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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ha! Thanks Prats! I love torturing my leads (and my readers! 😆) Please don’t hit me with andas!

I had something planned for when they, eventually, if ever, kiss but your gif has given me an idea!

I fully, wholeheartedly, with every fiber of my being support the idea and implore you to finally weave in in words because it got too hot too fast and I might actually need a fan right beside me when I read something of this sort and I want it on the weekend!


Shoo! Shoo! Likho Likho!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Still building up sexual tension arent we?😆

I really loved how all the feelings and emotions were described so perfectly

Loved the ercise part

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Still building up sexual tension arent we?😆

I really loved how all the feelings and emotions were described so perfectly

Loved the ercise part


Yep still building that sexual tension building 🤣! It's a really tall one! 🤣

Hope it doesn't come crashing down when they get to the top floor! 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Lizzy darling ♥ 💖 thanks for the tag coz i missed the update....


coming back to the update...hot steamy and a lot more.....God m in office with red face and ears.....too hot to handle gal....


gym and shiva in just shorts recipe for heart attack, wild thoughts..... insanely irresistible look of his is driving me nuts...raavi and him are equals in every way and I love that....


its so hard to concentrate, breathe and remain sane .....☺️😳 raavi jaisi halat ho gai hai


Nalla is useless

maagin don't force her

both are trying to test the waters before taking a plunge

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

Lizzy darling ♥ 💖 thanks for the tag coz i missed the update....


coming back to the update...hot steamy and a lot more.....God m in office with red face and ears.....too hot to handle gal....


gym and shiva in just shorts recipe for heart attack, wild thoughts..... insanely irresistible look of his is driving me nuts...raavi and him are equals in every way and I love that....


its so hard to concentrate, breathe and remain sane .....☺️😳 raavi jaisi halat ho gai hai


Nalla is useless

maagin don't force her

both are trying to test the waters before taking a plunge


Roopa!! 🤗

Thank you! Missed your review on my previous update too, with your special gifs (but I know you read it!)

Maybe I should start marking my chapters nsfw from here on! 😆


Ye bolded part samajh nahi aaya. 😔


Both are testing the waters for sure, but both are also being held back by circumstances (namely Dev! 😆)


Thank you for bringing up the fact that he and Raavi are equal in every way. I absolutely want all the couples I write to be like this. A skewed power equation can mess things up big-time!


Thanks for reading! 🤗

Edited by LizzieBennet - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet


Yep still building that sexual tension building 🤣! It's a really tall one! 🤣

Hope it doesn't come crashing down when they get to the top floor! 🤣

I think something else is gonna come crashing down with their hot sizzling passion *cough cough*🤣

Oh and I forgot to mention I love the title! But seeing SS makes me sad, makes me think it will be short. Psychological effect you see..😭 It should be FF!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Kya haal hai? Likhna shuru hua ki nahi? 🤣


#LePsychoStalker😈

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

I think something else is gonna come crashing down with their hot sizzling passion *cough cough*🤣

Oh and I forgot to mention I love the title! But seeing SS makes me sad, makes me think it will be short. Psychological effect you see..😭 It should be FF!


I think I only have enough material for a SS 😳, going by the number of chapters I have planned.

Something else crashing down? 😲What? 😳 *puts on innocent face* 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Kya haal hai? Likhna shuru hua ki nahi? 🤣


#LePsychoStalker😈


Kuch dinon ke liye ye stalker mode off kar do! 😈

Sidetracked by another piece of writing I'm doing.

Kya karoon mera muse aisa hee hai! 😔

Ye mujhe jeene nahi deta aur tum log marne nahi dete! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet


I think I only have enough material for a SS 😳, going by the number of chapters I have planned.

Something else crashing down? 😲What? 😳 *puts on innocent face* 🤣

How many chapters?

The bed. Now dont forget to incorporate it in your story.😈

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