ShiVi FS: Mending Our Broken Hearts - Last Part: Pg 11 - Updated 27/10 - Page 7

This was beautiful❤❤

I loved their reconciliation😍😍

Flower part was awesome😍❤

Loved it🔥❤

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Shyna🤗!!!! Didn't meet expectations? This was beyond expectations!!!! I loved, loved, loved it! Your Shivi are absolute softies, and Raavi wore Shiva's ganji! The flower language is something I've always had a biase for it.... And Kaaka!!!!! La la la la laaaaaa!!!!!

Need I say more? As for the long wait, let's just say good things come to those who wait.... 😆

A beautiful ending to a beautiful story🤗❤️

A beautiful ending to a beautiful story! I loved how they talked out all their misunderstandings and reunited 💖💖

Finally the talked it out... beautiful ending

Perfect and beautiful ending to their story! They talked😃 which is the most important thing.

If only we got this in the actual show but ego is stopping them from approaching the other. Ego can never be good in a relationship.

I think I started reading this at some stage and then was away and it disappeared from the first couple of pages so I never got round to catching up with it, but I've just read all parts now and can't believe i waited so long to read it. This was really good.. The glimpses of a younger Shiva and Raavi and their bond was beautiful.. I could picture it! Then the depth of their feelings and their thought process was written so seamlessly that it seems like this should be the most natural transition to them getting back together!!!

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece! ❤️

This was beautiful ❤️

I read all the parts again and how nicely you have shaped it up!

If only we could get something like this on the show

Sighh!

Originally posted by: Kfof

This was beautiful❤❤

I loved their reconciliation😍😍

Flower part was awesome😍❤

Loved it🔥❤

Thank you Kshama!❤️

Glad you loved it 🤗

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

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Shyna🤗!!!! Didn't meet expectations? This was beyond expectations!!!! I loved, loved, loved it! Your Shivi are absolute softies, and Raavi wore Shiva's ganji! The flower language is something I've always had a biase for it.... And Kaaka!!!!! La la la la laaaaaa!!!!!

Need I say more? As for the long wait, let's just say good things come to those who wait.... 😆

Beyond expectations?!🙈 Well, I'm honored, although I still feel iffy about it 😆

Yessss, Raavi wore Shiva's ganji I wanted this from the start, it's one of my very first visions alongside her kissing him on the cheek which she slapped 🤭 that prompted me to write this FS 😛

I'm glad you loved the flower language, it was a last-minute addition. Tbh I don't get the hype about flowers lol but that's probably because I'm salty that no one's ever given them to me 🤣 meri dukh bhari kahani, mujhe bhi chahiye phool!🤪

Thank you for your sweet comments on my works Sathii! I truly appreciate them sm ❤️