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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Wow

Mujhe ye chahiye😭

Bahut hi pyaara likha ❣️

Please do write more 💛

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was so sweet. And the misunderstanding got cleared! Something I'm hoping for in the show. Loved reading this 😊❤.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Nice drabble.

I loved this❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved this sooo much 💓 You manage to capture their essence so well 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was lovely! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

I loved your take on the kalash scene. ❤️

I'm glad the misunderstanding has been cleared in the show as well.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

This is something that randomly came to my mind after watching todays precap.i had to pen this down 😁.

The kalash

She clutched on to his kurta tightly closing her eyes in fear, as he lay on top of her shielding her from the falling debris.it became a bit calmer.raavi opened her eyes to see his husband intently staring at her.she felt a bit relaxed, but suddenly she saw a piece of brick going to fall on them, her hand instinctively covered shivas head.it fell on her hand and she let out a small yelp.

Shiva came out of his trance as he saw her pained expressions.

He quickly got up , sat besides her and took her hand.it was bleeding.

" Yeh kya Kiya tune? " He asked angrily

" Tere Sar pe girne wala tha shiva.tujhe Kitni chot lag jaati " she replied immediately

Shiva got a bit awkward seeing her concern.raavi realised what she blurted out.

" Waise bhi tera dimag tedha hai, use chot laga Kar aur kharab hone nahi de sakte na " she said in her usual chirpy tone.

Shiva signed as he carefully examined her wound.he cleaned it with his hankerchief and tied it around her hand.he then got up and helped her get up as well .

Raavi noticed the fallen kalash in the ground and immediately picked it up .

" Sara Pani gir Gaya " she pouted

Shiva chuckled looking at her.she was worried about the water in a situation like this?

" Chal shiva, Pani leke aate hai phirse " she said

" AE mamikibehenkibeti , tera upar Ka mahla sach Mai khali hai kya? Marte marte bachi hai aur tujhe Pani ki padi hai?" He said

" Hum Bina Pani liye jayenge to suman kaki aur dhara Di ko Kitna Bura lagega.Wahan waise bhi mahol tensed Hoga.kitne Mann se unhone yeh puja rakhwayi hai, Hume unka Mann rakhna Hoga na shiva? Aur waise bhi Tu nahi maanta Hoga, par Mai yeh riwaz adhura nahi chod Sakti " she said

Shiva looked at her amazed . How could someone be so pure hearted? After everything his family has put her through, all she cares about is their happiness.she was hurt, left at the altar due to the foolishness of his family.yes, he hates to admit it but everyone of them had a part in hiding the truth from her.he knew she always thought the pandya parivaar as her own , but seeing her like this worrying about his family as his wife filled his heart with immense pride.

" Kya?Ghoor kya Raha hai? Tujhe nahi aana hai to Tu yehi Ruk, Mai Pani bharke ati Hu...tune waise bhi kalash ko Haath laga Diya hai " she said and was about to go when he held her hand.

Seriously? She thinks he is going to leave her alone for even a second after what happened?

" Ruk ..aata Hu " he said

She felt happy that he agreed to accompany her.

This time shiva put his hand firmly on top of her, shielding her wounded hand from the water as they filled the kalash with the holy water.

Raavi smiled as she noticed this change.he held her hand without any reservations this time. She was a bit irked when he avoided touching her fingers last time.Now ,the rasam felt complete .

They looked at each other for a brief moment.shiva with pride in his eyes and raavi with a sense of peace. She had noticed how he had saved her from getting hurt, he was ready to take bricks on his back without a second thought even though he still had the marks of the beating. This man would never leave her in danger.

Shiva turned and begun to walk.she silently checked his back for any injuries or sign of blood, thankfully there were none.the bricks didn't fall directly on him either.

Shiva noticed that raavi was not besides him.he turned

" Ab khadi kyu hai ? Chal. " He said.

" Tu mujhe us din gundo ke beech akele chodkar nahi Gaya tha na? " She said , her eyes welling up a bit.

Shiva signed.finally she realised.he shook his head.

" Bahut jaldi Samajh gayi yeh baat tu.chal ab Yaha se nikalte hai " he held her hand and safely escorted her among the debris.

This felt as a new beginning.now they had the most important thing required in a relationship.trust.everything else can wait.




Awww this is tooo cute . Melt my heart cute . Please write more . Love reading your stories may it be drabble or FF . Also would love to read one story on the precap , it's going to take too long for us to watch the scene . A story from you will make all the forumwaasis very happy surely me being the first one 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvshivika

Awww this is tooo cute . Melt my heart cute . Please write more . Love reading your stories may it be drabble or FF . Also would love to read one story on the precap , it's going to take too long for us to watch the scene . A story from you will make all the forumwaasis very happy surely me being the first one 🤗

Thank you so much for your love❤️

I will surely pen down if something comes to my mind 🤗

I am myself very excited about the precap 😍, hit I have no prediction on what will happen.the CVs have set the bar really high this time😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Thank you so much for your love❤️

I will surely pen down if something comes to my mind 🤗

I am myself very excited about the precap 😍, hit I have no prediction on what will happen.the CVs have set the bar really high this time😍

I really hope they keep the same standard . I went in with zero expectations today and was happy beyond expectation. So will try my level best to watch episode without expectations🙈 Shivi are just ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful ❤😍😘💯💯💯


Bhot jaldi samajh aa gya 👍

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