Fatejo short story on upcoming - HER CONFESSION!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Today is public holiday for eid

Eid mubarak to all

Was free

So thought to pen this


HER CONFESSION!


Her head resting on his chest. She could feel his heartbeat very clearly. He could feel her warmth. Putting his arms around her slender waist for a support

as she was drunk!


They had few glasses of wine . Unfortunately she seemed to have surrendered to its alcoholic effects too soon that knocked out her senses fully. It was a night out just the two of them with some friends

Buzo's birthday party!


They had a wonderful time. His wounds were healing slowly and he could feel the new man in him as the time passed. As they say

Time heals!

He was thankful to her support and courage that he overcomed his grief of first love betrayal so quickly within just a short pace of time. He was getting stronger and could think straight that so much so is able to make wise decisions in business relations . He was finally having a

Career!

All credit goes to her

His wife!

Companion!

Love!

That sudden thought of the last word startled him

Love!

Is she my love!

Will she ever be my love!

He was surprised of his own delusions of love for her despite knowing that he has framed her in his mind just as

A best friend!

Fateh!

Her soft whisper interrupted his deep thoughts

She was looking very exhausted


He rested her fragile body on the bed .

She was beautiful !

He sighed to the fact that he wont be able to accept her fully despite being married to her

She will remain the friend!

But not the love

I love u!

Her soft voice. She was talking in her sleep

I love u!

He sat just beside and rested his left palm on her forehead. She was struggling with strong emotions in her. He could feel the pressures.

Perhaps she's missing her family!

She loves them dearly

Fateh!

He stood out of sudden

Shocked!

Took few steps backward almost slipping on the hard marble floor

Her confession!

I love u fateh!

He stood still. Emotions unexplainable. Tears at the corner of his eyes

She was in love with him!


He rested on his side of the bed.

Unbelievable

The very wise and strong headed tejo singh virk was in love with him who was her opposite and nothing in common!


She woke up at the late hours of the day and her head felt heavy. It was a weekend. No college. No acadeny.

Where was he!

Mahi walked in with a glass of lime juice and stated he was out visiting a friend


I feel you should think about it. Tejo bhabhi jaisi koi hor nehin mil sakti. Yeh baat tu bhi jaanta hain. U are married for life.

Her confession!

Took away his sleep the night earlier . That weird emotions that when he imagined the word love for her status in his life that he heard the same blurted out from herside in her slumber.

She was dreaming about him in her sleep!

He can't even think of hurting her. She was too sweet and sober that he could not resist her love.

Her presence in his life was important.

A text message !

It was her!

He could feel a race on his pulses. Her name on the message

Tejo!

He read feeling the butterfles in his stomach

A mixture of anxiety and an excitement

Come home quickly. Lunch ready

Her short message


She was enjoying her meal with the rest of the family at the dining table. She couldnt recall details of the night earlier. She was normal.

She looked at him suddenly. He pretended ignoring her glance

Kuch chahiye!

She asked sweetly

He refused politely trying to hold back his tears

Excused himself and proceeded towards his room


She came minutes later with a big bowl of his favourite ice cream and enquired if he was alright

You look disturbed!

He couldnt tell her that it was the effects of

Her confession!

He was touched!

He was emotional!

He was speechless!


Tomorrow after college shall we go for a movie. What u say!

He asked politely trying to calm his emotions

I just want to make her happy !

I cant hurt her feelings!

Ok !

she replied happily

As she was about to take leave he pulled her closer for a tight hug and cried

She was taken aback but gave in to his strength and warmth

As he released

A kiss on her forehead!

Thank you!

He said

But did not complete the full sentence

It was

thank you for loving me!


He tried his level best to make her happy as days passed with roses and chocolates . Movies and dinner dates.

She was delighted with his very special treatments and wondered the reasons behind the amazing deeds

She was on the moon! The very true reason being

Her confession!

His gratefulness of being loved once again.


As the hours passed he was restless on his chair at the academy . His mind occupied with her thoughts.

Buzo gave him a piece of advise on his state minutes earlier during his visit

Close ur eyes and take a deep breath!

It will make you feel better!

He decided to give it a try


She was smiling

Jasmin!

He called out to her

She didnt respond

She was disappearing

He searched for her frantically through the white fabrics surrounding him

She was nowhere

He was about to fall and a hand grabbed him

Tejo!

He opened his eyes

Looked around

His short dream

Then realised the details of it

He was in love!

It was her

Tejo!

Who made him realised his feelings for her

Her confession!



Ps

Just incase if u didnt understand the depth of the fiction

Let me explain

Fateh has started to feel for tejo but is blocked by his hurt of first love jasmin

Tejo's confession made him realise

This is what is exactly happening on screen as well

Tejo is already in him

Just matter of time to realise it

And if tejo confess in subconscious state would be better coz it wont affect her but the other way round

He will be affected

















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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was such a beautiful piece! I love the fact that Tejo confessed and that Fateh is now on his way home. Thank you for writing this ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow, this one was too beautiful 😍 I am actually in favour of this happening. As long as Tejo don't remember the confession 😆 This will serve Fateh right also he will get time to accept and understand her love and confess his own. 👍🏼


Thx for the tag❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tq for always appreciating my work

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tq for always appreciating .my work

Tejo comfession will make him realise i think

Lets hope for the best

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