FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#3 (Chapter 28-34) - Page 18

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Just read the chap and loved the convo between rb and prena as well as between tanvi, adi and kukki. 

Yeyyy. I am so happy you liked it. Thank you 🤗

Mehra is a true gem for Rb. Hope prena reveals the truth soon. Indeed he is 😎

Wondering abt menakas reaction on rb and prenas marriage. You'll see in future updates :) I just hope you as a reader like whats there in store for Prerna-Rishabh-Menaka.

In love with this tanvi. Yeyyyyy.. makes me really happy..

Maybe rb still feels for prena. He feels respect and values her love for Kukki. Also he values how she saved his daughter, but it isn't love. In the beginning of the story one little change I made was to show him uncertain of his feelings for her before leaving Basu Badi. He thought he loved her but did he really love her or it was just a feeling because he spent 3 months with her.. she taking care of Kukki he wasn't sure. And after spending so much time in Mumbai, he has no feeling that is anywhere near love

Then Wat abt menaka and rb, Wat happened between them was it love or not. And most importantly whom does rishab loves heart fully prena or menaka 

He doesn't love anyone at present. He has drowned himself into Kukki and Work post what he did at Basu Badi. Kukki getting hurt because of his madness took a huge toll on him. So this time, you may not see him make any kind of approach towards her.. he will respect her, care for her, help her if needed but love nahi. This time Prerna has to realise if she loves him and make a move in his direction. 

Love to see Prerna actions how will she discover and express her love. How will Rb react to it.  Definitely I will love how u will show Rb, Prerna and menaka

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Another wonderful update from your pen. I loved it.. like loveeeeddd it. Every story and writer imagines characters differently and so do you, what I love the most about this story is that you'vr kept the characters so close to the ones in the show. You have your own stort going on but character traits are so well retained. That's commendable. And not just the leads but every character including Tanvi, Masi, Mr. Mehra is so well thought of. Everyone is as important as they could and should be.

Thank you so much for your kind and generous words. I do try to keep characters in their skin but also try to do something absolutely unexpected from them, else how do they make progress. I feel elated reading this.. 🤗

This shows.. I just said the truth.. 🤗

Rishabh-Prerna conversation is the highlight of the chapter, yet so intellegently you gave Adi-Tanvi their own limelight. Smart work over there. Like mentioned by so many readers, Tanvi's nails filing act was EPIC :) I could imagine show wali Tanvi do that.

I am trying to give each character it's own space, no matter how big or small. But when they appear they should have at least somethig to offer. It would be tricky to begin Tanvi-Aditya as a sepatate love story and I'd be happy to do that but then updates aynge hi nahi. So trying take them along Rishabh-Prerna. Hope you as a reader would like it

Good to know this. I am also very keen on how will trear Anurag when he comes back, I have seen a glimpse in the other OS, and he also had his own space. Let's see how his presence changes Prerna-Rishabh-Menaka dynamics. 

And Mr. Mehra, he is the best thing to have happened to Rishabh Bajaj in the show. His loyalty is so beautifully shown in the last conversation with Prerna. I lover his last line where he tells Prerna that he could look into Anurag's matter if Bajaj asks him to otherwise he won't. Amazing work there.

I agree Mr. Mehra as been one of the best character of the show. I am glad you liked his last conversation. Thank you 

No doubt about this, Mehra was amazing even with his littlest of presence.

Thank you for sharing your work with us. Looking forward to the next update. 

Thanks to you that you decide to spend your time reading.. I will try to update by wednesday. 

Waiting for it 🤗

Hello Sunshine

Loved the update as always!

I loved the way conversation turned out between PreRish. Prerna did say a lot of things to RB..but it wasn't a much heated one..the way i expected! I love the way it turned out..with Tanvi in between.. although i was saying almost same dialogues in my head..what PreRish were saying to her.. whenever she would interrupt them. 

RB getting irritated by seeing her entering into his personal space..Prerna showing care for RB..then everyone leaving them in the end.. everything well written..loved it.

RB ne 100 crore uda diye😛 

Mehra g knows PreRish ain't divorced..that makes sense because ofcourse he made the papers.and you have to file them in court. They never showed it in the show🤪

So many things to unfold in the story..PreRish ki shadi ka sach.. RB ke saamne..as he also don't remember that..aur Adi and Menaka ke saamne bhi..and then Anuraag ka sach RB ke saamne..and most important PreRish falling for each other.. so many interesting things..i am so excited.

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

I wanted to make it a light hearted scene, still convey the seriousness of the matter. Your commenta gives me so much relief that it could make you laugh.. yeyyy

oh it was amazing

Tanvi and Aditya will be amazing couple and it would just as amazing to watch their story. 

Trying to work on them.. I have to find a way ki aise hi beech beech mein I can show them making some progress.. a little at a time. Let's see how it goes. :)

It is and will go amazing I mean maybe I am thinking like way too future but wedding always makes you question your decisions and remember your past and give us all a bit of romance

So I am guessing Prerna will ask Mr Bajaj for help with those numbers and that is how they will keep meeting time and again. 

You guessed absolutely right. 😊

 waiting

Loved the scene between Mr Mehra and Prerna. Simple and all the facts were laid out clean. Nice that Prerna will have one person who she can trust in Mumbai who almost knows everything.

Thank you so much. Mr. Mehra is one sharp person yet loyal to his boss and he also has seen how Prerna had began to affect him but it all came to an end. Now a new beginning is needed but Prerna will have to initiate this time because Rishabh has now shut himself completely. 

You know it becomes even before beautiful when that door inch by inch opens again

@underline I tried giving them colours somehow it was not working😊

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Heyyy!

Hello Yoga.. how are you 🤗

It was a very nice update. Great to see Tanvi taking so much carr for Rishabh. The way she was demanding rather ordering Rishabh to take the medicines shows how much she cares for him and also how Rishabh has given her the right to scold him which is very rare. Also, Tanvi filing her nails was hilarious. The conversation between Tanvi and Aditya was also good.

Tanvi and Rishabh mended their relationship in the initial chapters. He knew what she felt for him but also explained that it wasn't right/possible. She also promised to be by his side always as a frnd and never betray like she did by helping Anurag. So they are now a family, and he has always allowed his family sort of that upper hand. Prerna had it to when she was his family. So iske liye he is okay with Tanvi scolding him, also he knows she is right. 

Rishabh's reactions to Prerna's words and accusations were superb. He handled the situation very well with utmost maturity. He did not lose his temper even for a bit. Prerna is acting very very immature. 

Rishabh has always been the mature, calm and composed while Prerna the exact opposite.  She will get better as she spends more time with him, but little immature and carefree side will always be there. Even if she becomes the best version of herself, she will do things that will irritate him.. to keep a contrast. He might bring discipline in her life, but she will also help bring out his fun side which he has locked away. Lets see if I am able to portray it through writing. Because I do have ideas but fall short because of my basic writing skills. 😁

Good conversation between Mr. Mehra and Prerna too. Glad that someone is there who understands her. 

Thank you so much 

Waiting for the next part!

Planning to update by tue or latest by wednesday. I saw your like on the PM request post so I will PM you when I post next. Thank you 

Heyyy!!! I'm doing great!

@underline - I'm sure you will be able to potray your thoughts through your writing. Yours is one of the best stories that I've read. 

Waiting for the updates!

Stay Safe!

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Waiting for when Prerna will update Bajaj on Anurag and the child ... Will Bajaj's attitude change towards her then?! 😎

Answer to this question that I have to this question in my mind is like this-

Disclosure will change a few things like he will know she is not married, understand her pain of losing a child and her love for Kukki. He will empathise with her, but should that be enough for him to feel love for her. I am not sure. Because if goes this way then it will reduce Bajaj/Kukki to just an option for Prerna to fall back on in absence of Anurag. I don't like that idea very much. I want to use the disclosure in a way that it brings change in Prerna's view about Bajaj not in Bajaj. She should know him so she could chose him for herself irrespective of her love for Kukki, irrespective of Anurag's presence/absence. I hope this is making some sense 😃

Absolute sense!

Honestly would want that too... Bajaj has to be a conscious choice even if Anurag comes back... Prerna's view on Bajaj changing would be something... Waiting for Prerna to fall head over heels in love with Bajaj! Sigh! 

Meena ji…

Actually I read update 2 days back but bit lazy to type… so late comments

I had a smile all thru the update..

I expected a angry/heated wala outburst between too… but it was cute nok-jhok loved it..👍🏼

Tanvi added more beauty to that,  and little movement of Adi, Tanvi and kukkie 😉

Grown up tom & jerry right and I would love if u keep this particular fights in tact between them till end... It will spice up the things...

Rishab is still not taking caring of himself. And surrounded by too many ladies and kukkie’s giggles on this comment.👏

 Thank fully prerana understood his point after rishab’s explanation but she was so silly to fight for that. He clearly told that they can train, support and help but decision is hers.. Whatever it is??

She can go and fight him alone but needs Adi’s help to ask for rishab’s help reg work 

Mehra ji.. I loved this part. 

Prerana thinks him as a father figure that so nice.

Mehra knows about anurag missing and non-filing of divorce papers good atleast he is updated and he will to find him if rishab says.. even he feels prerana can never be over anurag..

Mam he rahenge mehraji ke liye .. dekhte hai..

Continue soon.. 

I am going to read chapter 2 today 

Initially I avoided this fiction for its length, but finally I decided to give it a read and I'm glad I did. This is so beautiful❤️ How I wish the makers had shown something like this after RB left but no...they had to ruin it and give us bhuli bisari daastan. Every time when RB reminds Pre that she has a 'family' now, I feel pain in my heart😭

This Poor guy doesn't know she lost everything that she had fought for love, trust, family and her child. All gone. I hope she tells him everything real soon. 

I've become so greedy for PreRish fictions, they're like my daily dose of happiness.😆pls update soon.

🙄 aj Wednesday hai