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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi everyone, I hope you will give this One shot same love like every story on GF has received. Also, I have a task for you, I wish everyone reading this will try to guess a song which inspired me to write this one shot. There won't be any prizes but it will be fun trying to guess. Following are the hints

1. It's a Bollywood movie

2. It's a Katrina Kaif's movie

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“I am sorry”, this were the words which shattered her world. After confessing her love for him she thought it would be reciprocated but he left saying he never loved her or think about her in a sense which would be more than friends. Smiling with tears in her eyes, she shook her head and turned to go.

He saw her leaving, he saw her sad, heartbroken but couldn’t do anything. He feels sorry but he can’t lie to make her happy. She was his friend but nothing more than that, he too turned and went on his way.

She remembers their time together, how he helped her again and again. Being new to not only college scared her but he was there at every step. Being the CR of the class, he was there to help her with notes, lectures, doubts and even tried to help with her accommodation in the city.

Whether it was college trip or an outing he was always there. And meeting him and knowing him had a huge impact on her, she doesn’t know when or how but she definitely fell for him.

She smiled remembering the time when they went for hiking and camping with their classmate. How they were unable to sleep so they came out their tent and just sat there under the sky full of stars and bon fire keeping them warm on the cold night

But now she couldn’t even feel the coldness of the rain seeping through her clothes, she was numb. When her legs brought her to her apartment, she doesn’t know to be happy or sad because now even this place has memories of him. When they would group study or have a night out here. And now when she is remembering every moment spent with him, she is focusing how he never was alone with her, they were always surrounded with their friends, he never behaved like she was special or did something which may lead her to believe that he likes her too.

Then why did her heart have to read so much and fall in love. It hurts, it hurts so much.

It’s been 6 years since the day she saw him, when she confessed her love for him and now, he is standing right in front of her, smiling and interacting with the crowd who were congratulating him and his fiancée for their engagement. His fiancée, her sister, what a game destiny has played. The one guy she loved was now going to be her sisters. 2 months back when her mom called to inform her about the relation, she was happy for her sister but now, now she doesn’t know if she should be happy that her sister is getting an amazing person or love at herself for what a mockery, she has become in this moment

Wiping a lone tear, putting a smile on her face, she moved towards the couple hiding her pain with a smile.

When Seher, her sister, noticed her she couldn’t even fake the smile, it was truly replaced by warm smile. She was her sister and she is happy for her. She went ahead and hugged her tight. Trying to control her emotion in those few moments and gathering courage to be a part of this event.

“Geet”, he said in low, he hadn’t seen her since that day. He somewhere regretted saying her “no” because it broke her heart but, if, he had said ‘yes’ then maybe they both would be in pain, because he never loved.

She faced him “Maan”, she said with a smile. Seher was confused as how they both know each other when they are meeting for the first time

“You both know each other” Seher question make them break eye contact.

Before Maan can say something Geet replied “We were batchmates”. “Batchmates” that’s all he has become to her not even friend, he wanted to ask her but with what right. According to her they are just “batchmates”. God he is now hating this damn word.

Looking at him Geet can see he has done good for himself. He started his own business which was doing well and recently he diversified his business. He also earns good and respect his family as well hers, he loves adventure and is an avid traveller. No, she didn’t stalk him, she knew about all this because of her mother. Now thinking back, she is trying to remember why didn’t she noticed his name when her mother was telling her about him. She remembers that was because it was always “Seher ka” or “Humara damad”, she pitied herself, without even knowing her mother and destiny were telling her that Maan was never hers. He was meant to be Seher’s, not hers.

“You both continue to meet others, I should leave”, before Maan could stop her Geet left them. Seeing her walking away from him again is making him restless, he is not liking this, in fact hating it. He was not able to see anything other than her. He couldn’t concentrate on anything. He doesn’t know what he was feeling but all he knows was that everything was going wrong, whatever was happening shouldn’t happen. Not Geet going away, not this engagement nor him standing next to Seher and greeting the guest, everything about this is wrong, so damn wrong. He didn’t have this feeling ever so he was not understanding it.

When his parents came with Seher proposal he didn’t mind because according to his parents now that he achieved his goal and now his stable in his professional life, he should now focus on his personal life as well, to which he agree and when he met Seher on a coffee away from their family scrutinizing eyes, he liked her nature she was simple girl who value family and relationship and would like to after marriage too with support partner which he find aspiring. He wouldn’t want to tie down anyone to him and broke their dream, if she wants to work, he doesn’t have issue after all she is person of her own. And so, he agreed to the relation but today when his past came in front, he is not feeling like this should be happening.

He looked around the place to have a glimpse of Geet, to talk to her, to know about her, to spend time with her but he was not able to see her. He doesn’t know why but his heart is breaking piece by piece as clock is ticking away.

Excusing himself from the crowd, he made his way out towards the gardening area, he reached near the fountain, he looked at the reflection of the full moon on the surface, he tried leaned against it closing his eyes, taking deep breath to calm himself when he heard whimpering sound, he focused on it and looking around for person when he saw a shadow, he walked towards it. When he reached near the person, he couldn’t take his eyes of her. There was standing Geet in pastel pink saree looking like an angel, he was lost in her when the sound of a controlled hiccup broke his trance. When Maan moved closer to her Geet feeling someone presence quickly wiped her tears putting on her smile but seeing Maan her smile faded.

Maan looking her action felt something pierced his heart he just wished he could take away her tears but don’t know what he can do to make her happy, he stepped towards her to wipe her tears but seeing her stepping he halt his steps. “Geet, are you okay?” he asked, to which she nodded her head and tried to walk away but Maan couldn’t see her going again so he stepped in front of her. “Itna naraz ho ki meri taraf dekhogi bhi nahi?” Listening to his question she looked in his eyes with her own tear filled one. “It’s nothing like that” Geet replied composing herself “You should be inside, it’s your engagement” She said wanting to be left alone but seeing him not moving she tried to leave the place but Maan once again blocked her and moved her against a tree.

His close proximity was creating havoc on her, her sense was all over the place her breath were deeps, her eyes close while her lips were tremble.

Looking at her like this, affected by his presence was boosting his ego, making him ecstatic, he wasn’t the only one affected, she too feels something, looking at her lips tainted with red lipstick he couldn’t stop himself and his lips found hers. When their lips touched, he felt spark, it was like everything is perfect in this moment, with her nothing can be wrong, he pushed himself more into her and deepen the kiss to taste her, to feel her, to consume her through this.

Feeling his harsh lips against hers made her sigh, this was the moment she waited for so long, dreamed about it but nothing came close to the reality. Maan was kissing her, finally the person she loved was kissing her today, today, the day of her sister’s engagement. The person she was kissing wasn’t the one she loves; it was her sister’s fiancé. When she tried to broke the kiss, he deepens it at the same moment, she couldn’t resist it, she let herself to be lost in this moment.

After sometime when they broke for air Maan rested his forehead against hers breathing heavily, seeing her closed eyes Maan elated, he knew there is so much to do right now, because there is no way he could get engaged to anyone when he feels more for Geet, determining himself to stand against everyone to fight for them. Nothing could be wrong when being with her feels to right. He was happy, he knows she stills feels same from him as she did years ago, and now he was going to confess to her.

“Maan” someone shouted his name, breaking their moment. Listening the shout Geet came to her sense, she knew what they just shared was just a moment and not her life, what she did was so wrong on so many different levels. So, started running, running away from him, away from this moment, away from everyone. She was running with all her might and reached the main road outside the hotel where function was held.

Maan seeing her running away, started running after her, he has to stop her, talk to her, confess to her, there are so many things he wants to say to her and first will be sorry for hurting her. As much he was trying to be close to her, she was going away from him and suddenly his steps faltered, he saw her getting hit by truck, he saw her body being in the air and falling on the ground, he saw it all happening but couldn’t do anything, anything to stop everything from happening, he couldn’t save her from getting hurt. He ran, he ran until he was near her, he pushed himself between the crowd to with her.

He fall on the ground near her, cradle her head in his head trying to stop blood, he tried to wake her but her eyes remained closed, her was calling her name again and again but she wasn’t responding, he was saying her “I love you” but she wasn’t answering, everything was happening in fast motion around him but his world stood in its place, when the medic came and expressed their grief, his world shattered right in his arm, he couldn’t let her go, not when he finally had her, but people around him took her away from him even after fighting for her he couldn’t have her.

When a droplet touched him, he looked at the sky, he remembers, the day he left her, that day too it was raining and today too it is raining, like mocking him, for leaving her when he had her he couldn’t understand it and now she won’t be with him even when he wants to be. It left him not for now but for forever.

Ek din tum chale gaye the,

Ek din main chali jaungi,

Tum toh wapas aa gaye,

Lekin main nahi aaungi

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Not all love story has happy ending. Some lives with love, some leave their love

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sad sad os 😢😔

Yes correct Not all love story has happy ending. Some lives with love, some leave their love

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Omg!!! This is one of a heart-wrenching update!!

It's Indeed true, one couldn't get what they always want!!

Geet really loved Maan but he chose to let her go and When she was back he couldn't have her!!!

The last words really brought tears in my eyes!

This really is so sad I do want one more update for this please, I wish you continue this ?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very emotional ya.. pls do write more on Maaneet

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congrats on the OS!

thanks for posting 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Heart wrenching OS! Beautifully written

she loved him but he didn't

when he realised it was too late

sad that she died.......

feeling for Maan

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Posted: 4 years ago
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hi wish you write more Maaneet stories

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Posted: 4 years ago
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emotional , painful story

maan confess his love when geet is not able to respond it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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That was a wonderful OS but so very sad. Had he said he couldn’t get engaged to his sister as he now realised he loved Geet, then her sister would have been heart broken. Perhaps she too fell in love with him completely. She may have sacrificed as that would have been the right thing to do but either way, hearts were going to be broken.


If only he realised his feelings earlier but we all make mistakes in life. Sometimes we let a good thing go thinking something better may come along. Us humans can be very fickle when it comes to feelings.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalinimaaneet

Sad sad os 😢😔

Yes correct Not all love story has happy ending. Some lives with love, some leave their love

👏👏👏👏

Thank you for reading and commenting 😊

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