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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 17

Mind-blowing update !!!!!

Geet kisses maan NOT ONCE BUT TWICE!!!!💕❤️♥️ & on the lips !!! 😃🥳

Excuse me while I do the happy dance

Ok ok I will calm down 😆

I totally love how playful & silly 😜 drunk maan is ........ I know it is not sensible to over drink but it shows a different more vulnerable side to his rigid tough exterior..... there is certainly more depth than what he shows ...

....... curious to know what man he was talking about & how it relates to his mother ??? If I remember correctly his father passed away when he was young

Liked how geet took care of maan like a friend or perspective girlfriend 😉

Her allowing maan to lay in her lap while she listened to his drunk jibberish & calmly reassured him was superb

There definitely are some hidden feelings buried in our feisty gal .......

But my absolute favourite part of the update was that it was sealed with a kiss 😘 !!!!!


Thanks for the award & congrats to all the winners !

Thank you so much for the update


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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you for pm. Maan pareshan hai lekin nashe me kya bol rahe pata nahi chala.geet ko khud ko pata nahi why she helped him?

Interesting part 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

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geet with the help of waiters took maan till lift n then to room

geet is very surprise with her care for maan

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome part 👍

Maan looking so cute and geet also taking care of him can't wait to read next update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wonderful update dear

Geet took to maan hotel room with help of waters

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

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Posted: 4 years ago

She kissed him. Don't know if he was in his senses enough to know.

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the pm

Part 17

Fascinating update........ beautifully written

Maan is full of himself even though he is drunk

great that she got the people at the bar to help her

Maan is giving her a hard time

oh no Geet's colleague sees her with mind and assumes she is with Maan

I am sure Geet will be the talk of the hospital

finally Geet manages to take Maan to the room

liked that Geet is really taking care of him

ha ha she was right that only a wife or gf would do that

so what is she?

of cos Maan stops her from leaving

sad seeing Maan like this

oh so his mom has someone in her life?

feeling for Maan.....

adore when he put his head on her lap and she caresses his hair

Gosh she kissed him twice.... on the cheek and then the lips

seems like her feelings towards him are changing...

I guess Maan will not remember what happened


update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 17)

Winner: Creampuff⭐️

Runner-ups: Khwaishfan

Special Mention: Coderlady, Alamelu,

Early BirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): sanum23, Alamelu, maangeetgmmg

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32



Special Announcement:

I had this great idea. I was thinking of calling very special guest for the interview. Please add your questions with your comments too or ask them separately. Our very own Maan & Geet are coming for the interview. Ask them anything you want. They will answer you guys on anything and everything. For reference please see the posts under this part replying khwaishfan and creampuff, the reply section got hijacked my Maan & Geet. So be ready with the questions

Note:

Let’s continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right

Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai

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Part 18

She watches him passing out

G- Good night.

She plants a light kiss on his cheek

Geet looks at him intently for few minutes while he was sleeping

She leans forward and kisses him lightly on the lip

Ab Maan lag hi itna cute raha tha sote huye

She records a video on her phone and sends to Maan ki ye ye hua...isliye he is in the hotel room...Geet usko leke aayi...now she is leaving coz she has 5 am shift. And remember to drink water

++++++

Ab Geet ki shift khatam ho gai.

She couldn't concentrate on her work

She just wondering ki Maan utha ki nahi

10 am uski shift khatam hui

Geet ne socha hospital toh pass hi hai hotel ke

Gai toh dekha Maan ki car abhi bhi khadi hai

She goes towards the room

Geet ne room ki bell bajai

Maan had just stepped out of a steaming bath

He is in a bathrobe where deep V of skin showing in front...hint of pecs can be seen

He opens the door

Geet ke saamne wet dishelved bathrobe wala Maan

She freezed in the moment gasping for air

He is practically naked...she thinks...then she realizes what she is doing

G- emmm...emm...I came to check how you are doing....emm...clearly not a good time...I will go

M - Disappointed?

He says with his sideways smug smirk

G-Huh?

She raises her eyebrow

M- That I am awake, and you can't take advantage of me anymore

G-HUH?

She frowns

M- No need to pretend, I remember last night perfectly well

Geet slams the door close and walks away

G- Gadha! Idiot! Fool!

She muttering to herself

G- Ek thanks bhi nahi bol sakta ye...aur main hi hoon ki chintaa se mare jaa rahi hoon

He would have thanked her if he would have remembered the correct things

After he got up he remembered the night in bits and pieces like:

· Ki Geet ko harass kiya manager ne

· There was some talk about his weight….he wonders did Geet say something in lines of that she likes to feel his weight on her (like they are on bed and Geet is under him and she likes it kind of weight) or did he imagine her saying this.... But there definitely was some weight talk...what else could it have been if not this?... Maan feels happy

He is very confused as to where they are at in this relationship....

He also remembers she groped his ass…..there was something about the keys


But keys toh front desk pe bhi thi…that means she really wanted to touch me that’s why she touched my ass so intimately

Maan ko toh ab pakka bharosa hai ki last night Geet openly groped his ass in public..

He also vaguely remembers she said ‘F*ck you!’

He takes it as a compliment

What Maan remembers after waking up is not the innocent cheek pulling part but Geet taking advantage of his drunk state

He is in a totally confused state about Geet

He knows he can't order her around and he doesn't just play around with her

Is he ready to think about commitment coz that is where it will go if he tries to pursue this?

+++++++

Udhar Geet is berating herself in her mind while going back home

G- Why was I worrying about a jerk like him again? You stupid, Geet!

++++++++

The annoying harassing manager from last night got fined for his behavior with VVIP guest

The guest being Geet...

Maan made sure the manager got punished for harassing Geet

+++++++

Since aaj shift mein bhi Geet khoyi khoyi si thi toh rumors toh hospital mein aag ki tarah phail gaye

Geet ko dekh ke sabko yakeen ho gaya ki rumors sahi bhi hain

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 17

Mind-blowing update !!!!!

Geet kisses maan NOT ONCE BUT TWICE!!!!💕❤️♥️ & on the lips !!! 😃🥳

Excuse me while I do the happy dance

Ok ok I will calm down 😆

I totally love how playful & silly 😜 drunk maan is ........ I know it is not sensible to over drink but it shows a different more vulnerable side to his rigid tough exterior..... there is certainly more depth than what he shows ...

....... curious to know what man he was talking about & how it relates to his mother ??? If I remember correctly his father passed away when he was young

Liked how geet took care of maan like a friend or perspective girlfriend 😉

Her allowing maan to lay in her lap while she listened to his drunk jibberish & calmly reassured him was superb

There definitely are some hidden feelings buried in our feisty gal .......

But my absolute favourite part of the update was that it was sealed with a kiss 😘 !!!!!


Thanks for the award & congrats to all the winners !

Thank you so much for the update



yayyyy happy dance!!! every kiss also makes me do happy dancesmiley41smiley41smiley41smiley41smiley41smiley41

Definition of happy dance: Happy dance is a ritualistic dance that every reader and writer of fic has to do if the mail characters kiss. Happy dance denotes the purity of craziness🤪

Yeah its not sensible to over drink....blah blah who cares....drunk Maan is adorbs!!!

****

Geet frowning at readers and writer drooling over drunk Maan

G-People are drooling at drunk you, Maan

M-well...

G-Get my chainsaw

Geet orders blankly with determination in her eyes

Maan starts to grab his helmet

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for the pm

Part 17

Fascinating update........ beautifully written

Maan is full of himself even though he is drunk

great that she got the people at the bar to help her

Maan is giving her a hard time

oh no Geet's colleague sees her with mind and assumes she is with Maan

I am sure Geet will be the talk of the hospital

finally Geet manages to take Maan to the room

liked that Geet is really taking care of him

ha ha she was right that only a wife or gf would do that

so what is she? hahhaha good question...lets ask Geet

of cos Maan stops her from leaving

sad seeing Maan like this

oh so his mom has someone in her life?

feeling for Maan.....

adore when he put his head on her lap and she caresses his hair

Gosh she kissed him twice.... on the cheek and then the lips

seems like her feelings towards him are changing...

I guess Maan will not remember what happened


update soon

khwaishfan asks Geet

khwaishfan: what are you Maan's Wife or GF?

Geet looks at khwaishfan with stoic expression

Geet: I am his most frightening nightmare! I am his death!!!

Gives out a maniac laugh

Maan rolls his eyes from behind

Maan: She is my friend. Thank you, khwaishfan

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