Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil
Just wondering why channel/makers rushed on the actual love story.
Isn't it a high point too? Leads meet, hit miss, stolen glances, crush. But here they didn't even shoot for one month and it's shadi behen track. Atlst IN had a base for the jealousy of one sis- here it's ridiculous that for a guy they dont even know for a week Arohi being so nasty towards her sis. Abhi had a backstory of seeing his parents marriage but apparently that didn't matter. Birlas aren't that we'll written like say Manish or suwarna. They aren't even focusing on the siblings too- what's kairavs role apart from babysitting the sis?
If they rush like this how can they get high numbers. They have killed both leads let the newbies set. Kaira had such cute scenes and they had months to fall for love. Why can't they have a month?
Strange isn't it. DPK's Bidaai has such a strong narrative ( the orginal concept and story of two sisters produced by Rajan himself)
They have given a good back story as to how Arohi was trained to go against Akshara and yes it needed.
At the same time no one knows why Akshara left home and lived separately? Goenka raised their grandchildren with so much emotional backage. No attention is paid to the teenage years.
In Season 3, the ML is shown immediately😇 He is attracted by a voice fair enough. However the story is about Kaira's children, a few episodes focussing only on the Goenka's wouldn't harmed the show in any way.
Infact the Birla's are better portrayed. The power cum emotional struggle between different family members. Parth and Abhimanyu's frustration. Neil trying to pave a way of acceptance by cheering his family members. Nishka is in her own la la land and not really effected. However when in trouble, they all stand for each other.
The Udaipur track is similar to Walt Disney story.
Still okay but Akshara is not a well written character. The initial impression is that she is person who hates drama and becomes silent when everyone is in OTT mode.
Her mother spoke and she spoke loud.
The new writer is not able to sequence the story well and requires some time or his story writing is not compatible with the original concept creator.
The disconnect maybe one of the reasons as to why numbers are stable and not increasing.
The writer has to watch the old episodes and explore the sisters and brother dynamics also if he wants to add more viewers. The proposal track can be postponed.
This is clearly my POV.