RaghVi OS: Strumming in Silence - Page 3

I have literally no words right now to say about it and I definitely can't criticize it too---it's that good

let me read it a few times peacefully and let you know about it

This was so beautiful Reem 😳

The writing was so amazing ❤️

Loved it 🤗

This was so beautiful ❤️

The way you were able to capture these moments between them, his gradual changes mirroring the changes in the weather, the magical world in which only they existed - it was lovely and poetic. 👏

How she supports and shields him, and how he thrills and protects her and how they face the storm together - what a beautiful metaphor Thank you for this!

Originally posted by: hapc

This was so serene. I loved everything about it. I feel like the title also matches the story perfectly so I have no suggestions.

Thank you so much Adu❤

WOAH Reem!!! This was unimaginably Beautiful!!! Matlab actually Imaginably hi👏👏

I don't have words to describe the imagery that you created here with the sun & rain for both Raghav & Pallavi. The umbrella being first alone with Pallavi & then she takes Raghav under the same cocoon encompasses a surreal feeling

Sorry, I couldn't respond earlier....I wanted to give the OS proper time to read & finally found it today😔

The transitions from the heavy downpour to them going home amongst the peekaboo of the sun, I loved every bit of this amazing piece❤️ . I am bookmarking to read this amongst one of my slow days amidst the Mumbai rains

Please share the secrets of how you come up with such content with me too😛!!

Originally posted by: drnidsur

What a write up 🤩

The way you described them , that essence of their relationship through so many symbolism

Their turmoils and their nature in such subtle way I loved it ❤️

U have woven this so beautifully I was craving more 🥰

Love it seriously 🤗

Keep writing girl ❤️

Also these lines -

A world with just Raghav and me?' She thought with a shy smile, playing with the idea of being huddled up with him for a bit longer, but as she ventured more into the idea, a warm touch brought her back to reality

Goshhhh!!!! This is what raghvi is ❤️

A world with just them 🔥

Raghav has a dark past which he overcame only after Pallavi's entry to his life---she is a sunshine in his life

I just wrote it---it wasn't until many pointed out about the symbolism and imagery--i realised that I had unintentionally written it in such a way

I am so glad you loved it❤

A world with just RaghVi--isn't is what everyone wants rn?

Thank you so much Nidhi❤❤

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Raghav has a dark past which he overcame only after Pallavi's entry to his life---she is a sunshine in his life

I just wrote it---it wasn't until many pointed out about the symbolism and imagery--i realised that I had unintentionally written it in such a way

I am so glad you loved it❤

A world with just RaghVi--isn't is what everyone wants rn?

Thank you so much Nidhi❤❤

The bold part - this is just what I think 😳

People accept it or not ,pallavi as brought out a side of Raghav even he didn't know about himself ❤️

Keep writing 🤗

Btw are there any other fanfics you have written so I can read them ?

Originally posted by: drnidsur

The bold part - this is just what I think 😳

People accept it or not ,pallavi as brought out a side of Raghav even he didn't know about himself ❤️

Keep writing 🤗

Btw are there any other fanfics you have written so I can read them ?

Pallavi brought him out of the shell of a person he is...

I have not written any fanfics...just drabbles and OS...which is available under my username in story index of the forum

Thank you so much ❤

This is beautiful Reem ❤️🥀.

Originally posted by: Wallflowers

This is beautiful Reem ❤️🥀.

Thank you so much ❤