KK Krippling Konfusion

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello Knukkadians,

Time for another Knukkad already, though we await for events to unfold with a heavy heart and disappointment at the turn of events. Nevertheless Holi is around the Korner and here's wishing the Kolors and gaiety revive us.

I am putting up something I wrote down, for now until someone else comes with something more suitable and up to Knukkad standards 😳. Bear with me. All thanks to Ash for coming up with the title and helping with putting up this edition of the knukkad.

He lost his heart to an ice maiden

He tried so hard to thaw her out

and slowly she gave in

But then he became an imposter

To save a friend from disaster

All hell broke loose when his beau got news

and then he was all but done in

He begged her pardon

Tried to explain in vain

But she didnt relent

and he was in such pain

Woebegone and weary to bone

He bade her goodbye and moved on

The maiden in turn was ridden with guilt

She went on a mission to bring him back

He shooed her away but she wouldnt quit

By resorting to tricks she got him back

He reached out to her for a lil comfort

He wanted but a lil reassurance

but the ice maiden knew not how it felt

and she snapped at him in impatience

She denied any feelings and mocked at his love

Called him a friend and made him stagger

At every step she derided and hurt him now

Every word,every look stabbing him like a dagger.

What will become of him alas and his love story

Remains to be seen

With bated breath and heavy hearts

We await something unforseen.

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ashvez thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
@gina..Congrats!!!Superb Lines..Goes well with the situation.Thank You so much.
The last para...was really teary for me.

"What will become of him alas and his love story

Remains to be seen

With bated breath and heavy hearts

We await something unforseen."

Knukkadians welcome & congratulations. ...hope to bring some sunshine in Dr.Dude's life
😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#3
can u pm sabah, manu, aarti pls?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sara,sona,kristal,shal,hema,mehak,notty,spirit,marisa,
anu,sareeta, anagha, simi, smriti, sareena, done
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pmed all except Krystall,I dunno her ID.I guess I have covered all..even aarti & sareeta.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Marissa is spelled with single R or double r?..I have sent to Marissa.And the other sona is sarn7 rt???
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooh thanks Ash. I have sent kristal and marissa so no issues. Tx for the hlp. so we are in business again!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I think we covered all.
😊
Chalo..then Adios.Will meet tomorrow.Gudnighty!!!
Once again beautiful lines. 😃
ginak thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gud night ash and thanks again 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@gina..u are always welcome.Thanks to you for a such a wonderful opening.And yes we are in business..as long as the Dude is hanging there..we will rock. 😉

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