ShaKhi OS - BitterSweet Realisations - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice OS 

Please continue.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akanksha29100

If only this would happen in the show !! Hah!!


Anyways, Brilliant piece of work. Keep writing 🤗


Thankyou so much Akansha for taking out time and liking this one.


I am with you if only🤧

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tashaf_arshi

Nice OS 

Please continue.


Thankyou so much.This one is a One Shot.If u want ,you can read the 3 OS I wrote before this.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wonderful🥳i like the way you wrote how Anokhi got to know the truth....



please write anokhi shaurya's conversation after realizing the truth

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Love it❤️ It's amazing👏🤗

Anokhi's realisation made me 🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Beautiful os! 

Loved this guilt ridden anokhi here! 

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was really nice. 👍🏼Loved it.

Felt good reading it. I hope we get to see such a track in the show. If so, it would be great. It's high time that Anokhi should know who, what and how Shaurya is.


I believe, Anokhi's snapping out of her misunderstandings about Sharya is far more better than the jealousy track of Shaurya. 


Do write more. 🤗

Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Totally engaging, with ample of emotions being displayed by Anokhi. I liked how she lashed at Shit, a cop whom she had known just for about three to four days. She needed the reality check.

What I really liked was her understanding she was only being loyal to Aastha but not thinking of a son's pov. Good work, keep up with writing! 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Beautifully penned down👏The unfolding of truth unexpectedly and the realisation that dawned upon her was emotional🥺 

Guilt struck Anokhi and she seeing the actual Shaurya Sabherwal is what I wish to see so badly..

I so wanna read the part ahead of it where the MU clears🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: phibi

Wonderful🥳i like the way you wrote how Anokhi got to know the truth....



please write anokhi shaurya's conversation after realizing the truth


Thankyou so much.I have been waiting for her to know it and hence wrote this.


Continuation of this one?.I'll try to.