MG FF : A Torn relation| Part 46,47 page 6,8| May 20th, 2020 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Story till now



A TORN RELATION



This is a story of two maan and geet.. MAAN belongs to the khurana’s who are well known industrialist and geet belongs to the middle class family. Time makes them tie in a bond that couldn’t be denied neither it can be forget.



Maan and geet married each other , maan didn’t knew it was geet whom he ruined a week before in the hotel room in the pretext of a s**t as he has undergone the betrayal of his lady love ayesha and eventually he was responsible for the destruction of many lives.. geet had recognized him but she couldn’t voice her thoughts and he denial owing to the conservative upbringing and maan kind of ignore her shocking her .. two months had gone and geet got to know that she was pregnant as a result of that mean night and maan when got to know about her pregnancy tortured her , didn’t believed her as he he didn’t remember that night , he was high with drinks that night and for him it was some cheap sl*t not his wife..



Geet’s revelation made him stunned , in the process he had started loving his wife and now the baby was his was a shocker for him.. with the passing events geet’s weird behavior like her possessiveness for the nuptial chain , scared eyes made him suspicious and he enquired about the same from his mother in law and sister in law radhika..



Unknown of everyone geet had undergone a attempt to rape and maan’s deed proved it to be worst and she was now in a depression confused herself if she wants baby or not..



One side she wants her child just to make maan realize his mistake and other side she doesn’t want ..



Meanwhile doctor’s visit had made the situation critical since maan is on the verge of losing not only his wife but baby too ..



So this was the short summary of A TORN RELATION

Edited by suhaaana - 5 years ago
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-A TORN RELATION-



Part 44

The day was not less than any celebration for the khurana's and maan even informed handa's , though maan was himself on the could nine but what he loved was the glow that was on her face.. geet was just the impeccable beauty who was glowing , maan couldn't take his eyes from her..She was just too happy and her happiness was reflecting from her face, her movements.. maan tied her seat belt and she smiled at him..

Maan : shall we go , he asked once they were seated..Though maan had to go to office but he couldn't help but he himself wanted to share this news with everyone.. There was a big burden that was making him susceptible towards the circumstances and maan was exposed to the ultimate test of his life but now seeing his wife, he knew the meaning of getting that ultimate happiness that was making him now the most wealthy person..

It was the moment that maan realise that his wife and baby were the precious belongings that had to keep safe..

Maan : keep smiling like this geet, your this smile is the reason of my life now.. I never thought that my life , my priorities will change like this.. You made me realize that love is giving your happiness not taking away..

Geet saw maan smiling and looking at her in between the small intervals.. She was curious enough he never does this, maan's presence she first couldn't stand but the things changed considerably and that too with such twists and turns that now geet couldn't stay away from him..

The person she hated the most at one time was now turning into the someone she couldn't stand getting hurt, questioned and somewhere her heart had already accepted him just the confession is left..

Geet : kya hua.. What are you looking at.. She asked getting conscious now.. maan smiled and looked straight while he drove towards KM and answered her making her turn red and rosy hue that covered on her cheeks maan couldn't help but to tease her.. His wife was a baby and now his one baby was having their little one..

Maan : I am looking at you geet.. you are changing ..

Geet : I am changing kaise , she asked with confusion written on her face and her eyebrows cringed .. maan completed his sentence and she looked away..

Maan : you are getting more beautiful nowadays..

Geet avoided his gaze and maan knew that she was doing it purposefully, they had been sharing some close moments but she always ignore him whenever he teases her , their close moments were always when she panicked or when maan had to convince her . they never had some peaceful romantic moment where they could cherish the newly found feelings of theirs..

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FLASHBACK OUT

Maan opened his eyes and saw he was late, his wife was sleeping peacefully, he had to check some files and had an important meeting but looks like he was going to miss everything.. maan kissed her forehead and she snuggled close to him holding his hand..maan kissed her palms and then like she knew that he had to leave her grip loosened and maan left to freshen up..

Geet opened her eyes and saw that it was seven in the morning and maan was closing his shirt buttons , she get up lazily and went near him and held his hands helping him with the buttons , she did one by one and maan let her do..After doing that she hug him lightly whispering a sweet good morning that made him day..

Her hands went on his torso and he pecked her lips..

Maan : good morning mishty , still sleepy , he asked seeing her drowsy eyes.. He knew that she gets tired easily and he had asked his mother to keep an eye on her and make sure that she was fine and has ample of rest...

Geet : I am tired..

Maan parted her and walked with her towards the bed..he made her lie and covered her with the blanket..

Maan : now you sleep .. Don't get so early geet.. he said with a little stern voice and that voice , geet was very well aware that maan uses when she acts careless , she held his hand and made a puppy face that definitely did its work..

Maan : now you sleep.. And take care..

Geet : aap kahan ja rahe ho.. its still so early..

Maan ; I am having a meeting , so I have to look at presentation too , that is why I am leaving now.. and yes don't worry I will have my breakfast in office , he answered her next query and she smiled..

Geet : all the best.. agar deal hogayi toh we will go toh that place tonight.. She asked with a little hope..Last time when KC grabbed a project maan had taken out and geet liked the place a lot..

Maan : we will go even if we didn't crack the deal.. he assured her and she said ever so cutely that made maan know that the deal will definitely cracked..

Geet : I will pray to babaji aapko deal mil jaye..

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Next: entry of radhika ..

And

Clash of titans...


Next part below

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Part 45 (a)


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2020/03/20/a-torn-relation-part-45-a/


For next part see below

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Part 45 (b)


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2020/03/20/mg-ff-a-torn-relation-part-45-b/



Will update 46, 47, 48 too.


Enjoy reading

Edited by suhaaana - 5 years ago
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Waiting for the story start.

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badly waiiting to read this ff again

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I will edit rest soon


Have to finalise marks of my students now.

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Awesome update.. Maan and Geet part is awesome... Aww loved the Maan showing concern regarding geet health... Love is blossoming... Coming baby will filled their life with lots happiness...

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Awesome updates. Please send previous parts link.

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Thanks for the Summary


Part 44


A Beautiful Update


Maan and Geet are now so comfortable with each other

but Maan also noticed that whenever he teases his wife she tries

ignoring him .

I'm liking the fact that now both have accepted the baby

Geet on her own goes to Maan and pampers him a little and this fact

is simply great that Geet is coming out of her depression and shell

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