FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#3 (Chapter 28-34) - Page 16

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Posted: 5 years ago

What turn of events!! It was such a delight reading Prerna literally hijacking his personal space to find his medicines & making him take them.

Yeah she did. Like she pushed him so easily to look for his papers in the cupbaord during Ganpati Puja. Also how she decided to clean chutney off his outfit. Waise hi she ran into his room and almost forced him. :)

Rishabh not taking care of himself properlysmiley24

Naaahhh..

I enjoyed it as much as Tanvi/Kukki enjoyed itsmiley37smiley37

Hahaaa.. i am happy you did.. 🤗

Tanvi & her filing & admiring her nailssmiley37smiley37smiley37

Tanvi knows how to balance work and personal grooming 😎 Weekend hai aur ghar nahi ja sakti so office mein shuru 😆

Tanvi's advice to Adismiley20

She knew it'd be a waste of time if he went inside that room.

Grown-up Tom & Jerrysmiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37

Yessss

Kukki's frustration on their fightsmiley37smiley37smiley37

Why wouldn't she be. Ek to usko room se bahar bhej diya.. 😛

Prerna's accusations are always too much which he is used to it by now.

I agree.. she reacts first and then thinks .

His reply is on point. He can ask her to leave AMRA/Kukki if he wants. And he told her all the issues in her proposal but still approved the amount more than they proposed.

Wahi .. but Prerna ko samajh nahi aya itna sa baat jabtak Rishabh ne bola nahi.

Too many women in his life, poor himsmiley36smiley37

Isn't ir true. Bechara ka Basu Badi mein bhi wahi haal tha.. at least women here are sensible 😃

So, now she may have to take his help for the answers of his questions & she wants Adi to help her asking Bajaj to help hersmiley36

Yesssss... ekdam sahi pakde hain.. ladai karne khud chalo but for work Adi ka help she needs 😛 But Aditya also told her to manage it on her own.

Intelligent Mehrasmiley16. He knows every secret of Prerna but he never told anything to Bajaj as Bajaj doesn't want to do anything with Basus anymore.

Intellegent boss ke super intellegent Mr. Mehra. Why should Bajaj even bother about them.. revenge hold pe gaya to kya karega wo jan ke😒

His loyalty towards Bajaj👌👌👌

He is and always will😎

I wish Prerna tells about divorce & about the baby soon to Bajaj. It won't be good if he gets to know about it from anyone apart from Prerna.

She will.. hum usi direction mein ja rahe hain.. :)

Awesome update Meenakshi, continue soon.

Thank you so much for reading Ramya 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome loved it amazing update

Thank you so much for reading. I am soo happy you liked it 🤗

Loved their fight

Thank you

Loved Mr Mehra and prerna's talk

It means a lot to me.. makes every effort so much worth..🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

So Prerna like always accused RB making assumptions and his justification was so on point. He can literally throw her out in a second he doesn't need this stupid tricks at any point.

Exactly.. but she doesn't know him and never made any effort to do so. Aur jab kabhi bhi try bhi kiya to her mind was always clouded with other's opinion about him, be it Anurag, Shivani, Masi (court wale time). Now she is with people who have known him so well, be it Aditya or Menaka or Mr. Mehra. Now she has the perfect oppotunity to know him. So that's what is in progress.

I was laughing so bad in the start of the scene between Tanvi, Prerna and Rishab.

I wanted to make it a light hearted scene, still convey the seriousness of the matter. Your commenta gives me so much relief that it could make you laugh.. yeyyy

Tanvi and Aditya will be amazing couple and it would just as amazing to watch their story.

Trying to work on them.. I have to find a way ki aise hi beech beech mein I can show them making some progress.. a little at a time. Let's see how it goes. :)

So I am guessing Prerna will ask Mr Bajaj for help with those numbers and that is how they will keep meeting time and again.

You guessed absolutely right. 😊

Loved the scene between Mr Mehra and Prerna. Simple and all the facts were laid out clean. Nice that Prerna will have one person who she can trust in Mumbai who almost knows everything.

Thank you so much. Mr. Mehra is one sharp person yet loyal to his boss and he also has seen how Prerna had began to affect him but it all came to an end. Now a new beginning is needed but Prerna will have to initiate this time because Rishabh has now shut himself completely.

One thing I wanted say about Tanvi and Rishab in your writing I could actually imagine Sonya Ayodhya being like that in that show. Even small mannerisms of Bajaj in today's update like the way he sat and all damn it was almost like brought them alive. Why why couldn't we actually watch this on screen It would have been amazing.

Aww thank you so much for your kind words. Means a lot. I have tried to keep character traits intact to the level I could in my capacity. It's feels good when readers are able to relate it. 🤗

Lastly Prerna needs to tell RB about Anurag. There are 100 different ways that it can go wrong and he can misinterpret it with now being the fact that Mehra can actually find him. I mean RB can very easily think that she only came back so that she can ask for help to find Anurag.

You are absolutely right. If whenever she tells him, this thought will definitely cross RB's mind ki kahi Anurag ke liye help to nahi chahie.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AGAriya05

Please PM me.... I read the while story today ....so engaging....Kuddos !! What an amazing creation ...😍

Thank you so much for your kind words. It is always motivates and encourages me when I read something like this. A huge THANK YOU🤗

I have made a note of your request and I will PM you for sure.

I appreciate your time..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Another wonderful update from your pen. I loved it.. like loveeeeddd it. Every story and writer imagines characters differently and so do you, what I love the most about this story is that you'vr kept the characters so close to the ones in the show. You have your own stort going on but character traits are so well retained. That's commendable. And not just the leads but every character including Tanvi, Masi, Mr. Mehra is so well thought of. Everyone is as important as they could and should be.

Thank you so much for your kind and generous words. I do try to keep characters in their skin but also try to do something absolutely unexpected from them, else how do they make progress. I feel elated reading this.. 🤗

Rishabh-Prerna conversation is the highlight of the chapter, yet so intellegently you gave Adi-Tanvi their own limelight. Smart work over there. Like mentioned by so many readers, Tanvi's nails filing act was EPIC :) I could imagine show wali Tanvi do that.

I am trying to give each character it's own space, no matter how big or small. But when they appear they should have at least somethig to offer. It would be tricky to begin Tanvi-Aditya as a sepatate love story and I'd be happy to do that but then updates aynge hi nahi. So trying take them along Rishabh-Prerna. Hope you as a reader would like it

And Mr. Mehra, he is the best thing to have happened to Rishabh Bajaj in the show. His loyalty is so beautifully shown in the last conversation with Prerna. I lover his last line where he tells Prerna that he could look into Anurag's matter if Bajaj asks him to otherwise he won't. Amazing work there.

I agree Mr. Mehra as been one of the best character of the show. I am glad you liked his last conversation. Thank you

Thank you for sharing your work with us. Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks to you that you decide to spend your time reading.. I will try to update by wednesday.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Meenu sunday it is.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Meenu sunday it is.

Sunday naa hogaa... main bole the 😒

Tue/wed.. hogaji..😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter!!

Yeyyy. Thank you so much for reading.. 🤗

Finally a tadakta-bhadakta onversation between Bajaj and Prerna -- after so long!!!

Ohh yesss.. after a long time..

Tanvi filing her nails was epic!

Hahaaa.. thank you. Tanvi is Tanvi afterall 😎

Waiting for when Prerna will update Bajaj on Anurag and the child ... Will Bajaj's attitude change towards her then?!

Answer to this question that I have to this question in my mind is like this-

Disclosure will change a few things like he will know she is not married, understand her pain of losing a child and her love for Kukki. He will empathise with her, but should that be enough for him to feel love for her. I am not sure. Because if goes this way then it will reduce Bajaj/Kukki to just an option for Prerna to fall back on in absence of Anurag. I don't like that idea very much. I want to use the disclosure in a way that it brings change in Prerna's view about Bajaj not in Bajaj. She should know him so she could chose him for herself irrespective of her love for Kukki, irrespective of Anurag's presence/absence. I hope this is making some sense 😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you very much Awesome🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Sorry I am late... smiley19

Mishta, please don't ever say sorry .. not to me at least .. one, you are a busy busy girl, working so hard and I know that.🤗. second you can't beat me in being late. I have a pathetic record of being late 🤣

Such a fantastic update! Loved it to the core.

Thank you 🤗

Kukki is so sweet here! How sensible and mature at her age!

She is.. Bajaj ki daughter she is 😎

PreRish are arguing ...smiley44 tom and jerrysmiley37

Hain bhi.. ladai mein experts 🤣, sply Prerna.. seedha weapons utha ke she starts a war and later realises ki ky kar diya 😆

I am loving Aditya Here. He is so different from him best friend! smiley42

He is different yes.. pretty open about his feelings unlike Bajaj.. sahi galat kuch bhi sab samne..

Mehra met his Ma'amsmiley40smiley41

Yessss

One more confirmation that PreRish are still married! Yayasmiley40

Ye to confirmed hi tha bas Mehra put a stamp on it.😎

Prerna's conversation with Mehra is so good! I am glad she decided to tell RB the truth about her life someday or the othersmiley1

She will tell him . Time aane do

Thank you Mishtaaa for your time itna busy schedule se. I appreciate it.. and all the best for 300+ questions every day🤗

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