Pallavi OS: The Secret - Page 2

It reminds me of Maya from Beyhadh, loving her dark and grey side.

Sunny is dhoomed 🤣he messed with the wrong person.

do continue ❤️

What awesome and exciting piece of work!

But what is this..? OS..? I do hope you give us a follow up on what comes next..

What will Farhad do next? Tell his Anna? Find out more about this secret? I would love to know what her secret is all about..

Please write a good beating down of Sunny at some point..

Wow Rie 👏👏

This is surprisingly suspicious 😆

Esa kya hai Pallavi ke past mein 😲😲

Cvs to btayenge nahi

Pls. You do the honor and write second part to unravel this mystery 😳

Awsome os Rie 🤗

Keep writing more ❤️❤️❤️

Res❤️

Unres:-

Awesome Rie❤️👏

Pallavi k past ka raaz😳, this look so mysterious.

I just realised it's an OS😒, please continue this 🥺.

Okay

I read it twice before commenting

First and foremost

A M A Z I N G

I must say

It was really really intriguing

darker colours that was making the ambiance so cold

He felt a forbidding aura surround her, sucking all the light and air from the room

saw her smiling radiantly at him.

These lines clearly outlining her façade

You nicely penned her changing demeanor...and Farhad's confusion as well

This whole got me excited for Pallavi's past more in a thrilling way.

I know titled as OS but can you please write a continuation for this...like pretty plissss 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

🤣🤣 Yeh Kisi ki OS page hai Sri 🤪

Mujhe SKR AT mein tag karti 😆

Thank you Sri ❤️❤️❤️

Ab ho gya galti se

Sorry Rie

Wow Rie

This so intriguing and amazing

Pallavi’s past has always been a mystery

Please continue if possible.

I know I am pretty late 🙊😶 but-

Rie you are brilliant👏👏 this was amazing and mysterious too 😲

Pallavi's past, finally??? Finally something on her past...I am so eager to know what you have in store for us.

Also YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO KEEP ME HANGING😭😭....tell me you are going to continue it😌 or you will have to face my wrath😡🤣

Please continue and if possible do it soon😒

And Sorry for not seeing the tag 🙊

Wonderful, please do continue if possible 🤗

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

Eeeks i am second 🤧🤧🥺

Main abhi padhkar aati hoon

Edit: okay i am backkk. Ypu know the enitre time my mouth was like "O" Because damn this was such a mystery and intriguing.

Do i get another part of it? Because i want to have one. Pallavi's past is such an amazing mystery that can be moulded into tragedy or thrill or anything happy too but the writer's never try to work on that.

*sigh*

But we have youuuuu soo yes please give me another part if you can 🥺🥺

*Shivi wale puppy dog eyes*

Oof really? I am trying this genre for the first time so your reaction is making me excited🤩

Ahh don’t have too many expectations from me... this was an impulse write because I didn’t wanna work😂 I don’t have a story planned yet. But if I continue it’ll be a ss. But you’ll have to wait a bit for it.😆 Show khatam hone se pehle pakka I’ll write something.🙈🙈