ShaKhi OS - BitterSweet Realisations - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: SparklenShine

Love it❤️ It's amazing👏🤗

Anokhi's realisation made me 🥺


Thankyou so much for liking it.I am humbled you liked the way Anokhi came to know the real thing.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Beautiful os!

Loved this guilt ridden anokhi here!


Thankyou so much for liking this one.I am so waiting to see the growth in Anokhi's character now.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Fantastic story

Finally anokhi had self-realization

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Only you could do justice to both the characters

You are best

This was another masterpiece

I loved the realization part here

Hope show mein bhi itna deeply dikhaaye

Kyunki Shaurya deseri happiness

Aur happiness sirf Anokhi se hi milegi use

She will heal him with love and trust❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Absolutely loved it and I really wish to watch something like this in the show. I'm really waiting to see Anokhi know that it was Shaurya n not ACP who had rescued her that day n also feel bad for always taunting him about his mom. I really want her to understand from his POV before speaking her mind n always defending her Aastha ma'am.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: phibi

Wonderful🥳i like the way you wrote how Anokhi got to know the truth....



please write anokhi shaurya's conversation after realizing the truth


Thankyou so much for liking this.


I had written another OS before it and that is on the lines of the MU too so I'll definitely write a sequel where the MU has cleared

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: SparklenShine

Love it❤️ It's amazing👏🤗

Anokhi's realisation made me 🥺



Thankyou so much.Waiting for it to happen on the show.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Beautiful os!

Loved this guilt ridden anokhi here!


Thankyou so much.I hope we get to see her realisation on the show too.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

It was really nice. 👍🏼Loved it.

Felt good reading it. I hope we get to see such a track in the show. If so, it would be great. It's high time that Anokhi should know who, what and how Shaurya is.


I believe, Anokhi's snapping out of her misunderstandings about Sharya is far more better than the jealousy track of Shaurya.


Do write more. 🤗


Thankyou so much Meera for taking out time to read this one and I am glad you liked reading it.


Her realisation is important when and how or if they show us on the show is upto them given its ITV.


But I agree that they should atleast now start her understanding Shaurya.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Totally engaging, with ample of emotions being displayed by Anokhi. I liked how she lashed at Shit, a cop whom she had known just for about three to four days. She needed the reality check.

What I really liked was her understanding she was only being loyal to Aastha but not thinking of a son's pov. Good work, keep up with writing! 😊


Thankyou so much for this reply.Anokhi as Shaurya said on the show too only sees rhe outer surface and for her Shaurya is wrong bcos of how he is with Aastha.


Her understanding the real Shaurya for me will be the real deal.

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