Fan-Fic {yet to be named} PART 2 Up

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Shey guyz!

Im starting a new fan-fic for Aaryyan.. which I hope will keep us entertained while we wont see action on TV!

Heres a character sketch and the concept... Hope you like it!

Character Sketch

Bhairavi- She is a jubiliant but a fierce girl, the princess of the magical land Hind. Once she completes her training she'll be the queen of her land. Her parents passed away when she was very young. The reason of their death is known till date.

Hussein Baba-He is very humble and a man of many wonders. He is caretaker of Princess Raavi and the also the one who looks over Raavi's kingdom while she's in training.

Aaryyan-A vagabond, who does not know much about his past. He roams the land of Hind from place to place looking for his identity. The only clue he has is the swastika pendant he wears, which is supposed to lead him to his roots and his destiny.

Note-Characters will be added here as the stoy develops!

Part Archive:

Part 1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=908517&T PN=1

Part 2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=908517&T PN=2

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Shruti11 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 to read a ff based on rajkumar aaryan but dony change bhairvi name
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow first fan fic
awesome going

just waiting for the next part like anything...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Please post the first chapter...it will be nice to read a nicely worded one on RA and I am happy to see specifically leaning towards Bhairavi first and foremost...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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im glad u guyz like the concept... i have started working on the first part..juzz got back from work so wont be able to finish it.. buh it will be up tomorrow :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 1

The wind sashayed its way through the trees as clouds rook over the sky. The birds were hurriedly gathering food and making sure all their children were protected. It was obvious a storm was on its way. Princess Bhairavi loved this sort of weather and would never miss a chance to stroll out. Usually she would go out dressed up as a commoner and visit the pond located in the center of the village. Today was no different; Bhairavi quickly finished her sword fighting lessons and hurried to her chambers to change. She dressed up in men clothes and covered her face with the cloth from her turban (sorry if this didn't make any sense lolz)! After a little while she mounted her white horse and rode off to the village. There was a sort of a rush. The shopkeepers were moving their stock in so it wouldn't be ruined by the rain. The ladies were calling in their kids and moving the animals to safety. Bhairavi gave everyone a assuring look and rode by. Everything would be back to normal after the storm. It always was. Aryanagar saw to many of these storms in a year.

--X--

Now, a huge storm cloud could be seen forming on the east side of Aryanagar, the capital of Hind. The storm was soon approaching, but Bhairavi carried on anyway. She finally reached the pond. It was surrounded by lush green vegetation -tall and slender willow trees surrounded the pond. There were little rose bushes of all sorts in one corner. Peacocks could also be seen roaming here and there was no human soul was present but Bhairavi. She mounted off the horse and took a seat under her favourite Willow. She had even given it a name. It was her Bahaar (spring) tree. Sitting under that treen gave her immense pleasure, for some reason she felt very closely attactched to it. It stood close to the rose bushes on the very edge of the lake and had the most beautiful view of the scenery. Bhairvi had barely settled down on the ground, she noticed a presence of some kind. She was alerted at once but calmed herself down. She got up and took her sword out and looked around. Her eyes met with a stranger and something terrible happened… To be continued!

How did u guyz like that😃! Lemme noe

Tc, Ravz

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Posted: 17 years ago
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GREAT GOING
hope to see all teh parts put up soon and soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cool starting i loved it when u called bhairvi as bhaurvi it is easy for us to associate with this name pls post the next part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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glad ya like it.. next part will be up smetime tonight or tomorrow for sure 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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waiting for next part , its becoming very interesting 😊

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