Star Commentor Award (Part 17)
Winner: Creampuff⭐️
Runner-ups: Khwaishfan
Special Mention: Coderlady, Alamelu,
Early BirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): sanum23, Alamelu, maangeetgmmg
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏









































Special Announcement:
I had this great idea. I was thinking of calling very special guest for the interview. Please add your questions with your comments too or ask them separately. Our very own Maan & Geet are coming for the interview. Ask them anything you want. They will answer you guys on anything and everything. For reference please see the posts under this part replying khwaishfan and creampuff, the reply section got hijacked my Maan & Geet. So be ready with the questions
Note:
Let’s continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun
Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right
Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai
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Part 18
She watches him passing out
G- Good night.
She plants a light kiss on his cheek
Geet looks at him intently for few minutes while he was sleeping
She leans forward and kisses him lightly on the lip
Ab Maan lag hi itna cute raha tha sote huye
She records a video on her phone and sends to Maan ki ye ye hua...isliye he is in the hotel room...Geet usko leke aayi...now she is leaving coz she has 5 am shift. And remember to drink water
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Ab Geet ki shift khatam ho gai.
She couldn't concentrate on her work
She just wondering ki Maan utha ki nahi
10 am uski shift khatam hui
Geet ne socha hospital toh pass hi hai hotel ke
Gai toh dekha Maan ki car abhi bhi khadi hai
She goes towards the room
Geet ne room ki bell bajai
Maan had just stepped out of a steaming bath
He is in a bathrobe where deep V of skin showing in front...hint of pecs can be seen
He opens the door
Geet ke saamne wet dishelved bathrobe wala Maan
She freezed in the moment gasping for air
He is practically naked...she thinks...then she realizes what she is doing
G- emmm...emm...I came to check how you are doing....emm...clearly not a good time...I will go
M - Disappointed?
He says with his sideways smug smirk
G-Huh?
She raises her eyebrow
M- That I am awake, and you can't take advantage of me anymore
G-HUH?
She frowns
M- No need to pretend, I remember last night perfectly well
Geet slams the door close and walks away
G- Gadha! Idiot! Fool!
She muttering to herself
G- Ek thanks bhi nahi bol sakta ye...aur main hi hoon ki chintaa se mare jaa rahi hoon
He would have thanked her if he would have remembered the correct things
After he got up he remembered the night in bits and pieces like:
· Ki Geet ko harass kiya manager ne
· There was some talk about his weight….he wonders did Geet say something in lines of that she likes to feel his weight on her (like they are on bed and Geet is under him and she likes it kind of weight) or did he imagine her saying this.... But there definitely was some weight talk...what else could it have been if not this?... Maan feels happy
He is very confused as to where they are at in this relationship....
He also remembers she groped his ass…..there was something about the keys
But keys toh front desk pe bhi thi…that means she really wanted to touch me that’s why she touched my ass so intimately
Maan ko toh ab pakka bharosa hai ki last night Geet openly groped his ass in public..
He also vaguely remembers she said ‘F*ck you!’
He takes it as a compliment
What Maan remembers after waking up is not the innocent cheek pulling part but Geet taking advantage of his drunk state
He is in a totally confused state about Geet
He knows he can't order her around and he doesn't just play around with her
Is he ready to think about commitment coz that is where it will go if he tries to pursue this?
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Udhar Geet is berating herself in her mind while going back home
G- Why was I worrying about a jerk like him again? You stupid, Geet!
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The annoying harassing manager from last night got fined for his behavior with VVIP guest
The guest being Geet...
Maan made sure the manager got punished for harassing Geet
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Since aaj shift mein bhi Geet khoyi khoyi si thi toh rumors toh hospital mein aag ki tarah phail gaye
Geet ko dekh ke sabko yakeen ho gaya ki rumors sahi bhi hain
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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