TS: Secret Rendezvous- Part 3 (last) updated - Page 4

Thank you so much 🤗

I know right, that song just transports all feelings to another level. I wish we get to see this number on them...I wish wish wish

Originally posted by: Inese_20

Loved every bit of it. I am so glad you put that edit, that song in the end hit so differently! I would love to see them dancing on this one

Fabulous ending to the story. I loved reading all 3 parts. Pallavi's reaction and thoughts to him being Ramaswamy was great. I loved how you included a valuable lesson about three different levels of charity. Raghav is indeed a selfless soul.

Pallavi is so straighforward. She didn't make excuses for him but politely showed him the mirror. His behaviour at that time was not justified. But I love how she does it without any unnecessary drama, guilt-tripping etc.

I loved how she reminds him to be the best version of yourself... for yourself. So important.

And their confession... happy days.

Beautiful song at the end

Loved it, looking forward to reading more of your writing.

Zee xx

Hey Zee!!

Thanks for loving it 😳

I’m glad you saw it exactly how I wished for it to come out. What happened cannot be changed and undone and the only way someone can actually make it up to anyone is by changing. That’s what Pallavi is here for- showing Raghav the mirror, yes, without taking him on a guilt trip.

I’ve written more - you may check it out in the writers index 😳

I’m glad you found

Originally posted by: Baniaz

Fabulous ending to the story. I loved reading all 3 parts. Pallavi's reaction and thoughts to him being Ramaswamy was great. I loved how you included a valuable lesson about three different levels of charity. Raghav is indeed a selfless soul.

Pallavi is so straighforward. She didn't make excuses for him but politely showed him the mirror. His behaviour at that time was not justified. But I love how she does it without any unnecessary drama, guilt-tripping etc.

I loved how she reminds him to be the best version of yourself... for yourself. So important.

And their confession... happy days.

Beautiful song at the end

Loved it, looking forward to reading more of your writing.

Zee xx

Ugh I’m super late, but hopefully not too late. I’ve loved all your previous works and this one too. The balance between their comfort and unease was perfect. I love how Anjali and the MMS fiasco was handled. I also really liked that Pallavi didn’t just forgive him to told him to control his anger like the Pallavi from the initial episodes in her discussion with Farhad. As to the confession

It was so cute. Confused Raghav and Happy Pallavi and the shut up.. gold❤️

Lag ja gale is an emotion. I remember when I wrote a drabble on Raghvi which ends with them dancing together, I too imagined Lag Ja Gale but didn’t mention anything because I thought everyone has their own romantic song.

Loved the verses, dialogue and the writing. Do write more❤️

Hey! Nope, you’re not late at all! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment ❤️

I’m so glad you loved it and I completely agree with Lag Ja Gale being an emotion. I don’t know if we’ll ever get to see this song on the show 😕

I’m presently writing Mememto Mori which is a sequel to Trial by Fire series. Do give it a read 😳

Originally posted by: hapc

Ugh I’m super late, but hopefully not too late. I’ve loved all your previous works and this one too. The balance between their comfort and unease was perfect. I love how Anjali and the MMS fiasco was handled. I also really liked that Pallavi didn’t just forgive him to told him to control his anger like the Pallavi from the initial episodes in her discussion with Farhad. As to the confession

It was so cute. Confused Raghav and Happy Pallavi and the shut up.. gold❤️

Lag ja gale is an emotion. I remember when I wrote a drabble on Raghvi which ends with them dancing together, I too imagined Lag Ja Gale but didn’t mention anything because I thought everyone has their own romantic song.

Loved the verses, dialogue and the writing. Do write more❤️