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Posted: 4 years ago

His imagination is flying wild. He thinks she wants him really bad and she is thinking what a jerk.

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Nice update..

Continue soon..

Thank you for pm..

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Posted: 4 years ago

18

fantastic

maan remembering which is in favor and thinks that geet is interested in him

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Posted: 4 years ago

thank you for the pm

Congrats to all winners👏⭐️


Part 18

tremendous update.... eloquently written

so she finds him cute while sleeping

thoughtful of her to send Maan a video about what happened

well Geet is affected by Maan

great she goes to see Maan

gosh she did not expect to see Maan with just a bathrobe

not surprised that Maan teases Geet

this Maan is arrogant.... he should have thanked her

as expected Geet is furious

of cos Maan assumes she groped his ass and took advantage of him

Maan is confused about what happened....

glad that he is think about a serious relationship with Geet

Geet berates herself for caring about Maan

liked that Maan dealt with the manager for harassing Geet

oh no rumors are circulating at the hospital....

I guess Maan will have see the video and realise what actually happened.


Questions for Geet:

1. how will she respond to her colleagues about the rumors?

2. what does she feel for Maan?


Questions for Maan?

1. Why is he so arrogant?


update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 18)

Winner: Creampuff⭐️, Khwaishfan⭐️

Runner-ups: taahir004, Alamelu,

SpecialMention: UmaDevi97

EarlyBirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): UmaDevi97,NeenaDd, akkub.92

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32



QnA with Maan & Geet:

NilzStorywriter: Welcome to the QnA session. We have our very special guests Maan & Geet


Both of them looking as if they have been kidnapped

NilzStorywriter: Honestly never expected you guys would come

Geet: I am your friend. I had to come. Why is he here?

Maan answers stoically while giving Geet a sideways glare

Maan: She is also my friend

Geet: Then Nilz, you need better friends

Nilz trying to suppress her laugh

Nilz: Anyways, our readers have some questions for you

Both of them nod

Nilz: So, first set of questions is by Creampuff. Actually, all her questions are for Geet

Geet smirks

Geet: Obviously

Maan: Obviously people with bad communications skill confuse people

Geet glares at Maan while Maan looks at her smugly

Nilz trying to normalize the situation

Nilz: Creampuff, please ask your question

Geet: Hey Creampuff!

Creampuff: Hey Geet! So my first question is: Do you have any feelings for Maan?

Geet: Yes,of course. Contempt is a feeling, frustration is a feeling

Maan: Well, its mutual


Geet: Nobodya sked you! Literally nobody asked you a question


She bursts out laughing at her own joke


Creampuff:Second question is: on a scale of 1 to 10 with 10 being the highest ...,, what would you rate Maan ?


Geet: 100. He is 100% annoying


She says not looking at Maan while he is glaring at her


Maan: It was on scale of 1 to 10, you genius


Maan mutters sarcastically


Nilz: Thank you Creampuff. Now we will take questions from Khwaishfan


Khwaishafan:Hey. My question is for Geet


Geet: I am ready


Khwaishafan: How will you respond to your colleagues about the rumors?


Geet: What rumors?


Khwaishafan: About you and Maan being together


Maan suddenly interested


Maan: There are rumors?


Geet: Shhhh!


She shushes Maan


Geet: So, I don’t care what people do in idle time. They have too much time to create fairy tales


Khwaishafan: What do you feel for Maan?


Geet: Lots of things between contempt, frustration and annoyance


Maan: You meant contempt on content? You are contented with me


Maan says smugly


She rolls her eyes


Khwaishafan: Now next question is for Maan


Maan: Yes please


Khwaishafan: Why are you so arrogant?


Geet bursts out laughing hysterically almost falling off the chair


Maan waits folding his arms around his chest waiting for Geet to stop laughing


He answers


Maan: I don’t think I am arrogant. I don’t know why it comes across like that. I am quite friendly


Nilz: Thank you guests and readers. Today’sQnA ends here. We will be back if readers would want more of the QnAs. Till then bye bye


Everybody waves bye while Geet is poking Maan calling him arrogant and Maan is trying to move away

Note:

Let’s continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right

Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai

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Part 19

Since aaj shift mein bhi Geet khoyi khoyi si thi toh rumors toh hospital mein aag ki tarah phail gaye

Geet ko dekh ke sabko yakeen ho gaya ki rumors sahi bhi hain

+++++++++++++

Geet was annoyed the whole day at Maan

How could he think like that?

That jerk! Gadha!

I helped and he thought that….

Haan maana ki when he took out that gun, then I found it irresistibly hot but that doesn’t mean ki…ki….I mean that was just a thought….just a thought nothing else…and I have brushed it off

She was thinking to herself

++++++++++++

Next day

Maan thought ki maine wo Piyush wale kaand ke liye bhi sorry nahi kaha aur kal ke liye bhi thanks nahi kaha Geet ko

I should have thanked her aur sorry toh kehna hi chahiye tha

Sorry toh is long overdue

+++++++++++++

Geet apne routine rounds se guzar rahi thi

Hospital ke beecho beech reception pe Maan khada hai bada sa bouquet le ke

She frowns seeing him

This guy never fails to surprise yet annoy her

Ab hospital ke log bhi sab reception pe aa gaye, including Geet’s friends

She walks to him

G- Why are you here?

She mutters to him

M- To give you this

He answers nonchalantly

G- Sabke saamne show karna zaruri hai? Please go and never come back

She felt offended by his reaction last morning

She thought they had something deeper

She doesn't care for just anybody by not sleeping the whole night...but Maan ruined it all

He is getting under her skin now

Geet jaldi se bouquet leke apne cabin mein chali jaati hai

Maan also goes back

Geet’s friend come to her cabin

‘Hi’

G-Hi

‘So?’

G-So?

‘How was the hook up that day’

Geet rolls her eyes

G-I was with Maan

She states flatly

Ab toh friends ko confirm ho gaya ki Maan-Geet mein something serious is brewing

++++++++

Ab kai din ho gaye

No contact between the two

Actually, Geet was avoiding him more

She receives a video call from Maan’s number

She wonders isko kya hua

She picks up the call

M- Why have you not been picking up my calls or replying to my messages?

She is silent

M- What? Answer me?

G- How does it matter? See I don’t want to be part of this childish game anymore

M- What game?

G- I know what you are doing

M- What am I doing?

G-You know what you are doing. I know Piyush told you everything about the past and you are just making fun of it. …rubbing it on my face

She sniffles

G- I...didn’t...I...didn’t expect this from you

She is struggling to hold back her tears

Maan wasn’t expecting this at all

M- I….don’t know anything. Piyush didn’t tell me anything. I am not doing anything. What are you talking about?

She trying to gain back her composure

M- Geet, don’t cry


He says softly

G- Why are you hell bent on hurting me?

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Omg di you are absolutely hilarious!!!

I read your comments for myself & kwaishfan in the parkade at work & I burst out laughing in front of a stranger who probably thinks I am crazy 😜..... b/c of the weird looks I was getting ........ but that’s ok maybe I will borrow geet’s chainsaw. 😂

thanks for the good laugh & the stress buster updates 🤗

Hahahahhaha thanks a lot for liking it. To be honest, you made my day with this comment for sure🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 18

Commitment!!!!???? 😳

So geet ‘s concern & her taking care of maan got warped in maan’s drunk mind 😆

He is positive she wanted to grope his ass .... ( do you blame her 😉)

...... he thinks she took advantage of him 🤣🤣

Maan is a gadha but he is geet’s gadha 😆

Geet on the other hand was speechless when she saw maan out of the shower 😳

......., 🥵woah it suddenly became hotter !!!

So maan overactive imagination thinks geet finds him irresistible & is thinking about commitment b/c geet is not a hook up kind of gal

I know maan is a gadha but I like where this is leading ....

so here are my questions to geet :

1)Do you have any feelings for maan?

2)on a scale of 1 to 10 with 10 being the highest ...,, what would you rate maan ?

Thank you so much di for such entertaining updates !!! You have such a good sense of humour 🤗


Awww Geet's gadha sounds so cute...he is GG. Thanks for liking and enjoying my style of writing

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thank you for the pm

Congrats to all winners👏⭐️


Part 18

tremendous update.... eloquently written I loved the word eloquent so much

so she finds him cute while sleeping 😉can we blame her?

thoughtful of her to send Maan a video about what happened as if it helped Maan from remembering

well Geet is affected by Maan

great she goes to see Maan

gosh she did not expect to see Maan with just a bathrobe

not surprised that Maan teases Geet

this Maan is arrogant.... he should have thanked her

as expected Geet is furious

of cos Maan assumes she groped his ass and took advantage of him

Maan is confused about what happened....

glad that he is think about a serious relationship with Geet

Geet berates herself for caring about Maan

liked that Maan dealt with the manager for harassing Geet well technically manager harassed Maan, but Maan and his mins-remembering

oh no rumors are circulating at the hospital....

I guess Maan will have see the video and realise what actually happened.


Questions for Geet:

1. how will she respond to her colleagues about the rumors?

2. what does she feel for Maan?


Questions for Maan?

1. Why is he so arrogant?


update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Where did the Piyush chapter come in? Is she still thinking about that? He never did apologize and tell her he backed out of that.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update

Rumors about maaneet but poor geet hurt by maan hope maan clarify everything soon

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