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Last Part: Rightfully Mine..!!


He was not able to comprehend a thing as to why he was getting such dreams.

As in having Raavi, his SAALI as his lady love?

Really? How was that even possible?

Well at some point he cannot deny that whenever he used to be with Raavi he used to feel very happy. He used to feel complete by her mere presence and intrigued by the unique sense of humor that she possessed.

Completely opposite of the time he used to be with Anita. She never used to give him time, the couple time to spend with each other.

And on the other hand, Raavi was ever ready to accompany him. She used to feel comfortable with him being around her, forgetting the fact that she was practically accompanying a stranger who was going to be her brother-in-law.

All these incidents were clear signs that they were getting attracted to each other. And the fact that he liked this mere fact of Raavi being attracted to him too was bothering him. Because according to him he loved Anita or that was what his mind said.

But his heart refused to oblige. “Oh Really? Who are you kidding?” His heart chuckled sarcastically. “Keep lying buddy. I know who you love. And that’s Raav…”

He came out of his thoughts when he heard someone's mobile ringing. It was Raavi's mobile ringing. She quickly picked the call and impatiently asked the inevitable question. “Anita Dii? Where the hell are you?”

She was about to speak further when Shiva came and snatched the mobile from her hands and placed it on his ear. The thing he heard broke his heart into pieces.

The mobile slipped from his hands. Raavi who was confused placed her hand on his shoulder and asked softly, “Kya hua Jiju? Kya kaha Anita Dii ne?”

Shiva couldn't utter a word and just hugged her tight. He started sobbing hysterically. “No one loves me. No one Raavi. Who mere saath aisa kaise kar sakti hai? Tell me?”

Raavi was shocked and puzzled at the same time. She didn't know what was wrong and was shocked to find the strong Shiva crying in her arms. She just soothed his back lovingly and asked him, “Aap please pehle mujhe bataiye hua kya?”

“Woh kisi aur se pyaar karti hai aur ab mujhse shaadi nahi karna chahti. Woh keh rahi thi ki woh uske ex bf Parth ke paas gayi thi aur usne use propose kiya. Aur Anita ne haan keh diya. Agar aisa hi kuch karna tha to mujhse shaadi karne ke liye kyun haan kiya usne? Batao na Raavi!!”

He sobbed on her shoulder as Raavi stood dumbstruck. She knew Anita and Parth loved each other and it was about 4 months ago that they had their breakup just because of some misunderstanding.

She felt sorry for Shiva seeing his condition but somewhere her heart was happy.

Why not?

After all, God had granted her wish.

Raavi had fallen in love with Shiva at first sight and wanted to marry him. But when she came to know that he really loved her sister and had actually proposed to her, her heart pained as the thought of never getting to be the one she loves terrified her.

Whenever she used to see Shiva alone she tried to use the opportunity to spend some of the time with him, even though for the last time. As then Shiva and Anita will get married and then she'll not get any time with him.

Only she knows how much her heart pained whenever she had to call him as "Jiju". Her mouth used to taste bitter whenever she had to address him with the damn term.

She wanted him to be her saiyaan, and not her sister ka miyaan!!

She caressed his back in a soothing manner while she muttered the words of assurance which Shiva required. “Sab thik ho jayega Jiju. Aap himmat mat hariye.”

Shiva broke the hug and looked at her furiously. “Kahe ka Jiju? Ab tumhari behen kisi aur se shaadi karne wali hai. To tum mujhe Jiju kyun bula rahi ho?”

Raavi knew he was right, but she didn’t know what to say. If not Jiju, then what would she call him?

Shiva averted his eyes and started throwing things in anger and rage. The anger which he had bottled up for the sake of Raavi was finally opened, and his rage was coming out in a brutal manner. He threw every single thing which came in his way, just so he could ease the pain in his chest, more specifically his heart.

Raavi quickly walked to him to stop him. But Shiva was in no mood to stop and was about to step on a glass piece when suddenly she pulled him towards her and they both fell on the bed with her being pinned below him.

Shivi both looked at each other. She saw tears surfacing his eyes as his eyes looked pained. Tears, the pain which was of betrayal. Her heart pained, terrified that she had to see him like this and wanted to do something to help him. Anything that could ease out the pain in his eyes. She also witnessed another emotion which she was not unfamiliar with. A look of longing, longing to feel pure love.

She could feel his eyes searching hers, probably trying to figure out the depths of her feelings for him. Where her eyes reflected the pent up love for him which was hidden under the care that shown in her eyes. Her eyes spoke about her secret love and were urging him to let his pain go.

Some drops of his tears fell on her face. Shiva had the sudden urge to wipe them off. His hand flew towards her cheek without his permission, but his watch got tangled in her dupatta. He looked up as he tried to gauge her reaction to their close proximity, but she just laid there with baited breath, waiting for him to make the first move.

He gulped as he averted his eyes to his wrist, which was still tangled in her dupatta, and suddenly he knew he had a solution to his problem. He could have just removed or detangled his wrist from her dupatta and wiped his tears off her beautiful face. But he didn’t want to, and he wiped it in a different way.

He just bent down and sucked the tears that had fallen on her face. Raavi gasped in shock and quickly closed her eyes feeling his well-sculpted lips sucking the tear drops away.

He somehow felt good seeing the effect he was having on her. Some of the naughty tear drops fell on her lips as well teasing him.

He wanted to suck that tear drop too but was not sure as to how will she react to it. She opened her eyes and what he saw shocked him to the core

Her eyes spoke.

DESIRE.

She was pleading him to claim her virgin lips. Hesitation coarse through him as he didn’t wanted to take advantage of the vulnerable situation, but somewhere, he wanted to do it, go with the flow. And now being that she did have feelings for him, he was sure of his feelings too. So without wasting any time, he bent down and finally claimed her lips. Initially he sucked the salty drops of his tears completely off her lips and then started sucking the moisture of her lips with a passion he knew he adhered.

She moaned in pleasure as she was experiencing her first kiss supposedly with her ex Jiju.

Shiva deepened the kiss feeling his heartbeat increasing with each passing second as he further indulged himself in the sweetness of her mouth. He never ever felt that he could get such a pure feeling of love by just kissing someone. And that too, from someone who had just turned ex-saali for him.

He pushed his tongue deep inside the contours of her mouth, making her moan more loudly and squirm under him as she could feel funny things happen within her body.

He was tasting her mouth to the fullest when suddenly he came back to his senses. He was just betrayed by his would-be fiancee and here he was kissing her sister.

Wasn't he taking her advantage?

He quickly broke the kiss and stood up. Raavi got confused and disappointed as why did he break the kiss? He was feeling hell guilty for his actions and just when he was about to go away, Raavi held his hand. “Kahan jaa rahe ho?” she asked softly, dreading his response as his actions clearly declared the regret he felt for his actions.

Shiva didn't reply and kept his back facing towards her. How could he face her after this big blunder he had just made?

She got up and came in front of him.

“Kahan jaa rahe ho?” She repeated, her throat getting clogged up.

“Kahin bhi bus yahaan se dur. It's better if I leave. I'm sorry for that kiss. Woh sirf ek mistake thi. I just got carried away. I'm really sorry..”

Before he could say any further there was a loud noise and she planted a slap on his face. She was crying now and she got hold of his collars and jerked him hard. “How dare you? How dare you to say that it was a mistake? Jabki mujhe pata hai ki woh kitni beautiful feeling thi, mere liye, tumhare liye. Meri first kiss itni special hogi, maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha.”

That's when he looked up, shocked at the disclosure, and saw her tears. It pained his heart to see her tears.

He knew she loves him but wanted to hear it from her own mouth.

“Kyun? Aisa kyun keh rahi ho? I don’t deserve the love which I crave for. Tumhari behen ne to mujhe tissue paper use karke ki tarah fek diya. Phir tum uss kiss ko ek beautiful feeling kyun keh rahi ho?”

She fumed at the confusion in his voice. “Kyun keh rahi hun? Kyunki mein aap se..” she halted for a second in the dilemma whether to tell him or not.

“Tum mujhse?” he asked curiously, further pressing her buttons.

“Mein aapse pyaar karti hun. Abhi se nahi tabhi se jab se maine aapko pehli baar dekha tha. Mujhe laga ki mujhe aapke aur Anita Dii ke beech nahi aana chahiye isilye mein chup rahi. Apna pyaar bhi chupaya taki aap Anita Dii ke saath khush reh sako. Aapke saath time isilye spend karti thi kyunki aapke saath rehkar mujhe bahut khushi milti thi aur mein aapke saath comfortable bhi feel karti thi. Mein zindagi bhar ek introvert rahi hun. Aaj tak Maine kabhi kisi ladke se baat nahi ki hai. Par jabse aap meri life mein aaye ho, mujhe aisa lagta hai ki mein voh saari chizen karun jo aap karte ho. Bhale hi woh kitni bhi dangerous kyun na ho.” She just let out her feelings in a go.

Shiva was dumbstruck at her confession.

That's when his heart pumped in and barked in victory. “Ab bolo? Kya tum Anita se pyaar karte ho?”

“Nahi” His response was rather quick. Raavi was puzzled as to why he suddenly shouted "Nahi"? Then she thought maybe he doesn't want this relationship with her and sadly started walking away.

Shiva was finally happy that he found his true love but he saw her walking away looking all sad.

Shiva panicked and quickly went to her and pinned her to the nearby wall.

“Ab tum kahan jaa rahi ho?”

“Aapko mein pasand nahi na? Isilye nahi bola aapne. Its Okay. Mein hi chali jati hun. I promise ki mein aapko kabhi bhi disturb nahi karungi. But mein hamesha yaad rakhungi ki aap first the jisse maine kiss kiya tha… aur…”

Shiva was not able to talk between and thus he pasted their bodies together and swiftly claimed her lips again into a mind-numbing kiss.

Raavi was shocked to find him kissing her. But as time passed she too responded to his kiss circling her arms around his neck and his hands caging her petite waist. Pushing him more into herself.

Both were kissing passionately when Shiva again got a reality check. He first needs to confess himself too.

“Are meri Raajdhaani express pehle sun to lo ki mein kya kehna chahta hun.”

Raavi just panted as she tried to even her breaths. She swiped her tongue over her lips and raised her one eyebrow as if asking "what"?

Shiva was momentarily distracted by the simple gesture, but shook his head, before his mind went down the gutter. “Mein yeh kehna chahta hun ki…”

She was looking at him curiously, waiting for him to continue, or probably finish the sentence. Shiva smiled and pecked her nose and just chuckled. “I love you too..!” and he winked at her.

Raavi was more than happy and she hugged him tightly. She nuzzled her nose deep in his neck and sighed happily.

“Sachhi?”

Shiva chuckled and returned the hug. “Haan muchii..!!”

Raavi's smile faded and she broke the hug, her face pale. “Par Anita Dii? Aap to usse pyaar karte ho na?”

Shiva smiled again at her innocent question and cupped her cheeks. “Raavi Maine ab jana hai ki maine kabhi Anita se pyaar kiya hi nahi. Woh bas ek attraction thi mere liye, aur kuch nahi. Pyaar to mein tumse karta hun. Mein bhi tumhare saath rehta hun to bahut khush rehta hun. Tumhare saath to waqt ka pata hi nahi chalta tha. Aur har baar isi confusion mein rehta tha ki mein aakhir Anita se pyaar karta bhi hun yaa nahi. Lekin tumhare saath job hi maine feel kiya hai, mere saare doubts clear ho gaye hain. So ab mujhe koi confusion nahi hai. I love you only, no one else. Thank you for making me realize that.” He confessed as he rubbed his nose with hers and smiled lovingly at her.

They stayed in that position as they experienced pure bliss in each other's arms.

After some time they were sitting on the couch with Shiva side-hugging Raavi.

“So?”

Shiva opened his eyes, confused at her question. “So?”

“So yeh ki aap apni would be wife se shaadi karenge yaa..”

“Yaa?, He nudged her cheek teasingly.

S(smacking his arm):Yaa apni SAALI se?

“Hmmm let me think..” He kept his finger on his chin, acting as if he was thinking.

Raavi's mouth was shaped in O as how come he's thinking so much? She frowned and was about to get up when he pulled her again and this time she landed on his lap.

“Of course apni SAALI se..” he said huskily and placed his lips near her ear.

She shivered at the proximity. He nuzzled in her neck. “Tumhe koi problem to nahi hai na?”

She tried hard to stifle her moan and just nodded her head in negation.

“Good, Waise bhi mein apne bachon ko kya kahunga?”, placing a moist peck on her chin.

Raavi moaned this time as she smiled shyly at the reference. Their Bacche he meant?

“Kya?” she asked nevertheless.

“Offo… Yahi ki chala tha Gharwali se shaadi karne aur..”

She came out of her trance and looked at him curiously, “Aur?”

“Meri SAALI hi ban gayi meri GHARWALI ..!!”



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Edited by Dandellion_22 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

This was so cute ending❤❤❤

Their confession😍😍🙈❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Woah!!! That was a rollercoaster of emotions...

Good one👍🏼

PS:I wish Anita Gaumbi ke Saath bhaag jati....🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

Saali bani gharwaali!! 🥳❤🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

That's really nice ending.

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