The note - abhimanyu akshara ( a short story) - Page 2

This was the fiction written month back

His suicide act to get her confession

Originally posted by: Aniash

This was the fiction written month back

His suicide act to get her confession

Wow, Neil and Parth are such amazing brothers to unite him with his lady love. Really lovely written. 👌🏻☺️ The best part was Parth and Neil being chased by the family and Harsh’s epic warning- they were heart surgeons who are gonna land in their own hospital because of heart attacks was 🤣. You nailed his characterisation with this line. 👏🏻

Originally posted by: sarahehsan

Wow, Neil and Parth are such amazing brothers to unite him with his lady love. Really lovely written. 👌🏻☺️ The best part was Parth and Neil being chased by the family and Harsh’s epic warning- they were heart surgeons who are gonna land in their own hospital because of heart attacks was 🤣. You nailed his characterisation with this line. 👏🏻

Tq dear.

There was one more i wrote

The wedding twist

also last month

Don't know which page it went

This forum is like a fire 😁😁

This is the one i wrote last month

It's a short one

Neel has always been such a sweetheart and him plotting all this along with Parth is very much believable 🤣

Your prediction was quite accurate regarding the suicide act. I just hope Arohi stays away from the sweetheart Neel in future even though it seems like Neel is the "bali ka bakra" for her 😆😆

Originally posted by: Chir-Cute

Neel has always been such a sweetheart and him plotting all this along with Parth is very much believable 🤣

Your prediction was quite accurate regarding the suicide act. I just hope Arohi stays away from the sweetheart Neel in future even though it seems like Neel is the "bali ka bakra" for her 😆😆

I think there are others who predicted same😁😁 It looks obvious he will do that . Push her to an extreme level to confess coz he knows she feels the same.

I also watch coz of HC. Never followed this show before.

Neil is good looking and cute 😁😁

Arohi needs someone like him to teach her a lesson.

I find their nok jok funny

Hope he sends her to a roller coaster ride.

Eventually the poor guy will have to be sacrificed for abhi's love story. This one also easy to predict.

This show is easily predictable 😁😁

If u get time

Go to UD forum and read my ff on

Possessed

A suspense thriller

U would love it

U can give ur review there after reading

I won't tell u the story

U read from pt one.

There are total 15 pts

I wrote it two weeks ago

It's on first or second pg.

That forum doesn't move this forum doesn't stop😁😁