. 😭

I love you loads, and thank you for being so so so sweet and kind and I wish to see you around, thank you once again for being the best and I will for sure miss you and your inputs ☺️ Have an amazing day ahead and loads of love 🤗

Dhundne ki zarurat nahi hai mai hu na 🤗

My pyaar and me are not going anywhere.❤️

I am up to read all your future stories (Shivi pe nai bhi hai toh bhi I will read them) because you shape your characters on your own.

Also won't mind seeing you around aise bhi bina kisi story ke. You are such a sweetheart girl❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Dhundne ki zarurat nahi hai mai hu na 🤗

My pyaar and me are not going anywhere.❤️

I am up to read all your future stories (Shivi pe nai bhi hai toh bhi I will read them) because you shape your characters on your own.

Also won't mind seeing you around aise bhi bina kisi story ke. You are such a sweetheart girl❤️

Aww ☺️

Also, I am active on wattpad (all my stories are posted there) feel free to check them out, and for sure will hang around, you can always tag me, pin me anything 🥳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Gadbad_Ghotala

you are going to make me cry, aww you are the sweetest, I swear.

Firstly, thank you, you just with your beautiful words, every single update, i'd find you and your kind support and honestly, thank you, seriously And yea, I do keep one story only for one couple and try to give my best in that one story, hopefully it did show in this story.

And about the forum, for sure, I'll hang around, people here seem like fun.

Also, if you do wanna read some other stories of mine, feel free to come hi to me on wattpad and have a great day ahead 🤗

Aww you made me cry I make you cry... We are even now.🤣

See you around..keep dropping by🤗

Wattpad .. Never really went to that space.. But would try to visit for sure. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

It was soo beautiful 💖 💖 💖 💖

Best ff i have ever read

Maine ajj tak nearly 200 ffs pada hai and if some one ask the best among all i would just say it's this ff ❤️

Mami ki behen ki Beti 💖💖💖



Loved it ❤️ ❤️❤️


Yaar ek last part dedo jis me raavi vapas ayegi aur shivi ka milan and shaadi pls

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Posted: 3 years ago

This ff is ending and I’m a sobbing mess rn😭💖

This ff will always remain my fav❤️

Also the story and the ending was just so bfulllllllll💖🤌🏻

I’m out of words🥺✨

Best best besttttttttt🌸🤍

Thankyouu so much for writing this and treating us with such a wonderful story😭💗

It was my routine daily to check IF whether you have updated or not and now I’ll miss that😭🥺

I felt connected to every bit of this story🧿💘

This ff will always remain close to my hearttt❤️

The dialogues the pov everything was just perfect🤧

I just request you to write more shivi stories in future if you would like to do so cuz my heart is yet not full and want some more amazing stories🥺💖

I hope you’ll think about it🌻

So a very big thankyouu for writing this wonderful storyy🥰

~Loads of love💗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: YummyXteddy

It was soo beautiful 💖 💖 💖 💖

Best ff i have ever read

Maine ajj tak nearly 200 ffs pada hai and if some one ask the best among all i would just say it's this ff ❤️

Mami ki behen ki Beti 💖💖💖



Loved it ❤️ ❤️❤️


Yaar ek last part dedo jis me raavi vapas ayegi aur shivi ka milan and shaadi pls

Thank you so much! and 200 ffs? Sheeeeesh, that is some dedication! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Shineee

This ff is ending and I’m a sobbing mess rn😭💖

This ff will always remain my fav❤️

Also the story and the ending was just so bfulllllllll💖🤌🏻

I’m out of words🥺✨

Best best besttttttttt🌸🤍

Thankyouu so much for writing this and treating us with such a wonderful story😭💗

It was my routine daily to check IF whether you have updated or not and now I’ll miss that😭🥺

I felt connected to every bit of this story🧿💘

This ff will always remain close to my hearttt❤️

The dialogues the pov everything was just perfect🤧

I just request you to write more shivi stories in future if you would like to do so cuz my heart is yet not full and want some more amazing stories🥺💖

I hope you’ll think about it🌻

So a very big thankyouu for writing this wonderful storyy🥰

~Loads of love💗

Loads of love to you too! Thank you for the kind words, honestly, everyone here have been so kind and this story will be so special to me too!

Have a great day ahead or night, and thank you for the support through-out ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

New to the forum but have been reading all the chapters on Wattpad. Would just summarise by saying that YOU ARE AN AMAZING AMAZING WRITER👏

I just loved loved the way you connected their present scenarios to their bittersweet childhood memories❤️

Though I wished this story to continue further but I am just AMAZED by the ending, it was quite emotional 😭

Finally the dupatta reached it's true owner, it's just beautiful👍🏼

Please please come up with an epilogue, if you feel like. Eagerly waiting!!❤️

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