my dear,
at first let me say how sorry im that i could read it earlier,
please forgave me
now i want read all the parts and comment,
part 47
owww im relieved both are save, oww that is because of their love and im sure virats prayers..
still she thinks about him even when she is in pain...what a love.
oww both are trying to hide their pain so sweet...
there is something bad going happen,virat has to decide something, i have a bad feeling it is something about the baby???
whattt ,
ohhh nooo abortion???manvi would never agreee, they have to find another way to save both of them...
nooo, manvi didnt mean it virat uff what is happening here😭
manvi this was too much, you know that he loves you and the baby ...
poor virat.
ahh amazing work again, tooo painful..
part 48
no matter what happens, or what they say to each other their love will be the same...
she is going back home
owww the angel is back , soo sweet meethi,
poor virat he is just too hurt..
ohh myy god, for a moment i thought all will be well between them,
you have wrote it amazing, but again a misunderstanding, ufff how will they solve it now...
this scene was amazing...
great father son talk...
the end of the part was the best...
it is always a pleasure to see them like this great work
you know i have written like a have seen it but is for me like i can see everything clearly because of your amazing writing👏
part 49
great beginning,
poor virat, the fear of loosing her is too big...
i thought he would carry her the stairs, but no he briught her back in their room 😃
oww they are just too sweet, i missed all this
i know it that he would promise her this,
because he loves her too much...
i really hope that he is right and that such a moment never comes for them...
oooh good this is too good, you are just amazing,
mother daughter duo were brillaint,
what an amazing scene dear,
what can he do more for her, what a husband
just great,
even we missed their romance...
part 50
ahhh again this, this is to funny😆
it is all because of virat
oww arjun you are too sweet..
ohhh right now im not sure where i am . after their scene
ahhh everything was just amaazing, fantastic, brilliant...
great work
it is always a pleasure to read your work
and again im really sorry for being this late...
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