Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 40

I decided to call this ‘Take my breath away’. The title seemed apt to what ShiVi do to each other 😆 and also it one of my favorite songs ever! 😳

Oh and it’s now an SS instead of an OS series! 😳

Originally posted by: Foxii

Uff their Hotness ❤️

Loved it so much... They both want eachother and both are frustrated with the situation.

Loved Shivas thoughts and the fact that he knows that he is protective and possessive ❤️❤️ and its not just because they know eachother from childhood😉

Thank you! I’m glad Shiva’s inner musings stood out to you in a chapter that was told mostly in Raavi’s pov!
He does attribute his protectiveness and possessiveness to their childhood connection now, but then he’s in denial about a lot of things! 😉😆

Originally posted by: Miss.M

No, no, I would never say it in an offensive manner (i prefer to keep quiet if i cannot say it nicely) because i completely understand the sentiment of being possessive of your work (as it should be) and I have always felt a need to be respectful to someone who is willing to share their talent with you. But sometimes (very rarely) i come across quite blunt (so I've been told) and that does cause some friction (i have been working on that so minute chance of it happening 🤞🤞)

Must be very, very rarely indeed because you’ve been so warm and effusive in your reviews to me! (But maybe I’ve been lucky that you’ve liked all my updates so far! 😆)

Bluntness is fine so long as it’s not rude (and I don’t think you’ll ever be that!). I welcome criticism when it gives me a chance to improve. I’m a beta-reader so I appreciate how much of an art giving feedback can really be without wounding another’s feelings!

Holy Mother of God!

That’s all I can say as I frantically air myself so people at work don’t think I’m going to die of a stroke!

❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵


You’ve got to continue super soon. Or I might just have a stroke.

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Holy Mother of God!

That’s all I can say as I frantically air myself so people at work don’t think I’m going to die of a stroke!

❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵


You’ve got to continue super soon. Or I might just have a stroke.

Ahhh please don't have a stroke. You have to survive until the next update! (Then maybe you can have one! 😆☺️)

Thank you for reading! 🤗

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ahhh please don't have a stroke. You have to survive until the next update! (Then maybe you can have one! 😆☺️)

Thank you for reading! 🤗

What?! What?! What?! Are you thinking what I am thinking that you are thinking about the next update?!! Is it going to happen?!!!

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

What?! What?! What?! Are you thinking what I am thinking that you are thinking about the next update?!! Is it going to happen?!!!

I know what I’m thinking and I think I know what you’re thinking. Remains to be seen if we were both right! 😆

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

I know what I’m thinking and I think I know what you’re thinking. Remains to be seen if we were both right! 😆

Stop with the teasing man please! I need to sleep. If you keep going on like this I would never shut my eyes in excitement🤣

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Stop with the teasing man please! I need to sleep. If you keep going on like this I would never shut my eyes in excitement🤣

Oops sowwie! 😳
No more talk about the next update, promise!

Good night! 😆

The title is very apt Lizzie 😆

Mostly its very relatable to Ritu 🤣

Uski saans aisi baar atki rehti hai 🤣