Thanks for this lovely update...👏❤️
Ohhh... Vansh💔😢
Don't want another heartbreak of riddhu 🥺 but story needs these...
By the way, whom can we imagine as Rian????
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Thanks for this lovely update...👏❤️
Ohhh... Vansh💔😢
Don't want another heartbreak of riddhu 🥺 but story needs these...
By the way, whom can we imagine as Rian????
Originally posted by: scintillaxx
Hey Abby,we are never going to forget this one..especially me it has a special place❤
I just don't know how to express myself ...I am feeling mixture of sad &content
lets try
Riddhima- journey from pawn to queen...'emotions' her weakness for now maybe could turn her strength in future...she is struggling really hard with it,its an integral part of what makes her....I don't know whether should I be sad or happy that Rian has found how to remove her innonce-heartbreak...sad her trust would be broken if she falls for it or content that after this no one could break her..Rian said right she is much stronger than the world..
Vansh-I want to hate him but cant completely...betray by ur family is the worst thing that can happen to anyone...I can just imagine what will happen when he will see Shera with her in future..he cant keep her with him nor he can let her go...lets see what holds in future
Rian-The Most Complex character of the story yet❤it will take more time for me to understand him😅..but I absolutely love his character..his every conversation is ❤I read it so slowly trying to interpret the most I can..I always wait for his part..
sometimes I do wonder how much time would u spent thinking abt him🤔his conversation is always ❤
Its okay dear,work is also important
Take care🤗
Thank you so much for liking this story and you know waiting for this since many days
Right now Ridhima struggling very hard like you know she’s badly hurt by the comment of emotional Fool that he or she trying so much in her life and she also feels right that she cannot be a mother so after going through so much yet someone says that you are a fool am unable to understand mind games that emotional turmoil is completely different so let’s see to what extent she can try to be like this two men of our life
Vansh he never thought he would be betrayed I mean he might have thought about it but in reality going Thru is completely different so is just keeping away from his life and at the same time he doesn’t want her to be in this mafia sector also so let’s see what is going to do
Rian when I started the story I never thought I would be writing such a complex character I know what are the traits need to be carried like the basic ones I have in mind but chapter by chapter with the flow his character has become very complex and trust me it takes so much of time for me to write his lines because it should be in such a way that it should show his attitude like bad or grey or flaw yet his lines should make sense to the other person it should actually make some sense in such a way that it is right thing to do in that situation so yeah it’s a quite complex for me also to put this character
Originally posted by: scintillaxx
hey even I was reading Ajnabi today again😆...so much common man..some kind of telepathy?
I am glad you guys are reading that story again and again of the ages I have written it and I was like I don’t know if all my stories went with the flow rather than some preplanning so yeah it makes me feel so good that you guys are liking it even today that I completed completed it two or three months ago but still you guys are liking it event today
Originally posted by: scintillaxx
tbh when I opened my acc in this forum I was unable to connect I was going to delete it..it was just then I came across BROKEN I read it..I just loved it❤..but I didn't comment that time bcs I was not so sure abt the privacy and cyber stuff abt the forum...now I am sure & am really glad I discovered this forum and read such amazing stuff...
😁
I am glad you have read broken and now this FF and also Ajnabi you are reading so I am glad that you are part of all my stories like thank you so much if I really get any other word than that I would really say that you guys
Thanks for this lovely update...👏❤️
Ohhh... Vansh💔😢
Don't want another heartbreak of riddhu 🥺 but story needs these...
By the way, whom can we imagine as Rian????
Thank you so much for liking the chapter and the story I know at this moment you people are having sympathy to him and let’s see how this character is going to shape up and another heartbreak let me tell you Shera didn’t agree yet so let’s see what his point would be on this and Rian let me introduce him when Ridhima sees him
Originally posted by: Abhyudaya
Thank you so much for liking the chapter and the story I know at this moment you people are having sympathy to him and let’s see how this character is going to shape up and another heartbreak let me tell you Shera didn’t agree yet so let’s see what his point would be on this and Rian let me introduce him when Ridhima sees him
If you like I want to suggest someone, Michele morrone, he gives those killer mafia vibes...
If you like I want to suggest someone, Michele morrone, he gives those killer mafia vibes...
If I am writing a Hollywood fan fiction series then I would certainly pick this guy but this is a Hindi show right so give me someone give me Indian options actually I have one in my mind but yeah like I really need someone who matches Vansh height and attitude and I have couple in my mind no one is finalised yet so you can give me your names
Actually discussing has if I’m going to direct or present the story and you are being my casting director where to where we have come😁😁😂😂😂
Originally posted by: Abhyudaya
If I am writing a Hollywood fan fiction series then I would certainly pick this guy but this is a Hindi show right so give me someone give me Indian options actually I have one in my mind but yeah like I really need someone who matches Vansh height and attitude and I have couple in my mind no one is finalised yet so you can give me your names
Actually discussing has if I’m going to direct or present the story and you are being my casting director where to where we have come😁😁😂😂😂
Ya... It's an Indian show so🤔🤔 you can see about Namik paul.
If we are having a person's face in mind then it's easy to imagine the scenario. And ya...this discussion 😁😁😅 your FF is so good that I cannot stop myself thinking about it.🤩
Originally posted by: Abhyudaya
If I am writing a Hollywood fan fiction series then I would certainly pick this guy but this is a Hindi show right so give me someone give me Indian options actually I have one in my mind but yeah like I really need someone who matches Vansh height and attitude and I have couple in my mind no one is finalised yet so you can give me your names
Actually discussing has if I’m going to direct or present the story and you are being my casting director where to where we have come😁😁😂😂😂
really yaar..every scene I imagine someone new😆 if the heights matches attitude mai who dum nahi..attitude matches then height not...I am really confused
Hey Abby.....
I read 2 chapters...and how I wish such things would happen in show.
Finally vansh in this story is dangerous,have hint of everything going on and Riddhima got someone who loves and protect her...
I will read other chapters and comment.
First I will complete this one than I will read previous one.
Its more interesting afterall its out and out dark mafia story.👍