Originally posted by: milkcakejamun
Very well said!! š
Like you mentioned, most of my problems are coming with the CVs themselves. Individually, I don't mind watching storylines where characters sell jewelry to fund a cause, or characters who have a strong sense of self-doubt, or characters wishing to be uncles and aunts. In fact, a lot of the mistakes that the PS characters made, I've made at some point of time...
But, what I do have a problem with is how the CVs/set technicians are handling all of these tracks... After showing us the importance of the jewelry, I would've expected Suman to be wearing the bangles as often as Prafulla was shown to wear them. After showing us the build-up of ShiVi's track, I would've expected to see progression in Shiva's thinking. I don't mind self-doubt, but when we get repeated scenes of "I smell like masalas and you don't like that smell" I get tired. I want to see character growth... not character stagnancy... Even DevTa's relationship... CVs should be building on Rishita's emotions, we should be seeing Rishita calling her sister, we should be seeing secret meet ups between Rishita and her mother, we should be seeing how Dev consoles her because a girl who has no access to her family is very heartbreaking
Just as you mentioned, if I was in Anita's place, I would walk away from the marriage with Gaumbi as well. It would be stressful to take care of 3 children, a disabled mother in law, and have a shop set up in debt. You have to be extremely strong to face that, and I don't think Anita was as she was just a child back then.
As for GauRa's children... I would've loved to see a scene of GauRa wanting children themselves, not because the town shamed them for not having any. The other day, I spoke to my roommate about children. We talked about what the appropriate age would be to have our first child... which included when we felt we would be professionally well settled, when we would be of good financial standing, when we felt as though we were emotionally ready. These are all important questions since there's nothing more devastating than having a child who is not wanted...
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The entire writing and editing is terrible. It is so painful to watch. Everything is so disconnected š
I hate to be mean, but even TRP dramas are better shot than this. Yes they do have dhoom thana nana, but I have seen Kekta shows with multiple couples- please, the shows that ran 8+ years always had the main couple but they would handle different tracks for brother-sisters, then kids then grandkids too 𤣠I simply refuse to believe that it is difficult to handle multiple couples- I have seen it being done so many times before š
I think the biggest sin of PS is editing. If I were allowed, I would ban 30s/1 min scenes- every scene should be a unit if 5-8 minutes. NO going back and forth.
For example, last episode, entire ShiVi conversation could be one block, and the outside events- kids running, GauRa taunting could be one block. Don't even bother showing the ShiVi/DevTa scene if both the start and end of the conversation is not in the same block.
I am back with my original prediction. I feel PS days are numbered š I was going to enjoy it while it lasted, but makers are making even that hard to do.