FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#3 (Chapter 28-34) - Page 18

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine


I wanted to make it a light hearted scene, still convey the seriousness of the matter. Your commenta gives me so much relief that it could make you laugh.. yeyyy

oh it was amazing

Tanvi and Aditya will be amazing couple and it would just as amazing to watch their story.

Trying to work on them.. I have to find a way ki aise hi beech beech mein I can show them making some progress.. a little at a time. Let's see how it goes. :)

It is and will go amazing I mean maybe I am thinking like way too future but wedding always makes you question your decisions and remember your past and give us all a bit of romance

So I am guessing Prerna will ask Mr Bajaj for help with those numbers and that is how they will keep meeting time and again.

You guessed absolutely right. 😊

waiting

Loved the scene between Mr Mehra and Prerna. Simple and all the facts were laid out clean. Nice that Prerna will have one person who she can trust in Mumbai who almost knows everything.

Thank you so much. Mr. Mehra is one sharp person yet loyal to his boss and he also has seen how Prerna had began to affect him but it all came to an end. Now a new beginning is needed but Prerna will have to initiate this time because Rishabh has now shut himself completely.

You know it becomes even before beautiful when that door inch by inch opens again

@underline I tried giving them colours somehow it was not working😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Heyyy!

Hello Yoga.. how are you 🤗

It was a very nice update. Great to see Tanvi taking so much carr for Rishabh. The way she was demanding rather ordering Rishabh to take the medicines shows how much she cares for him and also how Rishabh has given her the right to scold him which is very rare. Also, Tanvi filing her nails was hilarious. The conversation between Tanvi and Aditya was also good.

Tanvi and Rishabh mended their relationship in the initial chapters. He knew what she felt for him but also explained that it wasn't right/possible. She also promised to be by his side always as a frnd and never betray like she did by helping Anurag. So they are now a family, and he has always allowed his family sort of that upper hand. Prerna had it to when she was his family. So iske liye he is okay with Tanvi scolding him, also he knows she is right.

Rishabh's reactions to Prerna's words and accusations were superb. He handled the situation very well with utmost maturity. He did not lose his temper even for a bit. Prerna is acting very very immature.

Rishabh has always been the mature, calm and composed while Prerna the exact opposite. smiley4 She will get better as she spends more time with him, but little immature and carefree side will always be there. Even if she becomes the best version of herself, she will do things that will irritate him.. to keep a contrast. He might bring discipline in her life, but she will also help bring out his fun side which he has locked away. Lets see if I am able to portray it through writing. Because I do have ideas but fall short because of my basic writing skills. 😁

Good conversation between Mr. Mehra and Prerna too. Glad that someone is there who understands her.

Thank you so much smiley31

Waiting for the next part!

Planning to update by tue or latest by wednesday. I saw your like on the PM request post so I will PM you when I post next. Thank you


Heyyy!!! I'm doing great!

@underline - I'm sure you will be able to potray your thoughts through your writing. Yours is one of the best stories that I've read.


Waiting for the updates!


Stay Safe!

Edited by yogakshema - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Waiting for when Prerna will update Bajaj on Anurag and the child ... Will Bajaj's attitude change towards her then?! 😎

Answer to this question that I have to this question in my mind is like this-

Disclosure will change a few things like he will know she is not married, understand her pain of losing a child and her love for Kukki. He will empathise with her, but should that be enough for him to feel love for her. I am not sure. Because if goes this way then it will reduce Bajaj/Kukki to just an option for Prerna to fall back on in absence of Anurag. I don't like that idea very much. I want to use the disclosure in a way that it brings change in Prerna's view about Bajaj not in Bajaj. She should know him so she could chose him for herself irrespective of her love for Kukki, irrespective of Anurag's presence/absence. I hope this is making some sense 😃


Absolute sense!

Honestly would want that too... Bajaj has to be a conscious choice even if Anurag comes back... Prerna's view on Bajaj changing would be something... Waiting for Prerna to fall head over heels in love with Bajaj! Sigh!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Meena ji…

Actually I read update 2 days back but bit lazy to type… so late comments

I had a smile all thru the update..

I expected a angry/heated wala outburst between too… but it was cute nok-jhok loved it..👍🏼

Tanvi added more beauty to that, and little movement of Adi, Tanvi and kukkie 😉

Grown up tom & jerry right and I would love if u keep this particular fights in tact between them till end... It will spice up the things...

Rishab is still not taking caring of himself. And surrounded by too many ladies and kukkie’s giggles on this comment.👏

Thank fully prerana understood his point after rishab’s explanation but she was so silly to fight for that. He clearly told that they can train, support and help but decision is hers.. Whatever it is??

She can go and fight him alone but needs Adi’s help to ask for rishab’s help reg work

Mehra ji.. I loved this part.

Prerana thinks him as a father figure that so nice.

Mehra knows about anurag missing and non-filing of divorce papers good atleast he is updated and he will to find him if rishab says.. even he feels prerana can never be over anurag..

Mam he rahenge mehraji ke liye .. dekhte hai..

Continue soon..

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Posted: 5 years ago

I am going to read chapter 2 today

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Posted: 5 years ago

Initially I avoided this fiction for its length, but finally I decided to give it a read and I'm glad I did. This is so beautiful❤️ How I wish the makers had shown something like this after RB left but no...they had to ruin it and give us bhuli bisari daastan. Every time when RB reminds Pre that she has a 'family' now, I feel pain in my heart😭

This Poor guy doesn't know she lost everything that she had fought for love, trust, family and her child. All gone. I hope she tells him everything real soon.

I've become so greedy for PreRish fictions, they're like my daily dose of happiness.😆pls update soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago

🙄 aj Wednesday hai

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Posted: 5 years ago

Update 😔 🙄🙄🙄😥😥😥

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hi sunshine. I have read your ff "Fight Against Destiny" from the very beginning. It is a wonderful fan fiction. You have penned down the emotions in an amazing way. By reading your stories it feels like we are seeing everything in front of our own eyes. I would request to send me a pm of this story. It is a great amazing brilliant and outstanding story. Do continue. Stay safe everyone.

With lots of best wishes

- LOVELIFE234

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Posted: 5 years ago

Beautiful and outstanding story🤗

The emotions are at the right place

Loved the characters and the flow of stories

I have been a silent reader of this story from the 1st chapter

I request you to send a pm for this story

Waiting for next beautiful update

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