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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Am i dreaming

Shiva and Anita

Aaj tak to main Gaoily supremacy ko promote kar rahi thi

this one blows my mind

But I am sure Shivi will end up together

Lets see how you unfolds it

Awesome waiting for next update

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Oml yeh kya tha? 😆 when I read Raavi calling Shiva jiju, my eyes were about to fall out of their sockets 😯😹 and then Anita came in the picture and I received an even bigger shock 😹😂


A different take on their story in an AU world! Interesting 🐱 Bas end mein ShiVi saath rahe 😳


Thank you so muchsmiley27

I knew you guys will react like this while reading Raavi call Shiva as jiju🤣

Yaar, Shivi is always an endgame for me, so chill, don't worry, they are gonna end up together

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Nice starting 👏

Cont soon


Thank you so muchsmiley27

Updating soonish😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

Subah subah kya murder karne ka mood tha tumhara...😭

By the way loved the concept...just the way Raavi liked Dev ....I got to see what would have happened if it was the other way round and Shiva liked Anita....though the idea of them makes me want to go🤢....But I am gonna look forward to how things unfold.Great concept👍🏼

Please update Soonish♥️


Thank you so muchsmiley27

Kya yaar Maya, thoda to different hona chahiye na Don't worry next part mein mood thoda theek ho jayega🤣

Exactly, samjhdar ladki samjh gayi🤗

Yeah, the idea looks very🤢

Glad you liked the concept😆

Updating soonish😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Palak2812

Anita and Shiva is 🤢

But I like your writing and really hope I don't have to read much about Shiva and Anita being romantically involved or in relationship.


Thank you so muchsmiley27

Yeah, I know re, But don't worry, I am a hardcore Shivi believer, so you won't have to witness their romance😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Am i dreaming

Shiva and Anita

Aaj tak to main Gaoily supremacy ko promote kar rahi thi

this one blows my mind

But I am sure Shivi will end up together

Lets see how you unfolds it

Awesome waiting for next update


Thank you so muchsmiley27

Hehehe, all here are shocked like you🤣

Gaoily supremacy, GauRa ka kya hoga fir🤣

Yes, absolutely correct

Updating soonish😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Dandellion_22


Thank you so muchsmiley27

Yeah, I know re, But don't worry, I am a hardcore Shivi believer, so you won't have to witness their romance😆

Thankyou soo much for this mercy 🤣


Btw when r u updating next ?

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Part 2


Shiva had completely fallen for Anita's beauty, enamored by her facade of politeness, which was not visible to him. Whereas Anita, the gold digger, was happy because she was getting married to the rich businessman who had the reputation of single-handedly owning the chains of Pandya Stores in Ahmadabad. And after marriage, she was happy that she will not have to live with his family and rather in the big city of Ahmadabad. Raavi was also happy for Shiva and Anita but somehow she felt that something inside her broke. She was feeling hell sad and the worst was she herself didn't know the reason behind her sadness.

Raavi came out of her thoughts when she heard Shiva desperately trying to call Anita and was banging his fist on the wall in irritation.

“WTF is this? 20 baar call try kar chuka hun uska. Kahan hai woh? Where has she gone Raavi? Sirf tumhari wajah se mein yahaan ruka tha, iss intezaar mein ki woh aa jayegi. Thoda late hi sahi, par aa jayegi. Par woh maharani pata nahi kahaan hai. Agar nahi milna tha to milne bulaya hi kyun. Meri waqt ki koi keemat nahi hai kya uski nazron mein?”, he roared as he placed his phone on his ear for the 21st time, again trying to call Anita.

Raavi kept numb and knew his anger was justified. What he didn’t know was Anita had created yet another complication in their relationship. She went into a flashback as she remembered what exactly had happened…

Flashback.

5 HOURS AGO.

“Baby kya kar rahe ho? Busy ho kya?”, Anita played with a tendril of her hair as she laid on the bed beside an engrossed Raavi, who was reading a book.

“Nahi Baby. Bilkul bhi nahi. Kyun? Meri yaad aa rahi thi?”, Raavi could hear the flirtiness in his voice and the crack in her heart deepened as she heard him address Anita as ‘Baby’.

“Haan”, she just made faces as she rolled her eyes at his endearment. Raavi sighed as she knew Anita was never a fan of endearments, and right now she didn’t like being called ‘Baby’ even though it was coming from her would-be husband.

What a dumb girl!

“Mujhe bhi tumhari bahut yaad aa rahi thi…”

“Itni hi yaad aa rahi thi, To yahaan aa jao na. I'm missing you…” she could almost hear the lie in Anita’s words, but stayed mum as she didn’t want to come in between them.

“Okay!! I'm coming!!” And the call was disconnected. Anita quickly got up to get ready so that she can enjoy the lavish date with Shiva.

But 1 hour passed and still, there was no sign of Shiva. Anita was getting angry by the passing minute. As she gazed at the clock, realizing that it was almost 2 hours that he had told her that he was coming, but he was still not there. And he was not picking her calls also.

“Go to hell. Nahi aana tha to mana kar deta. I’m coming bolke abhi tak nahi aaya. Huh, mein sirf iske liye thodi na baithi hun. Main jaa rahi hun.” She declared as she started making her way out.

“Are Anita Dii, Aap kahaan jaa rahi ho ab? Jiju nahi aaye hain abhi tak. Agar aap bahar gayi aur jiju aa gaye to?”

“Let him wait then. My time bahut precious hai. Karega intezaar aur kya.”

With this Anita left angrily. Raavi sighed at her dumb sister for her poor choice. Did she felt that spending time with her friends was much more important than spending time with her would-be husband?

Minutes later the doorbell rang. Raavi guessed it to be Shiva. So she went and opened the door. As she opened the door she saw someone holding a bouquet of red roses.

That person without showing his face hugged Raavi. He was crushing her body literally swiping her off her feet hanging her in the air and was twirling her in the air.

Raavi knew the instance that person touched her that it was Shiva.

And Shiva without realizing that it was not his would-be wife but his SAALI instead. And he just started to blabber out apologies to her, thinking of her as Anita.

“So sorry baby!!! I know I'm late. Actually mein traffic mein fass gaya tha. Isilye to compensate karne ke liye mein tumhare favorite red roses laya hun.” He forwarded the roses to her while clutching her shoulders tightly.

But in response to his apologies, instead of Anita’s angry voice, he just heard the sound of someone sneezing.

He got confused and broke the hug only to find Raavi sneezing very badly while pulling her face away from the roses.

Seeing this he understood that maybe Raavi was allergic to roses and he quickly threw the bouquet away and quickly took out his handkerchief and gave it to Raavi.

She took the handkerchief and rubbed her nose with it. Then their eyes met and they got embarrassed realizing that just moments back they were hugging as lovers do. Those few minutes back then felt as if long-lost lovers were reuniting.

Raavi blushed at the thought whereas Shiva was just staring everywhere but at her, trying his best to hide his flaming cheeks.

After some awkward silence, he gazed at her and scrapped the back of his neck. “Woh I'm really sorry Raavi. Mujhe laga ki Anita hai isilye tumhe maine waise hug kiya.”

Raavi smiled at his embarrassing state and assured him. “It's okay Jiju!! I understand. Ho jaati hai kabhi kabhi.”

Shiva just smiled at her gratefully.

“Par Anita Dii to chali gayi.” She looked apologetically at him.

“What? Par kahan?” The surprise in his voice didn’t go unnoticed.

“Pata nahi. Unhone mujhe kuch nahi bataya. Are aap khade kyun hai baithiye na.” She tried to lie through her teeth, just for the sake of her sister.

“Cut that. Kab tak aayegi woh? Mujhe usse kuch important baat karni thi. Acha hua usne mujhe khud hi bula liya tha.”

“But ab kya fayda Jiju? Woh toh chali gayi. Aur aapko toh pata hai na kitni jiddi hain woh.”

Shiva just nodded, lost deep in his thoughts. “Hmm, you are right. But that's okay. Mein uska intezaar karunga.” He smiled slightly.

“Pakka?”

“Positive”

“Okay As you wish!!”

Flashback ends.

Somehow remembering the flashback Raavi blushed as once again their hug flashed through her eyes.

Shiva saw this and he also blushed and for a moment his anger had subsided. He was just busy in looking at his SAALI and as usual, his dilemma increased to a new extent.

Now you all must be thinking about which dilemma

Then let me clarify it.

Shiva remembered the dream which he saw last night

DREAM:

Shiva was clutching her waist.

His lady love was trying to get out of his hold as she was in a naughty mood and was giggling at his expense. But Shiva was smart himself and had trapped his ladylove perfectly in his arms.

"Chodo na Shiv, mujhe dard ho raha," she struggled as she faked her pout only to get out of his hold. But Shiva knew better.

"Nope mera mood nahi hai."And swiftly placed his lips on hers. Their kiss turned more passionate. They were lost in the moment cherishing the intimacy they were having. They broke the kiss as they were short of breath.

His lady love had turned the deepest shade of red. And seeing this he just smiled and resumed kissing her neck by keeping his hands on her bareback.

His ladylove moaned in pleasure.

He continued his assault some more when his lady love pushed him away. "Ab pakad ke dikhao mujhe?" showing her tongue to him, she ran away.

"RAAVI!! you just wait now. Mein to tumhe pakad hi lunga, Uske baad kya hoga yeh tu soch bhi nahi sakti."

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And BAM.

He came out of his Dream.

He just gulped not able to believe what he saw further in his dream.

And if this was not enough, he had another dream, and in that also Raavi was present!!!

And they were MARRIED!!!

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Shiva felt dizzy as he struggled to open his eyes. He saw an almost exhausted Raavi sitting beside him on the chair while holding his right hand within her tender ones. He couldn't resist the urge to reach out to her and touch her face, so he did exactly that. Raavi shivered at the sudden contact.

He whispered a feeble, 'RAAVI!' to have her wake up, and as She heard his voice, her eyes flew open and she quickly jolted forward for the Doctor who was already coming in. They were pleased to find her Shiva awake and was staring weakly at her.

"SHIVA!!!!" She exclaimed in happiness as happy tears surfaced in her eyes.

"Yes Baby!!! Mein abhi zinda hun." He winked as he gazed into her teary eyes.

"I'm sorry Shiva! Meri wajah se tumhari yeh halat. Mujhe woh bike chalane ki zid nahi karni chahiye thi. Aur tum bhi, jab jaante the ki mujhe bike chalani nahi aati, fir bhi mere peeche baithe. Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata to mein to marr.."

She was silenced when Shiva placed his index finger on her lips. "Apne ko blame karne ki aadat nahi gayi na teri. Teri wajah se kuch nahi hua. Maine zid ki thi na tere peeche baithne ki. Toh yeh meri galti hai. Aur isme kya burai hai ki meri Biwi ko meri bike chalani thi? Mujhe aati thi isiliye to main tere peeche baitha na. Meri galti ke liye tu kyun sorry bol rahi hai?"

"Par tu toh meri zid puri kar raha tha na. I'm sorry Shiva." She wept while clutching his hand close to her chest.

"Oh God!!! Koi iss ladki ko samjhaye ki duniya mein aisa koi pati nahi hoga jo apne Biwi ke peeche baith ke uske saath romance nahi karna chahta ho. Mein to bass.."

"Haan, Tum to bass kya? Usi romance ki wajah se accident bhi hua humara. Mujhe to 2-3 kharoch hi aayi, par tu toh direct behosh hi ho gaya tha." She defended herself, suddenly realizing that indeed it was Shiva's fault and not hers that he was hurt.

But as he remembered the way his arms had sneaked in, trying to clutch her waist in his warm embrace and nuzzling her neck, she hit his arm as he attempted to tease her. Shiva yelped in pain as he jumped at the impact of her hit.

"Oopsss I'm sorry Shiva. Tujhe lagi toh nahi na?"

Shiva smiled at her concern. "Nahi meri jaan!! Bass tune jo uss din jo tune mujhe tujhe bazaar mein kiss karne ke liye pinch kiya tha, Uska badla le raha tha." He winked and gave his usual trademark smirk. "Par ab toh mein tujhe touch kar hi sakta hun na."

"You!! Thik ho jao tum fir batati hun tujhe.Ab toh shaadi ho gayi hai ab dekhti hun kaise bachte ho."

"Aaram se plan kar le kya karne wali hai .Mujhe meri tigress ko control karna aata hai. Aur abhi tune ne toh kaha tha ki ek baar mein uth jaun toh mein jo bolunga tu woh karegi. Toh uske liye suhagraat bhi toh baki hai. Abhi humari suhagraat pending hai, Teri Masima ne bigaad di thi. Yaad hai??" He exclaimed, his voice dropping huskily.

Raavi turned tomato red and he just chuckled. "Haaye Iss blush ke liye mein kuch bhi kar sakta hun. Mujhse toh ab intezaar nahi hota humari first night ke liye." He winked incredulously.

Shivi came back to their senses as someone cleared his throat. The Doctor was smiling at them. "Mr Pandya aap pehle thik ho jaiye. Phir aapko jo karna hai aap kar sakte hai." He looked teasingly at Raavi who blushed yet again. "Filhal toh aapka check up karna padega mujhe."

"Of course Doc," also looking at Raavi and smirking at her blushing face.

Raavi face palmed trying to hide her blush The Doctor did the check-up and left. She got up from her chair and kissed his forehead. "I love you Shiva!!" happy tears flowing down her cheeks.

"I love you too Jaan!!" he whispered back.

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And Bam

He was not able to understand the absurdity of the situation. On one hand, Anita was trying to test his patience, and on the other hand, he was getting more and more attracted to his Saali, Raavi who was so innocent and pure, his heart leaped out from his chest every time their eyes meet.

What exactly should he do now?

Oh God!! Please help!!!



How was it?

What do you think will happen next?😲

Will Shiva-Anita get married?🤢

What will happen to Raavi?😭

Comments are always welcomed🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

I know u r nice so won't make them marry each other.


Shivi r gonn last.

Also Shiva is already dreaming about her.



Anita being selfish nothing new.

Baby eww that too Anita 🤮

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

I am loving how the story is prgressing😍😍

Shiva's dream for raavi ❤

They both are affected by each other😍😍

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