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Posted: 5 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Amekha

Anika 🤗🤗 Feel like hugging you. That was an awesome update.

4th chapter was good. Vansh feeling guilty and apologising and Riddhu forgiving him was really sweet.

5th chapter is the best one so far. Their romance is so dreamy . They haven't confessed their love and already this close😆. Can't wait to see what happens in farmhouse 🤣


Their pain connects them this deep.. imagine,jab confession hoga tab kya hoga??? Thank you so much for the comment.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: ArohaShah

This Riansh lala land is amazing loving it ❤️❤️❤️


Thank you Aroha..

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Posted: 5 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Fa13

Lovely chap.

Beautifully written...👏👍🏼

Just loved it!!

RiAnsh moment...😳

Riddhu teasing Vansh..🤣🤣🤣

Thanks for the pm.

Do continue soon.


Thank you for the comment.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: TC_FA

Beautiful update😍

Can't wait for the next update


Thank you so much.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Gaurirane366

Wow.... :)

I was imagining all scenario playing in my mind... ❤️

Thank u..


Awwwiee... Thank you,Gauri.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#96

Hey Anika when ll u updt this one????😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Ziva01

Hey Anika when ll u updt this one????😳

Today at night,dear.. kuch cheezo ka maza sirf raat ko hi aata hai!!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Anika_PreRish

Today at night,dear.. kuch cheezo ka maza sirf raat ko hi aata hai!!!

Okie ji ...ll wait then☺️😆😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
#99

Ch 6.


"My soul always had a space that I couldn't claim,I couldn't name;
Then you came along,
And I understood,
It always belonged to you.."


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After a good 1 hour drive,they've reached the farmhouse. It was sprawled on a big area that also had a pathway to the beach. Riddhima's face had a big smile. She loved beaches and the peace it brought along. Her smile was enough to bring out the romantic Vansh.


He held her hand and brought him near her.


"Kaisa laga tumhe humara farmhouse?" He asked.


She kept her head on his shoulder,entwining their hands. "Bohut hi sundar hai.. Just as i like!!"


She ran towards the beach like a small kid and started playing run and chase with the waters. All the while,she had a cute smile etched on her face. Vansh stood there silently,taking in every drop of his wife's innocence.


"Haaye main marjawan!!" He rubbed his hand over his heart and smiled.


His feet automatically took him near him. He was in a daze. She was that light of hope in his life when everything felt incomplete and hazy. She was the source of happiness that rekindled the lost hope to love and live...


"Kisi shaam ki tarah,
Tera rang hai khila,
Main raat ek tanha,
Tu chand sa milla,
Haan tujhe dekhta raha,
Kissi khwab ki tarah,
Jo ab samne hai tu,
Ho kaise yakeen bhala..."


He kept on watching her childish antics. He could gauge the fact that this was suppressed in her when she was with Kabir. Same was with him. Now,he was proud of the fact that she is his life. He made a silent prayer to keep them together.


He went towards her and pulled her near him. She looked at him keenly,as she kept her palm on his cheeks. She could feel the love for her in his eyes.


Surprising her,he knelt down infront of her. Taking her hand in his,he said,


"Main phirse agar jee raha hu,toh sirf tumhari wajah se.. Main agar phirse pyaar karna seekha hai toh sirf tumhari wajah se.. Maanta hu ki hum dono mein kami hai par main inn kamiyon ko humare rishte mein haavi nahi hone dunga... Mujhe tum har ek janam keliye chahiye ho.. I... I love you,Riddhima.."


Tears brimmed in her eyes and covered her mouth to stop the sobs. She made him stand up... She couldn't see him like that.


"Main bhi aapse bohut pyaar karti hu,Vansh.. Main aapke bina ek pal bhi soch nahi sakti.. Aapne mujhe apnaya meri kami ke bawajood,itna acchi understanding family di hai,isse accha aur kya hosakta hai mere liye... Aap mere zindagi ke sabse ahem hissa ban gaye hai.. You filled up my world with your love,Vansh. Main vaada karti hu ki aapko kabhi chhor ke nahi jaungi... Kabhi nahi... I love you,Vansh.."


Saying this,she placed her lips on his cold ones. He deepened the kiss by pulling her near him and tightening his hold around her. She felt him pouring out all his love and passion in it.


"Toota jo kabhi tara,
Sajna ve,
Tujhe rab se maanga,
Rab se jo maanga,
Mileya ve,
Tu mileya toh,
Jaane na doonga main.."


They broke the kiss as they were in need of air. Riddhima was blushing throughout. They hugged each other tightly,not letting an inch of air pass through them..


"Main tumhe apne aap se kahi dur nahi jaane dunga.. Ek baar dard seh chuka hu,ab nahi seh paunga.." Vansh said,as his voice became heavy due to tears.. He drowned himself in her thick tresses to find some solace.


"Sssh!! Vansh!!! Kuch nahi hoga!! Hum saath hai na,aur humesha rahenge!! Promise!!" Riddhima's words gave him some peace.


He broke the hug and was about to lift her up,but she was in the mood of teasing him. She slowly walked backwards and started to run away..


Understanding the fact that she was teasing him,he ran behind her,trying to catch her.


"Riddhima,idhar aao jaldi.."


"Main itne aasani se haath nahi aane wali,Vansh.. Pakar ke bataiye.." Riddhima replied back..


Peals of laughter and joy filled the space.. They entered the farmhouse compound and were running behind each other like kids.


"Abhi dikhata hu pakarke.." Vansh said and a smirk covered his face...


The house became lively again with their laughter resonating in every nook and cranny.. He held her hand,pulled her and pinned her to the nearest wall.. She looked at him intensely,with love. She placed a warm kiss on his eyes.


"Haan maine suni hai,
Pariyon ki kahani,
Waisa hi noor tera,
Chehra hai tera roohani,
Aa tujhko main apni,
Baahon mein chupa loon,
Haan apni iss zameen ko,
Kar doon main aasmani..."


She was still caged in his embrace. She was a fairy sent by Bhagwan to heal the pain and mess he was in.. He observed that her face had a glow which all newly wed brides had,but her one had something different. He could sense that.


She was feeling very shy to say that she wanted to be his,forever. She went near him and hugged him lightly. She mustered some courage and spoke her heart out.


"I want to be yours,Vansh. Just make me yours.. Please!!"


"All okay,Riddhima?? Tum ro kyun rahi ho??" Vansh asked,concerned.


She nodded her head in negative and replied, "Yeh khushi ke aansu hai,Vansh.. Mujhe sirf aapki hoke rehna hai.. Aapke andar samaana chahti hu.. Aapke pyaar ko mehsoos karna chahti hu.. Bas aur kuch nahi!!"


"Main tumhari wishes ke khilaaf jaake kuch nahi karunga,Riddhima.. Are you sure?" Vansh asked softly,cupping her face.


She nodded and hugged him tightly,to give her assurance. He had a smile on his face. Finally, they were going to be one.


He lifted her up in his strong embrace and went towards their room. Her hands were around his neck for support. She placed a sloppy kiss on his cheeks,as a gesture of thanking him for allowing her to love him like anything.


The room was decorated simply with rose and jasmine petals sprawled on the bed, and, vanilla and rose scented candles were kit,making the environment of the room more romantic.


He never fails to amaze her. She thought.


He kept her down and went to lock the door. She sat in the middle,like a bride sits,waiting for her husband to come. He comes near her after locking the door.


"Thank you,Riddhima.. mere life mein aane keliye.. mujhe phirse jeena aur pyaar karna sikhane keliye.. I love you,swetheart.." And pulls her for a tight hug.


She could feel his tensed muscles relax. She pecked his cheeks and rubbed his back lightly.


He removed her dupatta and it fell in some random corner of the room.. His hands grazed over her creamy back and pulled the dori. Her hold tightened around his shoulder as she inhaled sharply at his feather like touches.


He placed wet kisses on her earlobe,nape, and shoulder,to feel every inch of her. On the other hand,Riddhima also placed wet kisses on his face,cheeks,eyes and jawline. She played with the buttons of his white kurta. He looked at her with loved filled eyes.


He carressed her warm face and slowly made her lie down. He opened his kurta and threw it on the floor,revealing his creamy caramel torso and six packs. Riddhima covered her eyes as she became shy and turned around,not being able to bear the proximity. In the process,her bare back was revealed,turning Vansh on.


Vansh laid down beside and hugged her from behind. He placed a kiss on her back and she immediately turned around and hugged him tightly.


"Are you ready,sweetheart?? Agar tum uncomfortable karti ho,please let me know,i will stop right then,okay?" Vansh said,pecking her forehead.


"Aap mujhe kabhi bhi hurt nahi karenge,mujhe aap pe pura vishwas hai.." Riddhima replied,love evident in her voice.


Vansh took it as a YES and both of them made love,completing each other and becoming one soul. The room was filled with moans and shivers as they loved each other, reached their peak and emptied themselves in each other.


"I love you,Sweetheart..'' Vansh confessed again.


"I love you too,meri jaan!!" Riddhima confessed and both of them slept,in each other's arms.


"Zindagi rok doon main,
Ab tere samne,
Pal do pal jo ruke,
Tu mere sath main,
Toota jo kabhi tara,
Sajna ve,
Tujhe rab se maanga,
Rab se jo maanga mileya ve,
Tu mileya toh,
Jaane na doonga main.."


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Precap: 6 month leap...

Edited by Anika_PreRish - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

omg,finally, they consummated ☺️

update soon

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