Pallavi OS: The Secret - Page 3

Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

You gave me the scare of my life! With the last sentence that fear amplified into a thousand. My god! What fabulous writing. Continue this na plz... its interesting!

Thanks! I’ll try to write something on it soon (ish). 🤗

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

Rie, my clueless kid, you have made me clueless with this one 😳

I loved how you gave a dark vibe to Pallavi without adding any extra dialogues and extra dramatics. And that conversation was so mysterious yet elegant.

Pallavi's switch of behaviour was nicely portrayed along with Farhad's fear and confusion.

This was short and an amazing reading ❤️

If you don't mind can you write a 2nd part for this 🥺🥺

Aha so I managed to confuse the confuser 😎

Dark Pallavi seems extremely interesting to me so I wrote something.

Elegant wasn’t the word I was going for but if you felt that way I’m soo happy

Originally posted by: rubys07

Res and thank you for sharing this love❤️

Unres.

Can we send this to the writers please? Pretty sure they'll never show something like this because hello, ITV and their FLs, but I can still hope🤔 I always have a thing for gray characters and how they make you root for them in a twisted sort of way. Reading this, I was legit looking at Pallavi through Farhad's eyes, and oh my your writing here created the perfect ominous ambience needed for this. Pallavi stopping at almost nothing to keep her past hidden from Raghav because she is desperate to have him and his love in her life makes so much sense and gives such an edge to her character. This is AWESOME Rie❤️❤️❤️

I'm now more worried how the show writers are gonna tackle this track because if I don't get something as intriguing, I might resort to violence😳😆

Omg thank you so much🙈 I’m glad that I was able to create that ominous ambience for someone who’s soo jovial as Pallavi!

Re the current track, idk how that will pan out but I’m sure the IF writers will give you a track of their own and it’ll definitely be amazing! Soo if the track on tv doesn’t satisfy you, just come here to improve your mood.🤩

Originally posted by: joliefemme

This is intriguing. Pls do continue the story. I'd love to read about her past

Thanks! I’ll try to think of something to continue with soon.

Originally posted by: Shri_12

What a fine piece

Pallavi double crossing Sunny was smart. Pallavi ka aisa raaz Hai, I am curious.

We want Part 2.

Thanks Shri! 🤗 Pallavi is full of secrets😈

Part 2 ke liye thoda wait karna hoga. 😆

Originally posted by: Milalal27

It reminds me of Maya from Beyhadh, loving her dark and grey side.

Sunny is dhoomed 🤣he messed with the wrong person.

do continue ❤️

You can be sure that Sunny will regret every single action against Pallavi. He doesn’t know the power this lioness holds.😌

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

What awesome and exciting piece of work!

But what is this..? OS..? I do hope you give us a follow up on what comes next..

What will Farhad do next? Tell his Anna? Find out more about this secret? I would love to know what her secret is all about..

Please write a good beating down of Sunny at some point..

Thanks Rishu for reading ❤️

I have no idea what will happen myself lol. But trust me Sunny will sunset by the end of it all. 😌 (he’ll still be alive lol but he’ll be repenting bad😂)

Originally posted by: Wilddreams

Wow Rie 👏👏

This is surprisingly suspicious 😆

Esa kya hai Pallavi ke past mein 😲😲

Cvs to btayenge nahi

Pls. You do the honor and write second part to unravel this mystery 😳

Awsome os Rie 🤗

Keep writing more ❤️❤️❤️

Thanks Neelu 🤗

I’ll try to think of something for her past soon. It’s one of the tracks I’ve wanted to see since the beginning so it’ll be very exciting for me to explore.🤩

Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

Okay

I read it twice before commenting

First and foremost

A M A Z I N G

I must say

It was really really intriguing

darker colours that was making the ambiance so cold

He felt a forbidding aura surround her, sucking all the light and air from the room

saw her smiling radiantly at him.

These lines clearly outlining her façade

You nicely penned her changing demeanor...and Farhad's confusion as well

This whole got me excited for Pallavi's past more in a thrilling way.

I know titled as OS but can you please write a continuation for this...like pretty plissss 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

Ahh thanks Shreya!🤗 So many nice words are making me shy 😳🙈

I’ll try to write something to continue soon but I think I’d like to make it a ss or something. We’ll all find out soon. 😆

Originally posted by: Srijeeta06

Wow Rie

This so intriguing and amazing

Pallavi’s past has always been a mystery

Please continue if possible.

Thank you Sri🤗

I’ll think of something soon.