CHAL GHAR CHALEIN (part 7 pg 17) completed - Page 4

Originally posted by: lourel24

Awesome 👍

Wow..I'm so glad that didn't happen. The hair pulling bit. But glad Shiva finally spoke up.

And Raavi's heartbreak! ❤️

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Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

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Loved it.... I hope Shiva sticks to his promise to Raavi this time... ❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Loved it.... I hope Shiva sticks to his promise to Raavi this time... ❤️

PART-III

Krish came out to have a look on the couple with the kids here he saw both of them sitting on the floor and clinging to each other, Ronak and Nishant shouted and went towards Shivi,

"Raavi dii..... "

Both Shiva and Raavi came out of their world and looked at the kids who were tumbling towards them and Raavi welcomed both of them by a hug and they took Raavi with them here Shiva was in awe seeing Raavi laughing and tumbling with the kids she was herself a little kid at heart but has gone through a lot of trauma cause of him and his family to whom she has always considered hers, here krish broke Shiva's trance by saying,

"Shiva ikk baat pata lagi hai... "

"Kya.. "

"Bhabhi yahan par pichle 5 saal se aa rahi hai....... "

"Kya.... Par usne kabhi bataya kyon nahi..... "

"Kio kii voh yeh sab secret rakhna chahti thi.. .. "

A voice from behind and Shiva turned around their was a man of his age only and he continued,

"Main aayan iss orphanage ka owner aur Raavi ka friend.. . .. . . "

Aayan brings his hand forward to shake hand with him and Shiva reciprocated by saying,

"Main Shiva.. . . Raavi ka.. "

"Pati... . .. "

Aayan said and Shiva looked at him and he continues,

"App log mujhe nahi jaante par main apko ache se janta hoon.. . .. . Raavj sara din yahan pandya pariwaar ke bare mein batein karti rehti thi.. . "

"Par usne kabhi bataya nahi yahan ke bare mein.. . .. "

"Raavi khud ikk anath hai.. . .. . . Usse uski massi maa ne palla hain yeh sab toh tum log jante ho.. . ... Par uske andar ikk aisi ladki bhi hai jo apna khud ka parivaar chahti thi jahan sab log ho uske mummy papa par aisa nahi huya.. . .. . ..main aur Raavu class mates the............5 saal pehle"

He gestured Shiva and krish to sit on the bench from where Raavi and other kids were visible and continued to tell them

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FLASHBACK STARTED,

5 years ago,

Raavi was in 11th standard and aayan was in her class, aayan's father was an orphanage owner and so aayan always look upto continue with his orphanage and flourish it and Raavi was aayan's good friend. Aayan used to tell her about his father's work and raavi was very much fascinated by all this as she deep down has a feeling of being an orphan but was also thankful about as her massi maa has brought her up unlike the children who didn't have any house to live and was really very much happy about how aayan's dad use to save those children life. Her visits to the orphanage were often but was a secret as if her massi maa come to know about she visits an orphanage she would feel that she misses her parents and would be hurt about it so she kept it a secret. Aayan's father was also fons of raavi as she really helped everyone their and spend time with children over there make them study basic things.

One day Raavi came to the orphanage and went to meet aayan's father in his office when she went there everyone their was tensed she asked,

"Kya huya uncle.... "

"Beta do naye bache aaye hain same age ke......... Dono ke parents friends the ikk trip se aa rahe the aur family ke bado ka accident ho gya par yeh dono bach gaye....... Aur yahan bheja gya hai inhe..... Par yeh bache kuch bol hi nahi rahe bas baithe hai........ Samjh nahi aa raha kya kare subah se try kar rahe hai.......... "

Raavi replied,

"Bache kahan hain .............main try karu.... "

And she went to kids and sat with them and hold their hands both kids looked at her she looked at them and smiled a little and both kids hugged her and cried. After few minutes she calmed them down and one of them said,

"Didi mummy papa kahan hai....... Mile nahi....... Uncle aunty bhi nahi aaye....... "

"Mumma papa na mujhe keh kar gaye kii main tum dono ko kahu kii vo na god se milne ja rahe hai......... Aur kaha kii unke strong boys na yahan rahe...... Taki vo apna kaam complete kar le........ Samjhe......toh abb rina nahi hai........ Aur bhut masti karni hai...... Ohk...... Mumma papa na dekh rahe aa tum dono........

Vese dono apna name nahi bataoge mujhe....... "

"Ronak"

"Nishant"

"Good boys....... Main Raavi....... Toh mummy papa kii baat manoge na............chalo get up........"

And both the boys went with her everyone was surprised that how she managed to make these boys speak which wre numb before. And after that day both boys treat Raavi as their family.

She always talked to aayan's father about her upbringing and pandya pariwaar and she was always proud about it but she felt a connection with these 2 kids and was confused about and one such day she said to aayan's father,

"Uncle, pata nahi kyon muhje inn bacho ke saath rehna time spend karna acha lagta hain..... Ikk connect sa feel hota hai inn sab ke saath......aise kyon.... "

Aayan's father smiled and said her,

"Beta, hamari jindagi mein aisa mod jaroor aata hai jab hume khud nahi pata lagta kii hum kyon kar rahe hai yeh sab.... Par pta nhi sukoon milta hai vo karke.... Main bhi shuru shuru mein aisa hi sochta tha par phir inn bacho ki muskan dekhkar inki aage badhta dekhkar jo khushi milti thi na vo kahin nahi milli toh bass jawab mil gya kii mujhe inn bacho ke saath ikk emotional connect hai........... Tujhe jawab mila... "

Raavi looked at him and than at aayan her eyes watered and she said,

"Pata nahi uncle......... Main sochti hoon agar massi maa na hoti toh shyad main inn sab ki tarah kahin bhatak rahi hoti aur kya pra mujhe app jaisa koii acha insaan bhi nahi milta jo mujhe paal sake...... Par aisa nahi huya mujhe meri massi maa ne palla par yeh bachon ke paas vaisa koii bhi nahi hain...... Main inn dono bacho ke liye vaisa kuch banna chahti hoon...... Jise vo apna keh sake...... Apna maan sake..... Par main yeh sab massi maa ko nahi bata sakti varna unhe hurt hoga aur main yeh nahi chahti..........iss liye sab secretly kar rahi hoon......."

Aayaan's father hugged Raavi and she bid a goodbye.

FLASHBACK ENDS

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Aayan continues,

"Iss liye Raavi sab se secret rakhna chahti thi........."

Shiva and krish were amazed as the Raavi they know is childish and airheaded and here she was all mature and she missed her parents it was a thing which she never talked about. Aayan says,

"Aaj vo 6 mahine baad aayi yahan....... Aur vo bhi rote huye...... Usne aur kuch nahi kaha na hi kisi ki shikayat ya burayi kii bass ikk cheez kahin ki vo fail ho gayi........ Baaar baar yahin bol rahi thi kii vo ikk family nahi bana payi.......main uss ghar main jagah nahi bana payi.........jab vo yeh bol rahi thi na tab mujhe 4 saal pehle ki baat yaad aa gayi thi..... "

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FLASHBACK STARTS,

4 years ago,

Raavi as usually came to orphanage and sat on one side aayan's father asked her what she is thinking and she said,

"Dhara dii....... Suman kaki..... Gaumbi sab log.... Bhut hi pyaar se rehte hai...... Mujhe na aisi hi family chahiye hamesha se.......... Main na iss family ka part banna chahti hoon...........

App soch rahe honge ki main kya bol rahi hoon.........

Par na uncle mujhe na hamesha se ikk family banani hai...... Rishte banane hai......... Aur unhe nibhana hai...... Thoda sa childish hai par mujhe na pandya niwas main ghar wali feeling aati hai.......... "

Aayan's father assured her she would get her dream come true and smiled at how naive she was.

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"Vo ladki hamesha se ukk ghar chahti thi...... Rishte chahti thi par.... Par use yeh nahi pta tha kii vo jitna sab ko pyaar karti hain..... Jitna vo sabko apna manati hain....... Iss duniya main koii bhi uss jaisa nahi ho sakta...... Vo galti kar jaati hain......Tum logon se itna pyaar karti thi na voh....... Tum logon ne uska trust tod diya uska dil tod diya........ Vo toh itni masoom hai kii tum ikk baar sorry bologe vo maaf bhi kar degi....... Par uska dil agar fir tuta na Shiva toh vo sehn nahi kar payegi............ Please..... "

Shiva says,

"Maine bhut galat kiya gai uske saath par abb aur nahi..... Main use aur rone nahi dunga......... Bilkul bhi nahi.......... Bass ajj ka din aur main sab sahi kar dunga"

Aayan nods and calls Raavi, Raavi bids a goodbye to everyone when nishant came to her and say in a warning tone eyeing Shiva,

"Agar apko kisi ne rulaya na toh mujhe batana main chodunga nahi"

Ronak comes and hugs her crying and says,

"Jaldi aana milne..... Last time ki tarah nahi......... I love you... "

Nishant also joins them and says,

"Main ikk dum good boy ban jaunga app jaldi aaoge na milne.... "

Shiva says,

"Apki didi ko jaldi lekar aaunga main......... Par pehle mujhse friendship karni padegi..... "

Ronak says,

"Agar app didi ko happy lekar aaye na next time tab karenge friendship nahi toh......."

Shiva chuckles and Raavi kisses both children cheeks and the trio head back to home. Raavi was not willing but still she was going cause of Shiva fear was creeping with each passing second and when Shiva has confessed his love his eyes had Genunity so she trusted him and gave in as she herself can't hold more.

They were in front of Pandya niwas Raavi's feet were froze she didn't wanted to move than people of neighborhood who have witness the drama in the morning were now whispering and looking at Raavi ,she suddenly became more conscious and just wanted to ran away from their eyes and than she felt warmth basking her hand and the source was Shiva he clutched her hand firmly and looked at her and make her move towards the door while Krish was dragging her luggage, before they entered suman came and said,

"Yeh ladki mere ghar mein nahi aayegi......... Mujhe aisi ladki chahiye hi nahi...... "

Raavi's tears returned her head lowered, Shiva didn't replied it means whatever he assured her was nothing her grip on his hand loosened but Shiva gripped it again and suman continues,

"Maine kaha tha nahi chahiye tera saya bhi apne bete ke paas...... Phir bhi aa gayi tu.......teri wajah se mera beta apni maa se ladha hai apni maa se.......... Kaha tha na maine kii hamari khushiyoon par grahan hai tu.......... "

Shiva now replied,

"Maa........ Bass kar abb..... Bass kar...... Bebuniyaad iljaam laga kar........ Tu kya saabit karna chahti hain....... Kyaa....... Subah bhi bola tha maine tujhe............ yeh ladki grahan nahi hai hamari khushiyon ko dugna karne aayi hain par humne ise kabhi utna pyaar utna saman utni ijjat di hi nahi kabhi ise apna parivaar mana hi nahi toh vo kaise karegi........ Tune itne taane mare phir bhi nahi gayi...... Teri sewa karti rahi......... Kuch bhi bina bole ghar sambhalti rahi.......... Aur tune kya kiya sabke samne beijjat kar diya ise.........."

Suman's head lowers and Shiva continues,

"Isne humse kabhi kuch nahi manga......... Kuch bhi nahi......... Sirf pyaar chahti thi aur vo bhi nahi de paaye ise............ Maa teri beti ko agar koyi aise beijjat karta toh tu kya karti.... Bol..... "

Suman didn't spoke her eyes we're not able to meet Shiva and Raavi's,

"Nahi bol paa rahi na...... Main bol deta hoon Suman pandya ka gussa sab jante hain...... Tu toh sab kuch jala kar rakh kar deti........ Phir abb kya huta maa......... Tune Raavi ko apni beti mana hi nahi....... Kio........ Usne apna sab kuch hume de diya aur hum........ "

Shiva looks at Raavi and Raavi was looking at him only tears continuously flowing everyone on the road were looking at them Shiva irrespective of anything he sat on his knees and say,

"Sorry Raavi..... Sab kych ke liye jo sab maine kiya....... Tere saath har baar galat karta aaya hoon main.......... Mujhe maaf karde..... "

Raavi bend on her knees immediately and hugs him crying loudly and says,

"Please Shiva mat bol........ Please........ I love you......... I love you........ "

Shiva was happy that she reciprocated the love and accepted it and hugged her tightly whispering,

"Main ikk acha pati nmbanne ki koshish karunga.... Please ikk last chance de de...... "

Suman who saw all this was guilty of her act and said,

"Mujhe khud pata hi nahi laga ki main kitna galat karti rahi.......... Raavi beta apni Kaki ko maaf nahi karegi....... Sorry......... Main bhi bhut sharminda hoon beta sab ke liye......... Meri beti ka dil toh sabse bada hain mujhe maaf kar degi na.... "

Raavi and Shiva move towards her and hug her. All the family joins them and finally all the grudges were settled.

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Thanks for coming here guys......This was the end of the story......... Hope you all like it...........

Suggestions are welcomed.......

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Beautiful 💕💕

It was a great piece yo read 😍😍😍😍😍

Nishant is little shiva for ravi 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Such an amazing story🤗❤️