FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#3 (Chapter 28-34) - Page 17

Originally posted by: Annu8193

Nice update sunshine

Thank you Annu 🤗

Prerna nd rb conversation is so cute... Prerna again make fun of herself... But its cute...

Haan she made fun of herself because logic sochne mein kyu time waste kare, seedha attack. 😃

Adi is so right in telling her u can go in his cabin for fight with him help mangne me kya dhar 😂😂😂😂

She made a fool herself. She went inside itns josh mein to meet Mr. Bajaj she had only seen so far, but faced Mr. Bajaj the business. Who means business when it comes to work. So dar to lagna hi tha.

Hope rb ko prerna ki sachai pata chale jaldi se....

Batayegi batayegi.. time ayega ..

Waiting for next...

Pls update soon

I will update by the middle of next week. (Tue/wed). Thank you for reading 🤗

Originally posted by: yogakshema

Heyyy!

Hello Yoga.. how are you 🤗

It was a very nice update. Great to see Tanvi taking so much carr for Rishabh. The way she was demanding rather ordering Rishabh to take the medicines shows how much she cares for him and also how Rishabh has given her the right to scold him which is very rare. Also, Tanvi filing her nails was hilarious. The conversation between Tanvi and Aditya was also good.

Tanvi and Rishabh mended their relationship in the initial chapters. He knew what she felt for him but also explained that it wasn't right/possible. She also promised to be by his side always as a frnd and never betray like she did by helping Anurag. So they are now a family, and he has always allowed his family sort of that upper hand. Prerna had it to when she was his family. So iske liye he is okay with Tanvi scolding him, also he knows she is right.

Rishabh's reactions to Prerna's words and accusations were superb. He handled the situation very well with utmost maturity. He did not lose his temper even for a bit. Prerna is acting very very immature.

Rishabh has always been the mature, calm and composed while Prerna the exact opposite. She will get better as she spends more time with him, but little immature and carefree side will always be there. Even if she becomes the best version of herself, she will do things that will irritate him.. to keep a contrast. He might bring discipline in her life, but she will also help bring out his fun side which he has locked away. Lets see if I am able to portray it through writing. Because I do have ideas but fall short because of my basic writing skills. 😁

Good conversation between Mr. Mehra and Prerna too. Glad that someone is there who understands her.

Thank you so much

Waiting for the next part!

Planning to update by tue or latest by wednesday. I saw your like on the PM request post so I will PM you when I post next. Thank you

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

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Originally posted by: chavi12345

Hello Chavi .. how are you 🤗

Nice update.

Glad you liked it. Thank you :)

Loved prerana bossing over Bajaj. He made her understand abt his view point. As a boss. She understood it.

He said everything with so much clarity that there was no way she wasn't going to understand. She was face to face with Bajaj, the businessman for the first time. Not Bajaj, the father.

Meher spoke to her..Hope prerana tell soon abt Basu soon to him.

She will I promise. Allow me sometime as to make her do it..

Thank you veryyy much 🤗

Originally posted by: Pori

Giiiirreel!!!

Hello Pori, how are you I totally loved your post..

you cannot stop like that!!!!!

I had to, my hands ached typing over phone. It's a task I must say..

Okay, to answer your previous question- I lived the bossy bajaj in the board room as depicted in the earlier chapter.

Ohh that gives me so much relief and happiness..🤗
And I sooo loved him in this chapter. ALL of him!!

Yahoooo...aur bhi khushi coming my way

At first I was really bothered by Tanvis presence but you made the table turn!!! She was smoooooothh as water 💦

Ohh thank God, Tanvi didn't ruin your experience 😃 Glad to know you liked her ..

I loved the interaction between bajaj and prerna!

Thank you. It honestly messed up my brain a little while writing for these two opposite human beings..

And Mr Mehraaaa is backkkkk!!!! Happy dance 💃

Let's dance together 💃💃💃

And OMG!!!! You a killaaa!!
this story is moving sooo nicelyyyt!!! This is amazing. I’m soo looking forward to the next chapter.

Awww.. thank you so much for your kind words..I am humbled and flattered. I hope future turns in the story will interest you as a reader tooo.
please don’t make Us wait too long!!

I am trying to complete it as fast as possible. Targeting for tue/wed. Wish me luck
you have done an amazing job!!

Thank you.. hug for you 🤗

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

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🤗 Work is in progress but knowing myself it will take some more time.. 😊

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Sorry I am late...

Mishta, please don't ever say sorry .. not to me at least .. one, you are a busy busy girl, working so hard and I know that.🤗. second you can't beat me in being late. I have a pathetic record of being late 🤣

Such a fantastic update! Loved it to the core.

Thank you 🤗

Kukki is so sweet here! How sensible and mature at her age!

She is.. Bajaj ki daughter she is 😎

PreRish are arguing ... tom and jerry

Hain bhi.. ladai mein experts 🤣, sply Prerna.. seedha weapons utha ke she starts a war and later realises ki ky kar diya 😆

I am loving Aditya Here. He is so different from him best friend!

He is different yes.. pretty open about his feelings unlike Bajaj.. sahi galat kuch bhi sab samne..

Mehra met his Ma'am

Yessss

One more confirmation that PreRish are still married! Yaya

Ye to confirmed hi tha bas Mehra put a stamp on it.😎

Prerna's conversation with Mehra is so good! I am glad she decided to tell RB the truth about her life someday or the other

She will tell him . Time aane do

Thank you Mishtaaa for your time itna busy schedule se. I appreciate it.. and all the best for 300+ questions every day🤗

Muaaaaah 😍😘❤️

Thank you! ❤️

Waited for next update! ❤️

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Just read the chap and loved the convo between rb and prena as well as between tanvi, adi and kukki.

Yeyyy. I am so happy you liked it. Thank you 🤗

Mehra is a true gem for Rb. Hope prena reveals the truth soon. Indeed he is 😎

Wondering abt menakas reaction on rb and prenas marriage. You'll see in future updates :) I just hope you as a reader like whats there in store for Prerna-Rishabh-Menaka.

In love with this tanvi. Yeyyyyy.. makes me really happy..

Maybe rb still feels for prena. He feels respect and values her love for Kukki. Also he values how she saved his daughter, but it isn't love. In the beginning of the story one little change I made was to show him uncertain of his feelings for her before leaving Basu Badi. He thought he loved her but did he really love her or it was just a feeling because he spent 3 months with her.. she taking care of Kukki he wasn't sure. And after spending so much time in Mumbai, he has no feeling that is anywhere near love

Then Wat abt menaka and rb, Wat happened between them was it love or not. And most importantly whom does rishab loves heart fully prena or menaka

He doesn't love anyone at present. He has drowned himself into Kukki and Work post what he did at Basu Badi. Kukki getting hurt because of his madness took a huge toll on him. So this time, you may not see him make any kind of approach towards her.. he will respect her, care for her, help her if needed but love nahi. This time Prerna has to realise if she loves him and make a move in his direction.

Love to see Prerna actions how will she discover and express her love. How will Rb react to it. Definitely I will love how u will show Rb, Prerna and menaka

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Another wonderful update from your pen. I loved it.. like loveeeeddd it. Every story and writer imagines characters differently and so do you, what I love the most about this story is that you'vr kept the characters so close to the ones in the show. You have your own stort going on but character traits are so well retained. That's commendable. And not just the leads but every character including Tanvi, Masi, Mr. Mehra is so well thought of. Everyone is as important as they could and should be.

Thank you so much for your kind and generous words. I do try to keep characters in their skin but also try to do something absolutely unexpected from them, else how do they make progress. I feel elated reading this.. 🤗

This shows.. I just said the truth.. 🤗

Rishabh-Prerna conversation is the highlight of the chapter, yet so intellegently you gave Adi-Tanvi their own limelight. Smart work over there. Like mentioned by so many readers, Tanvi's nails filing act was EPIC :) I could imagine show wali Tanvi do that.

I am trying to give each character it's own space, no matter how big or small. But when they appear they should have at least somethig to offer. It would be tricky to begin Tanvi-Aditya as a sepatate love story and I'd be happy to do that but then updates aynge hi nahi. So trying take them along Rishabh-Prerna. Hope you as a reader would like it

Good to know this. I am also very keen on how will trear Anurag when he comes back, I have seen a glimpse in the other OS, and he also had his own space. Let's see how his presence changes Prerna-Rishabh-Menaka dynamics.

And Mr. Mehra, he is the best thing to have happened to Rishabh Bajaj in the show. His loyalty is so beautifully shown in the last conversation with Prerna. I lover his last line where he tells Prerna that he could look into Anurag's matter if Bajaj asks him to otherwise he won't. Amazing work there.

I agree Mr. Mehra as been one of the best character of the show. I am glad you liked his last conversation. Thank you

No doubt about this, Mehra was amazing even with his littlest of presence.

Thank you for sharing your work with us. Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks to you that you decide to spend your time reading.. I will try to update by wednesday.

Waiting for it 🤗

Hello Sunshine

Loved the update as always!

I loved the way conversation turned out between PreRish. Prerna did say a lot of things to RB..but it wasn't a much heated one..the way i expected! I love the way it turned out..with Tanvi in between.. although i was saying almost same dialogues in my head..what PreRish were saying to her.. whenever she would interrupt them.

RB getting irritated by seeing her entering into his personal space..Prerna showing care for RB..then everyone leaving them in the end.. everything well written..loved it.

RB ne 100 crore uda diye😛

Mehra g knows PreRish ain't divorced..that makes sense because ofcourse he made the papers.and you have to file them in court. They never showed it in the show🤪

So many things to unfold in the story..PreRish ki shadi ka sach.. RB ke saamne..as he also don't remember that..aur Adi and Menaka ke saamne bhi..and then Anuraag ka sach RB ke saamne..and most important PreRish falling for each other.. so many interesting things..i am so excited.