Muskurane ki wajah tum ho...Rikara TS Last Part - Page 2

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Awesome superb fabulous fantastic lovely update dear

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Thank u each n everyone who read n commented on this TS.This TS is ending.So plz give a detailed comment on the last part.Plz write your favourite jodi,favourite character,favourite scene n why you liked them.



The credit for the edits goes to the real editors.

Muskurane ki wajah tum ho...You're the reason to smile...Part 3

Gauri was not found for having lunch.Shivay searched for her.Finally he found her in the corridor.

Shivay:Why are you here Gauri?Why are you not having lunch?

Gauri:I don't feel like eating anything.

Shivay:Why Gauri?Tell me what's bothering you.We are close friends.Right?You can share your problem with me.

Suddenly Gauri burst into tears and embraced Shivay.

Shivay was stunned.He caressed Gauri.

Om who followed Shivay to find Gauri was shattered to see Gauri in Shivay's arms.


Om wept:Gauri and Shivay are in love.My love story ended terribly.Why Lord Krishna?I prayed to you to give me my beloved.But you separated me from Gauri.If you did'nt want me with Gauri,why did you make me forget Bhavya and fall in love with Gauri?

Shivay:Tell me Gauri..what's the issue?

Gauri:I love Om.

Shivay was stunned.

Shivay:That's good.

Gauri said painfully:But Om loves Bhavya.

Shivay was shocked.

Shivay:How do you know that Om loves Bhavya?Did he tell you that?

Gauri nodded her head.

Shivay was shocked.

Shivay:But I feel that he loves you only.Even when he was with Bhavya he was looking at you Gauri.I noticed that.

Gauri stared at Shivay.

Shivay:Did you tell Om that you love her?

Gauri:No.When I know that he does'nt love me why should I tell him about my feelings?

Shivay:Don't be foolish.He should know your feelings for him.You should let him know that.

Gauri:No Shivay.I can't.I won't be able to face him.

Shivay:What if he also loves you?

Gauri:Unfortunately never.

She wept bitterly.

Omkara who overheard this wept silently.

Om:It means Gauri also loves me.Poor girl suppressed her love and pain and helped to get closer to Bhavya.Now I will not let her eyes be wet because of me.I will tell her that I also love her.

Om left.

Shivay:Gauri..before coming into conclusion did you check whether Bhavya loves Om.

Gauri:She also loves Om.That's why she wore the dress which Om gifted her.

Shivay:Rubbish.A dress does'nt prove that she loves Om.What if she does'nt love Om?

Gauri just ignored it and walked off.

Shivay:How will I make this foolish girl understand?

Gauri reached Om's painting studio.

Gauri:Why did you call me here Om?

Om:To show you something.

Gauri:What do you want to show me?

Om:My heart.

Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

Gauri was stunned:Heart?

Om grabbed her hand and moved towards a painting.She could not believe her eyes as it was the painting of Om and Gauri.She looked at him in disbelief.

Kehne lagi Dono Se Woh Khamoshiyaan
Oh Saathiya

Gauri:What is this Om?

He cupped her face emotionally and said:I love you Gauri!

Gauri was shocked.

Gauri asked him emotionally:What?

Om:I really love you Gauri.

Kehne lagi Dono Se Woh Khamoshiyaan
Oh Saathiya

Gauri:Then Bhavya?

Om:What I had for Bhavya was only infatuation.I love only you Gauri.

Gauri felt happy inside,.

Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya

Gauri:But you prayed to Lord Krishna to get Bhavya and you were blessed with flowers.God wants you to be with Bhavya.

Om:I prayed to Lord Krishna to give me my beloved.Lord Krishna showed me that you are my beloved.

Gauri looked at him emotionally.

Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya

Om:I know that you also love me.

Gauri wept silently.

Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya

Gauri:But Bhavya is falling in love with you Om.That's why she wore that dress.You gave her hopes.Now she will break down if she comes to know that we both love each other.So we should put an end to our feelings.

Om's heart was pierced.

Om:How can we put an end to feelings?Can feelings be controlled easily?

Gauri:It has to be controlled for our dearest friend Bhavya.

Suddenly they heard a voice from behind.

"No need of this stupid sacrifice".

They were shocked to see Bhavya there.

Om-Gauri were nervous to see Bhavya.

Bhavya:Come on guys...I wore the dress which Omkara gifted me as he is y dearest friend...not because I love him.I love someone else.

Om-Gauri were surprised.

Gauri:What?You love someone else?Whom do you love?

Shivay came from behind holding Bhavya closer to him:We both love each other.

Om-Gauri were surprised.

Om:Why did you guys hide it from us?At least a hint could have been given.You guys fooled us.

Shivay:Sorry.Actually though we both loved each other from the beginning a few days back only we confessed our love to each other.We were going to reveal it you all.But then we realized that things were getting complicated between you both.

Bhavya:Shivay told me about your stupid complicated love story.So to solve it we both followed Gauri and reached here.

Shivay:Om...don't dare to involve both of us and ruin your own love story with Gauri.

Bhavya was giggling.

Om was embarrassed:Never.

Om pulled Gauri closer and looked at her romantically:Because I love only my Gauri.

Gauri smiled romantically:I love you too Om.

Baadlon Main Ghulnaa Jaaye
Hain Jo lamhe Thehre Thehre..

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Do Dilon Main Jazb Karlein
Sare Jazbe Gehre Gehre

Shivay-Bhavya smiled.They left giving them privacy.

Om leaned towards her lips.Gauri became shy.

After a year....

Om's painting exhibition....

His paintings on Gauri were admired a lot.

Media:Is this woman real or your imagination?

Om:She is the most beautiful reality of my life...my wife Gauri.

Kal Kya Pata Mile Naa Mile
Nazdeekiyan
Oh Saathiya

Om walked towards the audience.Gauri was among the audience.They both smiled at each other sweetly. He held Gauri's hand and brought her to the stage.

Kal Kya Pata Mile Naa Mile
Nazdeekiyan
Oh Saathiya

Om held her closer:She is my wife Gauri who is seen in my paintings.She is not only my inspiration,but also my reason to smile.

Saathiya Saathiya.....

Om looked at Gauri.They both smiled at each other.

Saathiya Saathiya.....

In their bedroom....

Gauri looked at Om:Om...you said I am the reason for you to smile.

Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

Om:Yes.Right from the beginning when we were friends you have been doing everything for my happiness.You made me happy..you made me smile from the bottom of my heart.

Gauri smiled.

Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

Om:Now also you please make smile Gauri.

Gauri:How?

Om touched his lips.Gauri became shy.

Gauri:You are very naughty Om.

Kehne lagi Dono Se Woh Khamoshiyaan
Oh Saathiya

Gauri tried to move away.Om held her hand.Gauri's heart started beating fast.

Kehne lagi Dono Se Woh Khamoshiyaan
Oh Saathiya

Om pulled her closer and nuzzled on her neck making her feel ticklish.

Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya

Then they cuddled to each other on bed spreading romance in the room.


Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya(DBO).

Their wedding photograph on the wall witnessed their pure love.

The End

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Posted: 5 years ago
#13

thanks for the pm!

splendid update! wonderful end

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Awesome superb fabulous fantastic lovely amazing ending pdear

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Sad that Om misunderstood Gauri when she was in Shivaay's arms with tears. But glad that he overheard her confessed her love for Omkara to Shivaay. Omkara calling Gauri & showing the pic he drew was sensational. Rikara conversation was emotional. Surprised to see Shivya together. I like all the couples & all the scenes.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#16

Wow that was so Beautiful

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome update😳Om and Gauri scene was so cute😳They falling for each other, but suppressed it as she thinks he loves only Bhavya and he is confused😒Bhavya wearing his gifted dress, but his eyes only on Gauri😳He understood it's Gauri and not Bhavya😉Dance was great but sadly they didn't won😔He feeling irritated with Shivaay Gauri closeness😆Now what happened to Gauri?

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul



The credit for the edits goes to the real editors.

Muskurane ki wajah tum ho...You're the reason to smile...Part 3

Gauri was not found for having lunch.Shivay searched for her.Finally he found her in the corridor.

Shivay:Why are you here Gauri?Why are you not having lunch?

Gauri:I don't feel like eating anything.

Shivay:Why Gauri?Tell me what's bothering you.We are close friends.Right?You can share your problem with me.

Suddenly Gauri burst into tears and embraced Shivay.

Shivay was stunned.He caressed Gauri.

Om who followed Shivay to find Gauri was shattered to see Gauri in Shivay's arms.


Om wept:Gauri and Shivay are in love.My love story ended terribly.Why Lord Krishna?I prayed to you to give me my beloved.But you separated me from Gauri.If you did'nt want me with Gauri,why did you make me forget Bhavya and fall in love with Gauri?


😭


Shivay:Tell me Gauri..what's the issue?

Gauri:I love Om.

Shivay was stunned.

Shivay:That's good.

Gauri said painfully:But Om loves Bhavya.

Shivay was shocked.

Shivay:How do you know that Om loves Bhavya?Did he tell you that?

Gauri nodded her head.

Shivay was shocked.

Shivay:But I feel that he loves you only.Even when he was with Bhavya he was looking at you Gauri.I noticed that.

Gauri stared at Shivay.

Shivay:Did you tell Om that you love her?

Gauri:No.When I know that he does'nt love me why should I tell him about my feelings?


No😒


Shivay:Don't be foolish.He should know your feelings for him.You should let him know that.

Gauri:No Shivay.I can't.I won't be able to face him.

Shivay:What if he also loves you?

Gauri:Unfortunately never.

She wept bitterly.

Omkara who overheard this wept silently.

Om:It means Gauri also loves me.Poor girl suppressed her love and pain and helped to get closer to Bhavya.Now I will not let her eyes be wet because of me.I will tell her that I also love her.


❤️


Om left.

Shivay:Gauri..before coming into conclusion did you check whether Bhavya loves Om.

Gauri:She also loves Om.That's why she wore the dress which Om gifted her.

Shivay:Rubbish.A dress does'nt prove that she loves Om.What if she does'nt love Om?

Gauri just ignored it and walked off.

Shivay:How will I make this foolish girl understand?

Gauri reached Om's painting studio.

Gauri:Why did you call me here Om?

Om:To show you something.

Gauri:What do you want to show me?

Om:My heart.

Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

Gauri was stunned:Heart?

Om grabbed her hand and moved towards a painting.She could not believe her eyes as it was the painting of Om and Gauri.She looked at him in disbelief.

Kehne lagi Dono Se Woh Khamoshiyaan
Oh Saathiya

Gauri:What is this Om?

He cupped her face emotionally and said:I love you Gauri!

Gauri was shocked.

Gauri asked him emotionally:What?

Om:I really love you Gauri.


He finally told her about his love for her😳


Kehne lagi Dono Se Woh Khamoshiyaan
Oh Saathiya

Gauri:Then Bhavya?

Om:What I had for Bhavya was only infatuation.I love only you Gauri.

Gauri felt happy inside,.

Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya

Gauri:But you prayed to Lord Krishna to get Bhavya and you were blessed with flowers.God wants you to be with Bhavya.

Om:I prayed to Lord Krishna to give me my beloved.Lord Krishna showed me that you are my beloved.

Gauri looked at him emotionally.

Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya

Om:I know that you also love me.

Gauri wept silently.

Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya

Gauri:But Bhavya is falling in love with you Om.That's why she wore that dress.You gave her hopes.Now she will break down if she comes to know that we both love each other.So we should put an end to our feelings.

Om's heart was pierced.

Om:How can we put an end to feelings?Can feelings be controlled easily?

Gauri:It has to be controlled for our dearest friend Bhavya.

Suddenly they heard a voice from behind.

"No need of this stupid sacrifice".

They were shocked to see Bhavya there.

Om-Gauri were nervous to see Bhavya.

Bhavya:Come on guys...I wore the dress which Omkara gifted me as he is y dearest friend...not because I love him.I love someone else.


That's what


Om-Gauri were surprised.

Gauri:What?You love someone else?Whom do you love?

Shivay came from behind holding Bhavya closer to him:We both love each other.


Cool😎


Om-Gauri were surprised.

Om:Why did you guys hide it from us?At least a hint could have been given.You guys fooled us.

Shivay:Sorry.Actually though we both loved each other from the beginning a few days back only we confessed our love to each other.We were going to reveal it you all.But then we realized that things were getting complicated between you both.

Bhavya:Shivay told me about your stupid complicated love story.So to solve it we both followed Gauri and reached here.

Shivay:Om...don't dare to involve both of us and ruin your own love story with Gauri.

Bhavya was giggling.

Om was embarrassed:Never.

Om pulled Gauri closer and looked at her romantically:Because I love only my Gauri.

Gauri smiled romantically:I love you too Om.

Baadlon Main Ghulnaa Jaaye
Hain Jo lamhe Thehre Thehre..

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Do Dilon Main Jazb Karlein
Sare Jazbe Gehre Gehre

Shivay-Bhavya smiled.They left giving them privacy.

Om leaned towards her lips.Gauri became shy.

After a year....

Om's painting exhibition....

His paintings on Gauri were admired a lot.

Media:Is this woman real or your imagination?

Om:She is the most beautiful reality of my life...my wife Gauri.

Kal Kya Pata Mile Naa Mile
Nazdeekiyan
Oh Saathiya


Wow, they got married😳


Om walked towards the audience.Gauri was among the audience.They both smiled at each other sweetly. He held Gauri's hand and brought her to the stage.

Kal Kya Pata Mile Naa Mile
Nazdeekiyan
Oh Saathiya

Om held her closer:She is my wife Gauri who is seen in my paintings.She is not only my inspiration,but also my reason to smile.

Saathiya Saathiya.....

Om looked at Gauri.They both smiled at each other.

Saathiya Saathiya.....

In their bedroom....

Gauri looked at Om:Om...you said I am the reason for you to smile.

Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

Om:Yes.Right from the beginning when we were friends you have been doing everything for my happiness.You made me happy..you made me smile from the bottom of my heart.

Gauri smiled.

Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

Om:Now also you please make smile Gauri.

Gauri:How?

Om touched his lips.Gauri became shy.

Gauri:You are very naughty Om.


😆


Kehne lagi Dono Se Woh Khamoshiyaan
Oh Saathiya

Gauri tried to move away.Om held her hand.Gauri's heart started beating fast.

Kehne lagi Dono Se Woh Khamoshiyaan
Oh Saathiya

Om pulled her closer and nuzzled on her neck making her feel ticklish.

Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya

Then they cuddled to each other on bed spreading romance in the room.


Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya(DBO).

Their wedding photograph on the wall witnessed their pure love.


Beautiful and lovely ending but wished you had given ShiVya scene too after the 1 year gap😒


The End

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Fav Couple - RiKara and I loved ShiVya too😳


Fav Character - All the character's were fav in their own way😊


Fav Scene - Om realizing his love for Gauri and confession and also the exhibition part where he gave the credit to Gauri❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

thanks a lot.I didn't know that you will accept shivya too.if I knew that I would have added their scenes.I thought the die hard fans of shivika n ruvya will throw Chappals on me if I had written detailed shivya scenes.but instead of rudra I cast shivay here so that no one will doubt that bhavya actually loves shivay n not omkara.

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Fav Couple - RiKara and I loved ShiVya too😳


Fav Character - All the character's were fav in their own way😊


Fav Scene - Om realizing his love for Gauri and confession and also the exhibition part where he gave the credit to Gauri❤️

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