Ariya FF: Electrons Cannot be friends, New Chapters added Pg 101 - Page 63

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

@Chapter:18

Well I'll start with Rathor, he is really trying push Arjun's life in a new direction by pushing him towards Riya

Rathore has known and seen how they were both with each other and he kind of believes that they can fix each other.

Maybe that's how two friends are..Btw I really this smart mouth and cold Riya...and how she making them shut.

Btw Sree and chotu too proven their friendship, it says "friends in need friends in deed" . They prove that they 'll support their friend in any situation Maybe it in front of a senior or even they not talking term with her.

That's two wonderful examples of friendships in this chapter that I find.

Mohit is someone I won't judge just now, I'll wait little bit more...but he seems like someone who if given opportunity will fight tooth and nail for Riya even the opponent is Arjun Rawte.

There's a lot of potential to his character only if he'll be a little less clingy towards Riya I'd see what I can make of his character 🤪

I like this jealous and insecure ACP Rawte, I 'll want some more of this side of him ..he deserves it after all that he put Riya through.

Call me biased but I made this story and just wanted to grill him like hell🤣🤣That makes me a sadist also🤪

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Tia❤️

Thank you so much for the reply darling🤗

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

@Chapter:19

Starting with this chapter I'm blown away with the understanding between Riya and Sree, it's really unique to find such a soul friend. They are always have each other back.

This confrontation between Ariya was truly needed...it was long due...marvelous use of words to describe emotional episode...it really touch the heart...I pain really reach out for me.

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Really love this update

Love

Tia

I was really scared while writing this as this would be a turning point in their strained relation, but now I guess I pulled that off quite nicely.😛

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

@Chapter:20

Wow did just Acp sir realized that Riya is someone he can hold upon?? 🤔 for a smart cop he is really slow..

Rathor, Arjun , including seniors has wronged this girl in a great level. Now everybody expecting from her to behave normally with them??? Unbelievable

And what's wrong with Sakshi ??? She doesn't even know what had happened, why is she interfering?? That girl is already so hurt and she is adding more with her stupidity.

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Its general curiosity you will feel when you see someone you dont know will walk into your life and mess up with the people you know. As someone said this earlier in this thread, it's normal for Saksi. Like others she cant contain her curiosity.

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

@Chapter:21

Well Sakshi is really dumb...

Hmm..I want to see what Arjun do for Riya's happiness? And want Mohit back in the story and that pending dinner of Mohit and Riya.

Um! that will happen for sure.😉

Riya ji ishq chupta nahi chupanese

😈😈

At least finally Riya and Sree are pretty much normal

Hope it'll solve soon...

And I want to see what 'll be Riya's next step to move on

She will try her level best. How far she is from achieving that will be a real challenge now 😆

Please continue soon

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Tia❤️

And again I'd say THANK YOU so much for such a long review and your thoughts on all those chapters. Your feedback will really help me with shaping next chapters 🤗

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Anki❤️

Originally posted by: KaziRume

Chapter 20

Awesome Chapter.Liked it.

Okay, I was wrong about Rathore. He tried his best to help Riya & even tried to convince Arjun.But Arjun, fearing he'll fall for her more, fearing he'll betray Roshni, for his own selfishness did that deliberately to Riya. That was really mean of him.

Well Sam has certain layers to his character and for Arjun, yeah he screwed up big time.

Arjun does think only Riya can fix him, just wants to be normal. Rathore was so right. He is now so desperate for her. But when he'll realize that he loves her? Now, I'm being desperate for that.

🙈🙈🙈 really? To be sure, I dont know. He was visibly jealous and he wants her around him but to love her he needs to understand if she still feels the same way towards him. There will always be this hesitation. And maybe when he wont anymore hesitate around her he would realise.

Riya had proved herself that time.It must be like a tight slap to the Commissioner & Arjun.

Sakshi was being herself with so much curiosity. Think me wrong but IMO it's quite natural when you see your usual surroundings keep changing for a single person.

That's totally natural and I'd be curious too.

Does my opinion matter now ? I think not. But I want to give it. Don't know if this is soon or anything but I want them be normal soooon ! And the later story how they will be dealing with each other.

Why would you say that? It really does matter. They will be normal, and it will take some time as both of them aren't as easy as everyone else around them.

At last, Thanks for the PM.

Thank you for your reply even when you have exams.

This means a lot to me.⭐️

Originally posted by: Mdmadona

Aww poor riya she is hurt seeing arjun with sakshi n let him go

What's up with sakshi??? Why she is always sticking with arjun??? What personal???

Happy for shree n riya bonding

She got trapped in sikky case n it's still scary for her.. Hope arjun ll get to know about this soon

Just 2 more chapters but ariya has long way to go plz don't rush

Awesome update

Cont soon

Sakshi obviously likes Arjun and anyone will try to stick around a person if she'll see him slip by just because of another person.

I won't rush, I promise. And arjun will get to know about it!

Thanks for reply dear.

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

It was emotional update... How ri must have felt.... Its very difficult to be at odds with your bff. She is also stick with her connection with arj.

Sometimes u need one steady connection

Puri duniya ke syappe ek taraf aur bff ke saath jhagda ek tarf!

You are true on your last lines 👍 I guess it's getting better btw Shr-Ri.

Thanks for commenting dii😘

Originally posted by: honeylika

Awesome update

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Cont soon

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Originally posted by: minamma

Talking like friends again Shree and riya were adorable as hell and I loved it

The pain riya is going through is heart breaking poor baby

It is pinching us seeing Arjun behave normally with sakshi so it must be paining riya a lot

Two more chapters... 🙄

But I guess ariya still have a long way to go

Are you planning on writing it's sequel...???

Well eagerly waiting for next one as usual

I am glad you liked shr-Ri part. That was long overdue. She had been facing this ever since she left ETF.

Yes, I am very much planning to write its sequel.

Thanks for reply Mina😘

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it

superb

thnx for pm

cont soon

Maggi🍝🍝🍝anytime anyday anywhere

Maggie lover spotted 😎

I choose Maggie too😉

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Originally posted by: Shannusjs

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Awesome update

Loved it

Continue soon

Thanks for reply dear. Glad you liked it.