TS: Secret Rendezvous- Part 3 (last) updated - Page 3

Hey! Thanks first of all for such a detailed comment. I love reading comments and I’ll never find anything too long to read, ever !

The poems this time are mine.

Rumi is reserved for the series of Trial by Fire and the sequel which I hope to update soon. The story is intense hence I often take more time. I hope to not keep you guys waiting too long 🤗

I agree with everything you’ve said- the truck incident was quite painful to watch and such an event often leaves one in complete fear of the person who went to this extent. How Pallavi managed to forgive him baffles me, but I guess it’s how she is.

Raghav is downright cute if he wants to be. He has a range of qualities, he’s like a paradox in my opinion. He can do anything and he’s highly unpredictable. When you think he won’t say anything, he speaks up and when you want him to say something, he keeps quiet.

Pallavi is his anchor, she calms him down no matter what. I don’t believe that this is the only role of a woman in a mans life, but it’s an important one at that. The brief peep into his past is just my imagination of what he must have gone through after his mother renounced him. There’s not enough history on the show but I believe he went through hell to reach his current status. In that process, he learnt a lot as well, at least that’s how self made men work.

Unsaid rule of the camping trip - my own 😆 I wouldn’t cook if I go out coz I’m always cooking at home 😆 My future husband better be a good cook, if not great 😛

The strength Pallavi shows is remarkable because she has a way of asking the most difficult questions without her emotions getting in the way and it’s about time she knows about his past life. It’s important for both of them to know important details of their past.

Thank you for reading!

I’m going to update by tomorrow, I had hoped to complete the entire series today but I got busy in cooking 🤣

Originally posted by: ReemShah

I am speechless..i can't find words to describe....

The poems are so just so beautiful--are these the ones by Rumi too or have you written it?

I was thinking your next story would be the sequel to Trials by Fire but you gave me a rather pleasant surprise with this TS. I really liked how you addressed all the unresolved issues in the show--like the truck incident and Raghav's MMS Scandal. The truck incident was really frightening and scary---Pallavi still hasn't gotten over it and she had fainted at that time---I am glad Raghav realized that he was the causes of this fear of hers and how he admits to himself that due to his impulsiveness he has taken rash decisions.

Finally these 2 souls are free from everyone on a trip--I remember during the Multi-Author Drabble Acitvity--there was a discussion that RaghVi should be sent somewhere where there will be no kebab main haddi and no unexpected twists but just them. RaghVi has realized their love for each other.

Raghav is just so cute--cooking, taking her on the rendezvous, calling her my dear🤣(Pallavi just loves saree ka dukaan name), discussing constellations and the unsaid rule about camp(I have never heard of that).

Pallavi prodding Raghav to answer who is Anjali by literally asking whether she is a girlfriend. Pallavi just knows how to control any situation(anger outburst about chotus) and making Raghav answer her question indirectly.

This was just so lovely..these two parts are written so beautifully Kiara...I am now more eager to read the next part. Thanks for the tag❤❤

Sorry I had said I have no words but still wrote a lot..hehe😅

Hello again, couldn't resist reading the second part tonight. Felt compelled to leave some comments.

Firstly, I loved how you showed Raghav's domesticated side. I can totally see him being this independent man, considering the amount of time he has lived alone.

Also, it was so sweet to see how excited and content he was to spend time with Pallavi, even if it was just being in the moment.

Raghav's flirting about his talents made me laugh. I can imagine him trying to use humour to diffuse any tension.

As far as Pallavi is considered, I love her maturity. Her gentle prodding is so empathetic. She is not like your typical young woman being demanding or nosy. You have depicted their beautiful, mutual understanding so well.

I also liked her acknowledging the jealousy when asking about Anjali.

And the best moment... he told her he is Ramaswamy. In the show, I used to wish Pallavi would somehow accidentally find out that it was him.

Loved it, your writing is amazing. Thank you for sharing xx

Zee ❤️

Hey Zee!

Thank you for loving this version of a domesticated Raghav. I love the soft Raghav too (though I love his don avatar too). One can only understand that for a man to achieve everything that he has at a young age, he must have walked through fire, all alone. Life is the best teacher which is why I feel that Raghav's moral compass is based on his experiences of life rather than the one society dictates. At least that is how I understand him.

Pallavi is a mature girl, as aptly shown in the show. She is 24/25 and she is wise beyond her years, in spite of everything she's been through since she was born. Rather, that is what has made her the gentle, empathetic and wise woman that she is.

Come to think of it, these two went through similar situations, but one became bitter while the other took it all in her stride and became a good person, holding no grudges. They're both the same in several aspects but starkly different when it comes to their perception of life. I love their interactions on the show, complimenting each other quite naturally, without unnecessary drama. They actually have mature interactions which is relief.

About Ramaswamy....yeah man, I hope she does find out. She will hold him in different light then. It's an important part of his life and I'd like to see how she take it all in.

Thank you for reading. I'll post the third soon (tomorrow) 😊

Originally posted by: Baniaz

Hello again, couldn't resist reading the second part tonight. Felt compelled to leave some comments.

Firstly, I loved how you showed Raghav's domesticated side. I can totally see him being this independent man, considering the amount of time he has lived alone.

Also, it was so sweet to see how excited and content he was to spend time with Pallavi, even if it was just being in the moment.

Raghav's flirting about his talents made me laugh. I can imagine him trying to use humour to diffuse any tension.

As far as Pallavi is considered, I love her maturity. Her gentle prodding is so empathetic. She is not like your typical young woman being demanding or nosy. You have depicted their beautiful, mutual understanding so well.

I also liked her acknowledging the jealousy when asking about Anjali.

And the best moment... he told her he is Ramaswamy. In the show, I used to wish Pallavi would somehow accidentally find out that it was him.

Loved it, your writing is amazing. Thank you for sharing xx

Zee ❤️

Beautiful update kiara ❤️

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Hey! Thanks first of all for such a detailed comment. I love reading comments and I’ll never find anything too long to read, ever !

The poems this time are mine.

Rumi is reserved for the series of Trial by Fire and the sequel which I hope to update soon. The story is intense hence I often take more time. I hope to not keep you guys waiting too long 🤗

I agree with everything you’ve said- the truck incident was quite painful to watch and such an event often leaves one in complete fear of the person who went to this extent. How Pallavi managed to forgive him baffles me, but I guess it’s how she is.

Raghav is downright cute if he wants to be. He has a range of qualities, he’s like a paradox in my opinion. He can do anything and he’s highly unpredictable. When you think he won’t say anything, he speaks up and when you want him to say something, he keeps quiet.

Pallavi is his anchor, she calms him down no matter what. I don’t believe that this is the only role of a woman in a mans life, but it’s an important one at that. The brief peep into his past is just my imagination of what he must have gone through after his mother renounced him. There’s not enough history on the show but I believe he went through hell to reach his current status. In that process, he learnt a lot as well, at least that’s how self made men work.

Unsaid rule of the camping trip - my own 😆 I wouldn’t cook if I go out coz I’m always cooking at home 😆 My future husband better be a good cook, if not great 😛

The strength Pallavi shows is remarkable because she has a way of asking the most difficult questions without her emotions getting in the way and it’s about time she knows about his past life. It’s important for both of them to know important details of their past.

Thank you for reading!

I’m going to update by tomorrow, I had hoped to complete the entire series today but I got busy in cooking 🤣

The poems are really beautiful...I loved them especially the one in the beginning and the one one which you had written while they were seeing stars.

Pallavi is a kind and forgiving person and this act totally proves it. and yes, she is Raghav's anchor--holding him close to reality and being his guiding light. Infact, I think both Pallavi and Raghav are each others anchor in some ways--supporting them, calming them, guiding them and helping them.

Many of Raghav's act has proved to be a paradox--his nature and actions are there to prove it. He is a closed off personality who reveals himself little by little and each relavation brings out different reaction.

Let's hope your husband cooks too--something other than 2-minutes noodles.

When it comes to emotions, Pallavi has a better control over hers than Raghav--Raghav lashes out every single emotion of his at the time while Pallavi keeps it bottled within herself and rarely lets it out.

I just read the 3rd part of it and I absolutely loved it and you left me wandering about their dance---and what's else they will do in their secret rendezvous😆btw do tell what song will they be dancing to😉

Last secret between RaghVi in the initial episodes of the show is revealed *drumrolls*🥳

Pallavi's reaction to it was so mature--she wasn't wondering about that Raghav has hidden the secret from her but rather wondered about old age people and Raghav. Can the angel and demon live exist in a same person was a question which arose in my mind too considering Raghav's question and Pallavi's innocent question that she felt all his cruelty directed towards her hit hard maybe because I never considered Pallavi's emotions during that scene.

The three types of charity is something which my ma has taught me too--one is selfless, other is for ourselves and lastly one a person does for the society....you have written it well.

I think there is a parallel between Raghav and Pallavi's characters--they both have suffered the brunt of people and have rises above themselves, but Pallavi took it a positive way and always has a smile on her face while Raghav took it in a neutral way--not bothering to hide his intentions towards the society. Pallavi being surrounded with love of people was never showered with love truly while Raghav never felt the love of his dear ones. Pallavi's advise to reform himself just for himself is something Pallavi should also follow.

The sudden realization of the fact that the other person is compulsed by the circumstances to stay in the relationship and not because of love was saddening and the poem there just touched my heart(so true and so beautiful). The confession was lovely---it felt like each poem set flight to the emotions Raghav was feeling and urging him to confess.

You are truly a gifted person in writing. The poems you have written just sets another aura around the scene and just enhances the whole scene.

Loved the TS Kiara❤️

I was waiting for you to finish the whole thing......it was amazing....I read and reread and reread the whole thing again and again..... I don't know if my words are enough to praise this beautiful piece of yours but trust me I am seriously in awe of this whole write up.

Loved it dear❤️

Thank you for loving it 🤗I enjoyed writing too!

Song - updated the post - It’s lag ja gale ❤️

They’ll be doing a lot and I live that to the imagination of the readers. Raat abhi baaki hai 😳

I agree with what you said about Pallavi. That’s how I see her too. She takes everything positively unlike Raghav who sparks up at the drop of a hat.

The line about all cruelty directed towards her was something I also felt when he tormented her because he used to be caring towards others and all hell broke loose only for Pallu. Poor soul.

It is also true that both of them craved for love. Pallavi was surrounded by a family but she never really got the love she deserved whereas Raghav was alienated from his family. Both are quite similar, both are/were lonely.

It became important to address the issue of both of them staying in the marriage - out of love or compulsion? Very important if they’re to move ahead. Any doubt in their hearts can make them take several steps back. I also want to see this on the show. Pallavi was not clear why she stayed back and it’s why I also feel that he’s holding back. It’s not that he doesn’t feel anything towards her.

Bold - thank you so much 🤗one poem was Rumi’s out of all of them- the one of distance and wander.

Thank you for loving it ❤️

Originally posted by: ReemShah

I just read the 3rd part of it and I absolutely loved it and you left me wandering about their dance---and what's else they will do in their secret rendezvous😆btw do tell what song will they be dancing to😉

Last secret between RaghVi in the initial episodes of the show is revealed *drumrolls*🥳

Pallavi's reaction to it was so mature--she wasn't wondering about that Raghav has hidden the secret from her but rather wondered about old age people and Raghav. Can the angel and demon live exist in a same person was a question which arose in my mind too considering Raghav's question and Pallavi's innocent question that she felt all his cruelty directed towards her hit hard maybe because I never considered Pallavi's emotions during that scene.

The three types of charity is something which my ma has taught me too--one is selfless, other is for ourselves and lastly one a person does for the society....you have written it well.

I think there is a parallel between Raghav and Pallavi's characters--they both have suffered the brunt of people and have rises above themselves, but Pallavi took it a positive way and always has a smile on her face while Raghav took it in a neutral way--not bothering to hide his intentions towards the society. Pallavi being surrounded with love of people was never showered with love truly while Raghav never felt the love of his dear ones. Pallavi's advise to reform himself just for himself is something Pallavi should also follow.

The sudden realization of the fact that the other person is compulsed by the circumstances to stay in the relationship and not because of love was saddening and the poem there just touched my heart(so true and so beautiful). The confession was lovely---it felt like each poem set flight to the emotions Raghav was feeling and urging him to confess.

You are truly a gifted person in writing. The poems you have written just sets another aura around the scene and just enhances the whole scene.

Loved the TS Kiara❤️

Hey Mihika!!

Thank you for commenting and loving it!

I’m so happy you read, re-read and re-read it again and again! It makes me so happy 🤗

Originally posted by: Mihika

I was waiting for you to finish the whole thing......it was amazing....I read and reread and reread the whole thing again and again..... I don't know if my words are enough to praise this beautiful piece of yours but trust me I am seriously in awe of this whole write up.

Loved it dear❤️

Loved every bit of it. I am so glad you put that edit, that song in the end hit so differently! I would love to see them dancing on this one