š¤£š¤£last part𤣠they are definitely eligible for the pandya bros
š¤£š¤£last part𤣠they are definitely eligible for the pandya bros
I loved it
Please dont stop
Riya
U have written this beautifully
Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.
ashu's spot
I just realized I am 8 chapters behind š this will take me a lot longer to read, I will have to on the weekend but then I give lamba lamba comment š¤
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Part Four:
mhmmm here I was getting excited that Raavi called Shivaher family but then she ruins it by asking Maasi to get her married to Dev iss dobi ka kuch nahi ho sakta š
can't she see that she really doesn't give two fcuks about dev š¤¢
spb is so butthurt, not only did he not reply to raavi but he ran away to Ahmedabad 𤣠tsk tsk tsk
kya haq se collar pakda hai raavi ne maza agaya
shiva adjusted her dupataa, stop this is so cute I LOVE
shiva out here be asking the important questions š I hope dobi pays attentions and reflects
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Part Five:
Dobi š whyyyyyy š you are supposed to put effort in your and SHIVA's relationship, not dev š¤¢
lol the conversation with dev was so dry and uninteresting and thank god, dobi sees that
ugh I'm irked that Shiva isn't jealous about Dev-Raavi but I guess he never really was, sigh š I just always wanna see a jealous shiva, ignore my hormonal self
dev is useless in all aspects 𤢠both raavi and rishita deserve better, I don't know what either of them see in him
and he stood raavi up? what a goddamn jerk UGHH I despise him
but my hero shiva remembered and went to check up on her too, swoon
he wiped her tears, fed her, and remembers the little things about her - miss dobi what else do you want š
woohoo š„³ she enjoys shiva's company more than constipated's YES YES YES
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Part Six:
I wish Anita was like this in the show bekaar mein vamp banadia š¤¢
he pulled her by the waist āŗļøāŗļø and tucked her hair strand āŗļøāŗļø and you're telling me that they are devar-bhabhi? 𤣠doesn't look like it
shiva said she's a part of his world this is so adorbs
wowwwww, so dobi can marry dev but shiva can't marry anyone else mhmmmm double standards
LOL I love how shiva and raavi both left in the middle of dharama talking 𤣠aaukath dikha di š¤£
omfg YES, I was beginning to think shiva doesn't have any feelings for raavi but he has harbored them since childhood
DOBI REALIZED YES YES YES but I'm sure stupid shiva is going to fcuk it up now š this is what always happens
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Part Seven:
ladko wali galiya š¤£š¤£
she always gravitates towards him when she's scared
shiva checking his chipkali out āŗļø I like it, I very much like it āŗļø
why are raavi's friends just so awful š not a single one of them is nice or good-natured, why does she hang out with them š
and my poor baby shiva heard it all š UGHHH I hate those dyaans š”
of course raavi defended him but of course shiva didn't hear it š
more misunderstandings, I knew it š
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Part Eight:
oh raavi is tryna look red hot and she probably is āŗļø shiva toh lattoo for sure unless he rejects her because of what happened with her friends š
shiva is being so rude stop š meri raavi š just hear her out please š
I'm glad she decided to not confess, it would have been even worse for her š
AHHHH SHIVA YOU MEANIE WHY WOULD YOU SAY THAT UGHHHH š
But I can't even blame him fully because he's hurt too š
oh no my poor baby confessed š and he laughed š
he went too far š no this not done, does he not notice her tears? š
I'm way too emo now š
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will be back, I have to go to class LOL š
Aashuuuu ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
Howw did I miss thiss ??? I am soo sorryyy
Thank you soo muchhh for your comments, I loveee themm and it means a lottt šš
Dobiii raavi ko thoda time lagaa but she got it, you know bechari thodi slow hai šš
Shiva was mean, but the poor boy was hurt š
Maineee sabb think kar diyaa haii, dontt be emoo and jaldi jaldi read the updates ā¤ļø
Pixie.. I loved all the parts. I think I'd started reading it and then couldn't remember what it was called. I love this Raavi and Shiva... Slightly dobi but very forward... I was so sad when they had the misunderstanding but you finished it off quick enough... Couldn't stop laughing at Krish and Dev catching them ššš.
Continue soon! ā¤ļøā¤ļø
Thank you dearr ā¤ļø
Pre wedding shivi are š
Super awesome..ā¤ļø...Pixie.. this is soo good...everything feels so in place and beautiful...amazing dear..loved it all so much..ā¤ļø
PS. If its OK,can u add the page numbers of the rest of the chapters to the index too..it would be easier to find.
Thank you deeps ā¤ļø
I am updating the index
Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123
Where is mami?
Har laadli beti is romancing with Khula saand outside their home and she is nowhere to be seenš¤£
Bahut nainsaafi hai Prafulla Patel ke saathš
Btw nice story loved how Shiva apologize to her and Raavi do understand his point and also Krish being a cupid is all my heart ā¤ļø
Loved it waiting for next chapter
Thank you so much ā¤ļø
Maami is back š
Originally posted by: ItsmePriya
Another cute update
The mushy mushy feels is still there
Dev's role is to be a Kabab mein haddi everywhere I guess
But I did not mind him and Krish here...The teasing session was super fun. Dobi Raavi again opening her mouth at the wrong moment
The conversation has my heartā¤ļø Babies cannot stay away for a second!!
Waiting for the next update Pixieeš¤
Thank you so much prii ā¤ļø
Just Dobiii raavi things š
Babies are soo in lovee š
Updated priii
Pixie, cute update!ā¤ļø Dev Krish donon ban gaye kabab me haddiš Now I canāt wait for them to tell the rest of the family especially Mamiš¤£
Thank you Prema ā¤ļø
Updated
Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes
Aww. This was cute! Well ShiVi better reveal it to others before Krish canšš Hard to imagine him keeping a secret!
Loved to see these happy courting days of the too. And Shiva gesture in the store was ā¤ļøā¤ļø. Giving things back to her the way she imagined by redoing the set up! And the apology too was ā¤ļøā¤ļø.
Can't wait for the next part!
Thank you hails ā¤ļø
Krish didn't keep this a secret š¤
Mushy mushy shivi pata nahi kab show mai dikhenge š„ŗš„ŗ
Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa
here
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I loved it
š„°annoyed shiva x loving raaviš„° is the ship i'll drown saving š³
THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH FOR THE TAG š¤ā¤ļø
Thank you saraa ā¤ļø
Updated, read phastt phasttt š
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