Fan-Fic {yet to be named} PART 2 Up - Page 2

Next part cming in a short while 😃

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

Next part cming in a short while 😃

bring it on, we r all waiting

and please donot forget to update them on first pages so tahtw e won't have to search much

i am sure your fanfic thread will soon cross 10 pages so never forget to update them at the beginning😉

Part 2

She suddenly lost her balance and found herself slipping into the deep chasm of the pond. Bhairvi was a fierce girl, just about the master of anything, but swimming. Bhairvi had always been scared of the water (i.e. drowning) Now, she was drowning and there was no one around to help her out. She couldn't believe what was happening. Her breath was slowly leaving her; her eyes couldn't make out what is in front of her. This couldn't possible be the end of her story. No! Not just yet, not now! And, she was right. To her amazement, the stranger who had alarmed her a little while ago came to her rescue. He jumped in the water and held her by the waist and swam offshore. He laid Bhairvi under Bahaar and checked her vital signs. She was still alive and semi-conscious. Her rescuer was none other than the famous vagabond Aryan.

---x---

He smiled as he looked at Bhairvi properly for the first time. She looked like a beauty made in heaven. She had dark chestnut locks, which seemed dark black when wet. She was tall and slender and had the most magnificent eyes, like the likes of doe (heerni jaisi lolz). Aryan was hypnotized at once, but soon realized that he had carry on with his journey. He had only stopped in Aryanagar, so that he could with the famous Bhootnath tantric/warrior, but had no luck so far in finding him. He looked at the beautiful maiden in front of him one last time and stood up. Before, he could take a step further he felt a tender touch. It was Bhairavi. She was finally gaining full conciousness. "Kaun ho tum," she finally managed to say out. Aryan was taken aback. He did not know what to say. He had never been asked this question before. Even if he was, he would still have no answer. The truth was he didn't know himself, who he was, what was the purpose of his life. It was not very easy living, not knowing who you are.

---X---

Aaryan opened his mouth to answer, "Woh mein....." but stopped in the midst. He noticed that girl was unconscious again. It happened so suddenly. Just then, a huge wave of wind hit him in the face. The lightening glittered and the clouds roared. It would start raining any minute and there was no way that Aaryan could leave the girl under the tree amidst a storm. He picked her up on his shoulder and started walking towards the end of the village. He was a sturdy guy. He had gained a lot of strength from his own little practice sessions that he had started keeping from a very young age or as far as he could remember. He was now glad that he did….

Next: Aaryan and Bhairvi acquaint!

Note from me: Hope you guys like it so far... it a tad bit boring right now because it will take me a little time to get into the story so just have a little patience. Thank you for ur support so far.

Cheerz

Ravz

Originally posted by: its me tan

bring it on, we r all waiting

and please donot forget to update them on first pages so tahtw e won't have to search much

i am sure your fanfic thread will soon cross 10 pages so never forget to update them at the beginning😉

yup yup i have written a few fan fics and read a zillion of them.. lolz😆 so i know how annoying it gets..i fixed everything up😃

chiiling yaar
but i would want soemthing more romantci about Aaryyan: donot keep him a vagabond forver, give me some money /position some time- and a handsome antihero so taht he will understdn Bhairavi is his true calling for heart 😍
why does he want to meet bhootnath?

😉 😉 just keep on waiting... i have smethin really interested cooking up in my mind....everything u mentioned up their will cme...but in time 😛

nice part waiting for the next part and i m sure something really intresting will come

😊 Next part will feature interaction between Aaryan and Bhairvi... expect it to be long. 😃 But gimme a day or two to finish it first

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

😊 Next part will feature interaction between Aaryan and Bhairvi... expect it to be long. 😃 But gimme a day or two to finish it first

take as much time and cook up something really HOT!!

these show makers showed everything else other than the chemistry