Shivi TS: 98% Compatible?? ( Last Part Updated!!!)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hello Everyone!!

A very short TS on Shivi, and this is going to be a short meaning, just 2 parts.

However, if you guys like it, I can probably add more parts if required!!

Anyways, Happy Reading!




Shivi TS: 98% Compatible??



Part 1: Clutching the Heartstrings


A boy was thinking about his special someone in particular as he strummed the strings of his guitar in his hands.

Suddenly he started singing his favorite song.

(Guys play the song "Soniye" from the movie "Heartless")

The boy had his eyes closed and one image appeared in front of his eyes as if he was finding that someone special for himself. A smile appeared on his lips as that someone's face appeared in his mind.

He opened his eyes and as he was sitting on his couch, he got up and went to the window with a lost look on his face but still having a faint smile on his lips.

He starred at the scar on his arm which was healing slowly. He remembered that incident when that someone special had saved him. He went into flashback.

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The boy was roaming in one of the malls finding something decent to purchase as a gift to present it to his Mom and Dhara Bhabhi on the occasion of Mother’s Day. As he was walking he didn't notice that from the opposite direction there was rushing away from the person from whom he had stolen the thing.

He bumped with the boy and the thing which the thief had stolen fell on the floor with the boy getting alerted and quickly took a hold of the thief.

The boy was holding the thief with his arms around the neck of the thief. Within minutes a girl came near them huffing and puffing.

The boy froze as the girl clutched her mouth to stop herself from panting. He had never seen such a breathtaking girl. The girl huffed as she tried to catch her breath. Once she was okay, she just slapped the thief hard and grabbed him by his collar. “Uff bhaga bhaga ke pareshaan kar diya. S**LE chor !! Kahaan bhaage jaa raha tha? Itni asaani se chod deti tujhe? Kahaan hai mera keemti gift?”, she jerked the thief's collar as rage accumulated in her eyes.

The thief struggled to release himself from the hold that both the boy and the girl had on him, but to no avail.

"Acha hua aapne isse pakad liya Mister. Warna pata nahi mera keemti saman leke yeh gadheda kahan ghum ho jata." The girl thanked him as she still had her glare trained at the thief.

But the boy wasn't listening and was just gawking at the girl. His hold on the thief's neck had loosened and taking advantage of this, the thief quickly took out his knife and directed it towards the boy's arm thus making a deep cut.

“Dekh lunga tujhe hero.” And he ran away for his dear life.

The girl saw the cut and quickly came to the boy's aid. She was tending to his wound slowly blowing air on that cut.

Whereas the boy was just looking at her with an unknown emotion. She tied a handkerchief to his wound. “Aap please kisi Doctor ke paas jaake ache se first aid karwa lijiye. Warna septic ho jayega. And meri help karne ke liye, Aapka bahut bahut Thank you!!” she smiled at him one last time and walked away.

The boy came out of his trance seeing her retreating figure. He had a dreamy smile on his face and he looked at the handkerchief which the girl had tied on his arm.

He smiled once again as he stared back in the direction the girl had vanished. He shrugged his shoulders as he missed the chance of knowing the name of the girl, but at least got to meet the enchantress nevertheless.

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The boy was lost in his thoughts but his trance broke when he heard a voice followed by claps praising him. “Nice song Jiju!!”

“Are Raavi!! Tum yahaan?”, the boy looked up, surprised to find Raavi standing there.

“Haan Shiva jiju mein. By the way aap bahut acha gate hain!!”, she praised him with her bright smile to which Shiva just chuckled and nodded in acknowledgment.

Yup. Sadly the guy was none other than Shiva!!!

"Thank you Anita aa gayi kya?" he asked hopefully, as he walked to where Raavi was standing.

Raavi just apologetically looked at Shiva and nodded her head in negation.

Shiva's face fell and he sighed as his jaw clenched.

"It's nearly 4 hours that I'm waiting for her. Mujhe bula ke khud kahan gayab ho gayi hai??", he was getting angry as time was passing.

Raavi sensed the mixture of anger+pain in his voice. She also sighed. Her sister Anita was soon to be getting married to Shiva and there was no single day she had taken things seriously. She has always taken him for granted.

However, Raavi was always there to Shiva's aid or you can say for his company. She usually asked Anita to accompany him to visit places or go out for dinner but alas!

Anita would use to turn a deaf ear to all the advices she gave. Raavi just wondered how can anyone not like Shiva's company? He was such a kind-hearted and humble person. He was a little bit short-tempered but from the day he had met Raavi he had started to calm down. Such was the effect Raavi had on him.

But if his anger calmed because of Raavi, it always flared because of Anita's antics.

Shiva was mistaken when he had met Anita in the mall that day.

Yup "the girl" was none other than Anita.

He had thought that Anita was the one who was meant to be for him. And so after meeting again with her they had started hanging around. Even Raavi used to be with them.

Anita used to get bored but Raavi used to enjoy it the most.

After some months Shiva and Anita’s parents decided to get them married. Both were happy. At least Shiva was since he was finally getting married to his girl.

But the question still lingered in Shiva and Raavi's mind.

Was Anita really HIS girl??


Index:

Part 1: Above

Part 2

Last Part


How was it?

Anita and Shiva, ye kab hua🤣

I cringed too, at the mention of writing or probably imagining Raavi calling Shiva as Jiju😭

Do let me know if you know what will happen in the next part😆

Comments are always welcomed🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ohh goddd🤣🤣

It is so different story❤️❤️

Shiva Jiju and Anita😆👏🤣

Cant wait to read further ❤❤❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wasn't expecting this 😂😂 but do update ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Shiva and anita??? 🤣🤣🤣🤣

This is damn interesting and something different ❤️❤️

Do continue 🤩🤩

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Okay, I am still reeling in the shock of Anita and Shiva. Yeah this was sooooooo cringe man! When Raavi was like Shiva Jiju, I was wait Anita ended up marrying a guy much younger than him? I am assuming that this is AU, they're all about the same age.😂😂


And then Anita can be what Dev was for Raavi in other stories.😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lol.. Shiva and Anita! That's new 😆

It's interesting though! Looking forward to more❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I trust your work so much that without reading I am saying pls write more parts....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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aye bhai aye..........ye oily and shiva😲 mera to soch soch ke dimag dard ho gaya......🤣

cant even imagine.......

and raavi saying jiju to shiva was 😲 too.......m sure they will end up together

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oml yeh kya tha? 😆 when I read Raavi calling Shiva jiju, my eyes were about to fall out of their sockets 😯😹 and then Anita came in the picture and I received an even bigger shock 😹😂


A different take on their story in an AU world! Interesting 🐱 Bas end mein ShiVi saath rahe 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice starting 👏

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