CHUPKE CHUPKE...!! SHIVI DRABBLE

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Hey you guys❤️

Hope you all doing welll...

Hush ...I m back again after so long with a drabble

*ittu 🤏 sa bada lgega bs *...but i really hope u'll like it...!!


Happyy reading ❤️


Shiva and raavi are busy in staring each other. just a few moments ago they are so close that are able to feel each other warmth breath...

The way he pulled her..the way their eyes met...the way they are sank in each other comforts..

They came back in senses when heard footsteps of someone coming towards them, not want any other third person to see them in awkward situation.

They parted away..soon they saw dhara bhabhi coming towards them..hands fisted tightly seems like she is holding something.

She extended her hand towards raavi and firmly said "yeh le raavi aane jane ke liye paise"

Raavi is stunned she is looking at dhara with questioning eyes

"why she is giving me this??"

"i have no right on these money right??"

Admist all the blunder of questions she simply said "nahi dhara di muje iski zaroorat nahi h mere paas paise h"

She steal the glances of shiva and dhara...with the force smile of her face she took her bag and leave for college along with krish.

Meanwhile for shiva there is something which is haunting him...

"why he is feeling restless??"

Mending his heart, he is about to leave when dhara stop him at point and said

"yeh paise bhi kitne din chalayegi yeh? Saare adhikar or haq to cheen liye h tune ab tujhse toh maang nahi skti na or na mujhse legi..!!"

He turned towards her and said in low tone as if he has no soul left..he is ready to listen everything

"bhabhi apko jo bhi bolna h boldo mei sun raha hu"

"mei bas itna bolungi ki shiva na ek number ka nayalak ladka h jisne apni zid ke chakkar m ek heere ko kho diya"

"bhabhi in sab baato ke liye der ho chuki h"

"shiva..jab jaago tab hi shavera"

"har kisso ke hisso m subah nahi hoti...chod dijiye in baato ko" his eyes are in grief,guilt..he want to sortout everythimg but letting it go....without wasting a second he rushed for shop as he couldn't able to answer all the questions..

Raavi is back at home..she freshen up herself and go in kitchen to manage the chores.. She gave food to Suman..she is not talking to him well these days but raavi is not taking bad things about her..all she know is that she is here to take care of dhara di..

Shiva dev and gaumbi are back from shop..rishita is helping raavi for namesake..

They both went out and serve them food

"Raavi tu bhi beth" gaumbi said breaking the silence

Her eyes are searching for space but there is no little space left for her to sit and eat her food peacefully

Shiva notice that, his eyes are only following her eyeballs and he has the ability to study her chipkali face expressions "yeh meri chipkali bhi na ittu si h par jagah chahiye dinosaur ki tarah"

no wait what he said "meri"shiva control yourself.

He shift silently himself in order to not to catch in anyone eyes otherwise they will leave no chance in pulling his legs...but unfortunately krish is there who has habit to collect the gossip and for that he kept his eyes on world's most complicated couple his shiva and raavi bhabhi.

"arey yeh kya kar raha h tu ese sarak kyu raha h..koi probelm h kya" he said mischievously

"aey gadhedha zyda bolega na toh itna marunga na ki bakwass karna bhul jayega" he said continuing with shifting and now there is enough space for his chipkali to sit and have her food..

"ohhhh ab smjha tu bhabhi ke liye jagah bana raha tha bhaut sahi ja rahe ho"

Raavi looked at him who is averting his gaze..his ears colour are changed from peach to red "damn this boy is too shy"

"bhabhi dekh kya rahi ho betho na" krish scream

"jab tak mei nhi bolunga isko samaj nahi aayega" he murmured inside his breath he look up at her who is already looking at him with confusion "why did he do this?

"khana ke liye mana nahi h bethkar kha sakti h" he said in soft tune as much he can and then to ignore the created awkwardness he got busy himself with eating.

Everyone gestured for her to sit and quietly sat down with her plate...It's been months since she ate food while sitting with Shiva...

Today she is eating and that too shiva himself said but why..??

"He hate me than why he is behaving like this...is he...no raavi control yourself "

"Dhara di ko pregnancy m problem na ho isliye m isse lad rahi or na yeh ...raavi tu zyda sochti h..mat soch khana pr dhyan de" she by herself.

They all are resting in their respective rooms..shiva is sleeping in room and raavi in aangan..to avoid their nok-jhok they are doing this..shiva want her to be in room but this mamikibehenkibeti is too stubborn.

"Abhi to kamre m voh bhootnath hoga kya pata utha hua ho toh ..nahi abhi nahi jaungi subah jab so raha hoga..haan yeh thk h" raavi said lying on cot counting the stars..and soon fall asleep.

Raavi silently jumped in room..she love this room..afterall she had so many memories attached with this room along with her shiva.

"Her" na nakko..

She saw him sleeping like a baby..peacefully in the corner of couch.

"Sota hua itna pyara lagta h yeh..kitna shant.. hmesa ese shant nahi reh sakta kya humesa 100bhoot sawar rehte h iske" she said with a bright smile on her face. Then realise what she said jst a moment before "shiva pyara"

She jerked off the thought. And open the cupboard silently and in slow motion ,not to disturb his sleep.

She took her certificates, books, clutch and is about to close the cupboard that accidentally a book slip from her hand and fall on ground..

Shiva choked at once due to sudden noise in the hollow room...but calm as soon as he saw the beauty in front of him. She is wearing a blue colour outfit with some accessories. Her hairs are straight and they are waving in air..the smudged kohl is adding more depth to her eyes, the lips and cheeks are of some colour..as she is blushing hard with his gaze. He averted it..

"So..sorry teri neend kharab kari, bas kch saman leni aayi thi, galti se gir gaya intentionally nahi kiya" she said and leave the room.

His eyes following her path...he must be happy that the first person he saw in morning is his chipkali but why he is not so..something is pricking in his heart.

The question arise is that "why she spoke like a stranger with him..??"

"He know she didn't do that intentionally but what's the point in mentioning it....maybe just because he misunderstood her everytime.

Now it was everyday. Raavi used to go to college everyday. She used to come everyday.. Everyday gaumbi and dhara ask her for money but she used to refuse..

Shiva was coming home after closing the shop and he was thinking something.

"Chipkali ke paas jitne paise the voh toh khatam hogye honge na or voh mami toh h hi kanjus"

"Mei puchu kya usse??"

"Nahi agar ushe chahiye hote toh maang leti na"

"Pan voh kyu mangege tujhse shiva tune hi toh rishta tod diya h..!!"

In morning, he is murmuring the song and took his first step in room when he saw her, sitting on bed and doing something with papers. He hide behind the door...

"Haan yeh bhi hogaya" she said with a bright smile on face

"Ek min voh stamp...clutch m hogi" she get and took the clutch and takeout the stamp and paste it on the folder.

"Done ab jldi se jati hu varna late hojaungi"

Thinking about the moment...Her eyes fell on the clutch .. she picked it up and found only few notes.

"Arey paise kaise khatam hogye itni jaldi..meine toh faltu kharcha bhi nhi kiya ruhi, simran ki tarah..!!"

She again count the money 50,10,10 ..

"Bas itne hi h jaane ka toh hojayega par vapis kese aaungi..agar pedal aayi toh late hojayega..or agar aa bhi gyi toh kal ke liye"

Shiva is watching all this and murmured in anger "yeh gadhedi pedal aane ki bt kar rahi h...phoolkumari toh h karne chali somnath ki ser"

Raavi got upset and it was clearly visible on her face..

"Raavi..." dhara call her

"Dhara di bula rahi h unhe kch chahiye toh nahi" she got up put all the stuff back in cupboard and hurriedly leave the room...after her departure he came in room..

"Yeh chipkali h na bht ziddi h..zaroort hogi par bolegi nahi...shayad bhul gyi h humara Talaq abhi hua nahi h voh abhi bhi meri....." *paused*

He looked around to make sure that no one is watching him and he quietly opened the cupboard... picked up her clutch .... opened it and placed the note of 2k in it..

"Kuch din toh chal jayenge fr bd m mei himmat karke pooch lunga" he said with a smile of satisfaction.

He is about to turned around and close the cupboard that raavi come as fast as bullet train and collide with him. She jerked off herself to maintain the distance but her feet slip and is about to taste the ground that she feels the warmth palm around his waist she squeeze her eyes in fear and put her hands on his arms...he pulled her close to him...she again feel his breath and already guess the proximity they had right now....she opened her eyes and found him staring straight in eyes...their nose are almost touching...any moment from one side could result in kiss...which they want...they are craving for it...but this is not the right time, they both know they have issues in their life, they couldn't enter in private space without each other permission.

She stole the sight from him and slowly pushed him away from her..

There is awkwardness in the surrounding...she is busy in reading the walls and he is busy in staring at her...

Then he immediately remembered that Raavi had come to the room...if she saw what he had done, she would interrogate him..

In no time he rushed from the room..leaving raavi in confusion

"Yeh ese kyu bhagaa??"

She saw the clock and jumped out.. "arey time ho gyaa raavi aaj chetak par sawar hoja"

She took the books, bag and the clutch she was leaving when she saw a note lying on the bed.

"Offo...yeh kese reh gaya, she took it and opened the clutch to keep it"

But she is stunned to see her clutch already filled with a note...

She take it out and found there is note of 2k of them

"Yeh.. paise yaha kisne rakhe...mere paas toh nahi the.."

She checked them to make sure no one is pranking her...they are real.

"Par yeh yaha rakhe kisne ...

Gaumbi?? Nahi gaumbi toh shop par h subah se..

Dhara di?? Nahi di toh neeche hi nahi aayi aaj..!!

Dev or rishita toh ghar m hi nahi h..or krish esa karega nahi or kaki...nahi kaki toh gussa h merse voh esa nahi krengi. ...

Bacha kon..??

"Shiva...!!"

"Kya shiva yeh yaha rakhe..."she asked to herself ..

"Haan abhi voh room m bhi aaya or itni ...jldi bhaag gyaa...jb m aayi...or...or voh cupboard m kch dekh raha tha"

"Iska mtlb shiva ne yeh" she take her hand close to her heart...and a tears of happiness started falling from her eyes..

"Thankyou shiva...Thankyou so mch" she said and chucked how she is behaving like a small kid...

She was going from the front of the shop and saw Shiva is sitting at the shop..checking the records..

She remember what he did "he still cares for her..no matter how much he claim to hate her..but he has a soft corner for her"

She went to the shop..shiva is shocked to see her..."why she came here"

"Ghar par sab thik h na" he asked

She nodded in yes...

He wonders why she came here..?? Did she know about the money..??

He looked at her widened eyes ..."why she is blushing and smiling"

"Her eyes has different spark today"

She took a deep breath..broke the silence and said "Thankyou shiva"

"Thank...Thankyou kisliye" pretending to be unknown.

"Tu janta h m kisliye tujhe thankyou bol rahi hu...ab zyda nahi bolungi itna toh bhagwan ne bheja bheja hi h tujhe...chupke chupke kaam karne laga h tu.." she said with chuckles....with a bright smiling from the ear...she left..

Leaving shiva in awkward situation..

He is smiling like a mad..ruffling his hair...cheeks hardened with the blushing

"Is chipkali se chupate chupate bhi isko pata chal gaya...sahi bol rahi h tu chupke chupke kaam karne laga hu m sirf tere liye...




So this is the end....

Apologies for errors...

Honest review appreciated...🤗


Love❤️

~Sakshi

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Omg aajke scene mein se saara kadwaahat nikaal ke itnaaa saara mithaas bhar diya tunay Sakshi 😳

Bohot bohot ptaara likha hai yeh, poori feel badal di !! ☺️ Thank you for this 🤗

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That's soo sweet ❤️

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This was beautiful ❤️

I hope the makers bring address the money issue in the future.

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Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Omg aajke scene mein se saara kadwaahat nikaal ke itnaaa saara mithaas bhar diya tunay Sakshi 😳

Bohot bohot ptaara likha hai yeh, poori feel badal di !! ☺️ Thank you for this 🤗


All thanks to that kadwahat wlaa scene...that brought me up with this drabble...so can we thanks...ummm🤣

And thankyou jaani....you r love ❤️

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Originally posted by: Palak2812

That's soo sweet ❤️


I m glad that u like ittt❤️

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Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

This was beautiful ❤️

I hope the makers bring address the money issue in the future.


Thankyou so mch❤️

Me too..i really really hope that something like this will come in real...

Much needed..!!


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Thankyou so mch❤️🤗

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Why am I blushing?!?!😳

Loved it♥️

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Chottissssssssssss thisssss is sooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeee.........and I am reallyyyyyyy proud of you for posting something this goood after soooooo longggggggggg........phast phast dusre likh!!

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