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Posted: 3 years ago
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Priya Drabble- Facade

Love. Love was empty; it was a facade. Priya understood it better than anyone. The failed relationships around her were enough for her to never fall in love again. But she would lie if she said she didn't wish for a companion, a partner. Someone who she knew would be there for her, hold her when she would break, and smile for her in her happiest moments.

But these were all empty hopes, just like love. Love was empty; it was a facade.

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Hola, Shibani here. Had this drabble running in my head since I watched yesterday's epi. Hope you guys like it. Drop down your thoughts below.

You can find my drabble collection here Entwined: A Drabble Collection


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks so much🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Love. Love was empty; it was a facade. Priya understood it better than anyone. The failed relationships around her were enough for her to never fall in love again. But she would lie if she said she didn't wish for a companion, a partner. Someone who she knew would be there for her, hold her when she would break, and smile for her in her happiest moments.

But these were all empty hopes, just like love. Love was empty; it was a facade.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Hola, Shibani here. Had this drabble running in my head since I watched yesterday's epi. Hope you guys like it. Drop down your thoughts below.

Woah.. Aap toh kitne fast ho. This is the first piece of writing for this forum. I hope we get many more writers for RamYa.


I love this piece so much. You captured the essence of Priya in just a few words.

Now if you don't mind.. I'd like to give the other side of this story.


Love. Love is a warm blanket on a wintry day. A cup of hot chocolate to ease the nightmarish reality of the world. Love is happiness. Love is life itself; the only reason to exist. So everyday, Ram vows to himself that he will not shy away from sharing his love with everyone around him.

But it would be wrong for him to say that on some rainy nights he doesn't catch himself wondering what it would be like to be loved back. He lets the rain drops wash away the thought. So what if he isn't loved? To love is a happiness in itself. And that is enough.

😅😅 Hope you like it.

Edited by aryapdane - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: aryapdane

Woah.. Aap toh kitne fast ho. This is the first piece of writing for this forum. I hope we get many more writers for RamYa.


I love this piece so much. You captured the essence of Priya in just a few words.

Now if you don't mind.. I'd like to give the other side of this story.


Love. Love is a warm blanket on a wintry day. A cup of hot chocolate to ease the nightmarish reality of the world. Love is happiness. Love is life itself; the only reason to exist. So everyday, Ram vows to himself that he will not shy away from sharing his love with everyone around him.

But it would be wrong of him to say that some nights he doesn't catch himself wondering what it would be like to be loved back. But he brushes away the thought. So what if he isn't loved? To love is a happiness in itself. And that is enough.

😅😅 Hope you like it.

This is gorg! ❤ You should put it up as a new topic

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

This is gorg! ❤ You should put it up as a new topic

😅😅😅 I guess, I will.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I feel so much for Priya. Her real father abandoned her and constantly makes her feel like shit, her real sister married her the guy she loved and the guy she loved left her for her own sister. She is trying to put a strong face but the continuous betrayal is slowly crumbling her 💔

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Great hope to read a new part

Arya good part

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Red_eyes

Great hope to read a new part

Arya good part

Thanks, but itna hi tha😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ah, the heartbroken's anguish.


Succinctly put. 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Arey Shibani🤗

It is extremely beautiful yaar ❤️

Go for it!!

Will love to read it!

Jen

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