Roshan Os : Yaar Inj Luttna - Page 2

Quiet a beautiful scene. Do continue writing.

Beautiful keep writing more😊

Originally posted by: UmIbrahim

Quiet a beautiful scene. Do continue writing.

thanks a lot.

will certainly try.

Originally posted by: magicalM

Beautiful keep writing more😊

Will surely do.

thanks. <3

For someone who wrote this in 20 min that too without proof reading. Not bad at all. I'm impressed.

I like the story. It had poetry & magic.

I'm afraid i didn't get the hindi verse in beggining.

Oh. Thank you so much for such a lovely compliment.

I'll translate the verse for you :

Line 1: People usually light the lamps from fuel , but I lit the lamp of my heart.

Line 2 : People generally swear on their faithfulness, but I have had the poison of separation.

Line 3 : People loose their hearts in love, but I have lost myself.

Line 4 : And yet nothing of me was liked by my lover.

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Oh. Thank you so much for such a lovely compliment.

I'll translate the verse for you :

Line 1: People usually light the lamps from fuel , but I lit the lamp of my heart.

Line 2 : People generally swear on their faithfulness, but I have had the poison of separation.

Line 3 : People loose their hearts in love, but I have lost myself.

Line 4 : And yet nothing of me was liked by my lover.

Beautifully put. Thanks for translating.

The hindi one did u write in a different dialect ?

Originally posted by: Hallyumint

Beautifully put. Thanks for translating.

The hindi one did u write in a different dialect ?

The hindi verses are the lyrics of a song from a Bollywood movie.

Penned by Irshad Kamil.