#2 itni mohabbat karo naa,pt 8 on pg 57 updt on 15/1 - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting👍🏼Looking forward to read it

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PART 1

One of the men hold raman's collar and said-teri itni himmat,hamari Ishu bitiya ko chooya tune,he said and punched Raman on stomach making him vomit blood.

Ishita closed her eyes and said-please ruk jaiye,aisa kuch nahi hua hai .hamare saath kuch galat nahi kiya hai,she said when the woman said-nahi,I saw him kissing her while she was struggling.isne ishu bitiya ke saath jabardasti ki hai.she said angrily while ishita was just trying to stop the men.

Ishita-hum keh rahen hai naa kuch nahi hua hai,aap log please jaiye yahan se.

Raman-yes sir,it was just a mista,he couldn't complete as he got punched again by another man.

Ishita-please aisa mat kijiye,inhe mat maariye,chod dijiye ,she was saying but noone listen to her and the woman said-isse toh baba sahab hi saza de sakte hai,isse unn ke paas le chalo.

Ishita's eyes got wide in shock and she said-nahi,iski zarurat nahi hai.hum keh rahe hai naa,inki koi galti nahi hai,jaane dijiye inhe.

Man-aise kaise bitiya,isne tumhe haath kaise lagaya .

Woman-aur chuma bhi,she said making Ishita irritated and she said-aap chup rahengi,hum baat kar rahen hai naa.hum bol rahen hai,inki galti nahi hai.inhe jaane dijiye,she said again while Raman too requested them to let him go.

Raman-it was just a mistake,I was looking for my girlfriend aur achanak se yeh aa gayi,he was saying when the woman said again-toh tumne inko chum liya,tumhe pata hai iss gaon mein iski kya saza hai,aur tumne toh ishu bitiya ko chuma hai,isse le chaliye.she said and all nodded.they hold Raman and was taking him with them while his eyes were looking for shagun.

Raman-kahan ho tum ,shagun??tum saath rahogi tabhi toh main iss problem se nikal paaunga,yeh saare pagal log pata nahi mere saath kya karenge,where r u sweetie,he was thinking looking for shagun while she ran away seeing the choas.

She was coming to them seeing them holding Raman and punching him but ran away seeing them with guns.

She ran to her car and told the driver to drive away as the car has been repaired .the driver asked about Raman and she scold him.

Shagun-usse nahi aana,let him be here.mujhe yahan se jaldi le chalo.waise bhi u r my driver,why u r enquiring about raman.she said and the driver drive away taking her away from the village.

Soon the men took Raman to baba saheb.raman saw a man in mid fifties was sitting on a chair,looking like some influencial person.

Baba saheb-kya hua??

Before the men or ishita can say anything Raman said-sorry sir,it was just a mistake .I was searching my girlfriend but suddenly another girl came infront of me,I couldn't recognise her and kissed her.i wasn't intended to do so,but ho gayi galti ,iske liye yeh log mujhe maar rahen hai,please mujhe bacha lijiye,he narrated everything even after ishita trying again and again to stop him.

Ishita close her eyes and thought-maa bhavani ab kya hoga,baba isse kabhi nahi chodenge.iss galti ki saza ab isse apni jaan de kar chukani padegi.please aisa mat hone dijiye maa bhavani ,yeh tabahi rok lijiye.she was thinking when baba saheb said-ishu bitiya,aap yahan kyun khadi hai,aap kamre mein jaiye.iss tarah kisi gair mard ke saamne achche ghar ki ladkiyan nahi aati .he said making Raman realised that the girl is actually his daughter only and that's why she was stopping him from telling everything.

He look at ishita and she said -ji baba,hum bas itna kehna chahte hai ki inse galti hui hai,koi gunaah nahi ,she was saying when baba saheb said-woh hum tay karenge,aap ander jaaye .hume nahi pasand koi hamari beti ko dekhe .he said and ishita went inside with Raman gulped his saliva in fear.

Raman-he don't even like me looking at her,I kissed her.kya karenge yeh log mere saath.kya kar sakte hai,koi murder thodi naa kiya hai,bas kiss hi toh kiya hai woh bhi galti se.ho jaati hai galti,main aise hi darr raha hoon ,stop being a scared kitten ,rammy.u r a fighter,a champ.he was thinking when baba saheb asked-kis ladki ko chooya hai isne??he asked and all look down not knowing how to answer him.

Baba saheb-hum kuch puch rahen hai??kaun hai woh ladki,kahan hai woh ladki??

Man-ishu bitiya,he said looking down while baba saheb got shocked hearing him and said-kisse??

Raman-aapki beti ko,but jaan bujh kar nahi,galti se ho gaya.toh please don't create a scene,he was saying only to get a tight slap from baba saheb.

He hold raman's neck and said choking him -himmat kaise hui hamari bachchi ko choone ki,iss galti ki maafi nahi milegi,saza milegi.he was saying and was tighting his hold on raman's neck while he was struggling hard to free himself.

Ishita was seeing everything from upstairs and was praying for some miracle to happen which can save the boy,but sadly nothing was happening.

Baba saheb was clutching Raman hard and he was just struggling.though Raman was young and baba saheb was old but he has more stamina then Raman.

Seeing no other option to save Raman,ishita finally called-baba.

He look at ishita and she nodded in no with teary eyes.

Baba saheb got confused seeing her and left raman.he fell on the ground lifelessly.

Baba saheb was still looking at Ishita and said to his men-iski treatment karao,marna nahi chahiye yeh. Iski saza abhi puri nahi hui hai.

His men nodded and took Raman from there dragging him.

Ishita's eyes got moist at everyone's inhumane behaviour.

Ishita-woh sirf ek galti hai,baba.iske liye aap iski jaan nahi le sakte,hum aapko aisa karne nahi denge.yeh galat hoga,bahut galat .she was talking to herself when baba saheb came to her and asked-aapne hume kyun roka??

Ishita-toh kya karte,aapko unhe maarte hue dekhte rehte,yun hi Khamosh rehte.aapko pata hai unse galti hui hai,usse gunnah mat banaiye,unhe jaane dijiye.

Baba saheb-aapka dimaag kharab ho gaya hai,usne aapko choone ki galti ki hai ,aur iss galti ki maafi nahi hai,sirf saza hai.maut ki saza.

Ishita-aap aisa nahi kar sakte,baba.

Baba saheb-hum kuch bhi kar sakte hai,usne aapko chooya,itne logon ne dekha, hamari kya izzat reh jayegi agar woh bach kar chala gaya,toh duniya kya kahegi,joh khud ki beti ko nahi bacha paaya woh kisi aur ke saath kya insaaf karega.

Ishita-toh aap apni jhoothi shaan ke liye kisi ki jaan le lenge??

Baba saheb-haan,usne galti ki hai aur usse uski saza milegi aur sabko sabak milega.hume bas itna bata dijiye,aapne hume kyun roka??

Ishita-hum chahte hai ki aap usse chod de.

Baba saheb-yeh nahi ho sakta,usne galti ki hai,usse saza milegi.maut ki saza.

Ishita-aap aisa nahi karenge ,baba.

Baba saheb-usse marna hoga ,ishu bitiya.aap inn sab mein mat padiye,apne kamre mein jaiye .uske saath kya karna hai hum dekh lenge.he said and was going when Ishita closed her eyes and said-aap unhe nahi maar sakte,hum pyaar karte hai ek dusre se.

Baba saheb turn to her in utter shock and she said-hum aapko unke baare mein batana chahte the,but yeh ho gaya.aap please unhe chod dijiye.

Baba saheb look at her in disbelief and said-aap jhooth toh nahi bol rahin??

Ishita-itna bada jhooth kyun bolenge hum??

Baba saheb-toh humse nazarein kyun nahi mila rahin??

Ishita-hum nahi chahte the aapko yeh sab aise pata chale,please unhe jaane dijiye.hume pasand hai woh,hum chahte hai unhe,she lied to save Raman.

Baba saheb-agar yeh sach hai toh hum unhe kuch nahi karenge.he said making her sigh in relief but got shocked hearing his next statement-balki aap dono ki shaadi karwa denge.

Ishita look at him and said-shaadi??

Baba saheb-haan,aap pyaar karti hai naa??

Ishita-hum karte hai,woh nahi karte,she said fumbling.

Baba saheb-usse bhi karna hoga,aap dono ki shaadi kal hi hogi .

Ishita-itni jaldi??

Baba saheb-yaa toh kal aap dono ki shaadi hogi yaa uski maut,hum iss baat ko khatam karna chahte hai,isse pehle ki yeh phaile.toh aap bataiye,yeh baat kaise khatam karna chahti hai,shaadi se yaa uski maut se.he asked looking at Ishita .

Seeing no other option she said-hum shaadi ke liye ready hai.she said and baba saheb went.

Ishita look at the sky and said-yeh kahan phansa rahin hai hume aap,maa bhavani.unki jaan bachane ke liye humne itna bada jhooth bola,ab shaadi karni padegi.yeh kahan phansa diya aapne hume .she said and closed her eyes in frustration seeing everything going out of hand.

That's all for now,enjoy.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Interesting story line pls continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#44

Awesome start di

Raman is badly trapped 😨

This shagun is so selfish 🙄😠

Ishita was trying to control the situation but couldn’t 🥺

She stopped baba at the right time

Omg......she lied to baba😳😳😳

Raman will definitely be dead shocked hearing about marriage 😟

Lets see what happens next

Ty 4 d pm too di

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Curious to know what will happen further!!! This shag in bloody how can she just left😤😤😤update soonish😘😘😘

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting update

Cont soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome chappy Di

Poor ishitha got struck

Update soon Di

Thanks for Pm Di

Sorry for the late reply Di

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Superb update

Eagerly waiting for next part

Plz continue soon

Nd thanks for pm

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome update

One man was beating raman ishita was trying to stop him lady said he kissed ishita bitiya ishita asked her to stop that man said they should take him to baba saheb ishita got shocked she tried to stop them but no one listened to her shagun ran away seeing that choas what kind of girlfriend she is raman was praying for shagun to come and save him he was taken to baba saheb raman explained him everything inspite of Ishita trying to stop him baba saheb asked her to go in room raman was shocked hearing she is baba saheb daughter he was praying for his life ishita told baba saheb it was mistake he asked her to go baba saheb asked who was the girl he was shocked hearing that was ishita he had almost killed raman ishita stopped him she lied to save raman she said she and raman love each other baba saheb said he will get them married she was shocked

Pls update soon

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 5 years ago
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awesome part

loved it

update soon

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