Hi all,
My name is anita and i am from Malaysia.
This is my first post for this forum despite the show running for a decade. Never watched it before . Only three episodes when mohsin entered as kartik but couldn't connect with Shivangi. Don't know why. So dropped it. Now watching since harshad chopra entered and am enjoying the story .
So my first post in the form of a fiction in this forum. An idea popped in mind for current track , so thought of putting it down..
The note
9pm after dinner , Goenka's residence(bedroom)
Arohi was pleased with the turnaround in abhimanyu's behavior towards her. All thanks to her older sibling , Akshara for her kind deeds that pushed her more closer to that handsome heart surgeon as the days passed. He mistook all Akshara's kindness to be hers. She took an advantage of her sister's move on situation. She was relieved. Soon abhimanyu would be hers
9pm (bedroom)
Akshara squeezed the fluffy pink pillow in her arms. It's been three days since she returned from the camp. The flashbacks of the unconscious abhimanyu lying in the storeroom surrounded by raging flames haunted her restless mind affecting her sleep. He was behaving a little rude lately and it was upsetting. She was not sure how long she could hold back her feelings.
8am during breakfast ( at Birla residence)
The next morning an announcement shocked everyone at the dining table.
"Main arohi sey shadi karna chahta hun",. All were happy to hear abhimanyu's decision except his aunt and two brothers .
The news travelled to Goenka's through abhimanyu's dad who couldn't wait to proceed with the marriage proposal . The sooner the better.
He met them personally and apologised for his rude behavior previously and requested for the both families to mend their relations through arohi and abhimanyu's matrimonial bond as akshara declared she doesn't love him. Goenka's decided to discuss with arohi first before they gave their consensus.
Arohi immediately agreed to the proposal stating she would love to have a life partner like abhimanyu'. So Goenka's gave in to the marriage proposal. Both families met and decided the dates . The shub muhurat was in two weeks time as according to the pandit. Arohi was glad that she won this time and taunted her sister for losing the man who loved her dearly.
Akshara was shattered and decided to leave for the neighbouring city for a music teacher's job. As she was about to step into the couch that would take her to her new destination, she received a call from her older brother, kartik commanding to return home due to an emergency that occurred the very last minute. She was puzzled. What could it be?
The note
It was a note written by abhimanyu brought over to Goenka's by Parth. . Akshara was shocked when she read it. The note written.
Main abhimanyu bhirla aaj is dharti aur akash ko chod ker ja raha hun kyunki mujhey mera pyar nehin mila. Akshara, aaj key baad tujhey meri shakal bhi nehin dekhne ko milegi. Shakal toh kya , tujhey meri hot six pack body bhi nehin milegi. Kambakt, tuney mere pyar ko tukhradiya, marne key baad bhoot benkar tera khun chusunga. Katra katra tinka tinka. Agar tu nehin toh koyi aur bhi nehin. Arohi sey shadi karney sey pehle acha hain main marjaun. Main tujhey apni sali key roop main nehin bardash karsakta. Peti ben na chahta hun, jiju nehin. Tu mujhey jiju kehke bulaigi , issey acha main duniya sey chela jaun. Tum mujsey pyar nehin karti. Main marna chahta hun. Bye Akshara, mujhey kabhi yaad mat karna. Alvida
Tumhara sirf tumhara lachar ashique
Abhimanyu
Akshara screamed in vain. She fainted , couldn't tolerate the fact that due to her sacrifice, abhi was doing the same , taking his own life . It was unbearable.
Two days passed since he left home , never returned. The roka rasam and engagement was cancelled. Arohi was furious. Akshara always came in between her happiness. The Birlas notified the police. A search mission launched. There was no news about his body found. Perhaps he hasn't committed suicide as yet.
Akshara thought hard and then an idea struck.her messed up mind when Neil asked her, aap bhai sey pehle kahan mili thi? Could he be at the same venue they first met?? When he heard her singing for the very first time and fall for her melodious voice. Perhaps he wanted to end his life there.
She told the families about the hints she was getting and everyone rushed instantly to the location. She was right. He was standing at the bridge, ready to jump into the deep waters beneath when she screamed . I love u , abhimanyu. Birlas and Goenka were taken aback. Akshara actually loved him .
"Nehin tum mujsey pyar nehin karti", he was adamant. Determined to jump. She moved slowly towards him trying to explain.
" Maine jo kiya arohi key liye kiya". Then she spilled the details of how her sister warned her against going close to him. She sacrificed for her sibling's happiness. He stood still. She ran forward and hugged him tightly. The families sighed. Finally problem solved
3 hours later at Birla's residence
Neil and Parth running around the mansion chased by the rest of the family members with brooms, hockey sticks and chapals except abhimanyu who stood at a corner, giggling to the circus going on .
Twist in the tale
It was the two brothers planning and plotting to unite their sibling with his lady love. They somewhat felt akshara was lying. She too loved abhimanyu but was reluctant to confess. So they came up with the suicide mission.
This plotting started after he announced to marry arohi. They knew he won't be in peace and was doing it just to make his ill mum happy. To show her, he moved on but he was dying inside as the hours passed. They understood his pain and Parth didn't want him to go through a marriage failure as what he himself was already experiencing.
Neil knew abhi's handwriting. So he wrote the note. Parth added a sleeping pill in his raat ka dudh glass. He knocked off immediately, fast asleep. That's where they executed their plan. They kidnapped him while he was deep in slumber. He woke in a hotel room the next morning. They spilled their plan. He finally agreed after much persuasion.
Birlas were furious after they found out for what they were all put through . The anxiety of abhi missing and the suicide attempt. So they took whatever they could grab and chased the two culprits.
Harsh warned them not to repeat the deed again. They were heart surgeons who were gonna land in their own hospitals with heart attacks. Both the guys had to put up at their friends' places for that particular night after thrown out from the mansion.
Two days later
Akshara abhimanyu marriage fixed with new muhurat which was in a month's time. Meanwhile both enjoyed romantic dates being stalked by the jealous sister who vowed to spoil their wedding without noticing that two gentlemen were spying on her as well who made sure the marriage takes place . Parth and Neil Birla.
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