Ariya FF: Electrons Cannot be friends, New Chapters added Pg 101 - Page 62

@chapter:17

Fabulous update

Excellent choice of words (which is always the case)😃

I 'll little judgemental about Arjun character- IS he any better than Mohit

At least Mohit doesn't hurt her so pathetically, again the person we love the most has the power to hurt us the most hasn't he??

In a practical approach we say (according to me ofcourse) that Arjun was the villain of Riya's life as he broke him little bit more during breaking her fully due to his insecurities and vulnerability.

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Tia❤️

@Chapter:18

Well I'll start with Rathor, he is really trying push Arjun's life in a new direction by pushing him towards Riya

Maybe that's how two friends are..Btw I really this smart mouth and cold Riya...and how she making them shut.

Btw Sree and chotu too proven their friendship, it says "friends in need friends in deed" . They prove that they 'll support their friend in any situation Maybe it in front of a senior or even they not talking term with her.

That's two wonderful examples of friendships in this chapter that I find.

Mohit is someone I won't judge just now, I'll wait little bit more...but he seems like someone who if given opportunity will fight tooth and nail for Riya even the opponent is Arjun Rawte.

I like this jealous and insecure ACP Rawte, I 'll want some more of this side of him ..he deserves it after all that he put Riya through.

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Tia❤️

@Chapter:19

Starting with this chapter I'm blown away with the understanding between Riya and Sree, it's really unique to find such a soul friend. They are always have each other back.

This confrontation between Ariya was truly needed...it was long due...marvelous use of words to describe emotional episode...it really touch the heart...I pain really reach out for me.

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Really love this update

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Tia❤️

@Chapter:20

Wow did just Acp sir realized that Riya is someone he can hold upon?? 🤔 for a smart cop he is really slow..

Rathor, Arjun , including seniors has wronged this girl in a great level. Now everybody expecting from her to behave normally with them??? Unbelievable

And what's wrong with Sakshi ??? She doesn't even know what had happened, why is she interfering?? That girl is already so hurt and she is adding more with her stupidity.

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@Chapter:21

Well Sakshi is really dumb...

Hmm..I want to see what Arjun do for Riya's happiness? And want Mohit back in the story and that pending dinner of Mohit and Riya.

Riya ji ishq chupta nahi chupanese

At least finally Riya and Sree are pretty much normal

Hope it'll solve soon...

And I want to see what 'll be Riya's next step to move on

Please continue soon

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Tia❤️

Chapter 20

Awesome Chapter.Liked it.

Okay, I was wrong about Rathore. He tried his best to help Riya & even tried to convince Arjun.But Arjun, fearing he'll fall for her more, fearing he'll betray Roshni, for his own selfishness did that deliberately to Riya. That was really mean of him.

Arjun does think only Riya can fix him, just wants to be normal. Rathore was so right. He is now so desperate for her. But when he'll realize that he loves her? Now, I'm being desperate for that.

Riya had proved herself that time.It must be like a tight slap to the Commissioner & Arjun.

Sakshi was being herself with so much curiosity. Think me wrong but IMO it's quite natural when you see your usual surroundings keep changing for a single person.

Does my opinion matter now ? I think not. But I want to give it. Don't know if this is soon or anything but I want them be normal soooon ! And the later story how they will be dealing with each other.

At last, Thanks for the PM.

Chapter 21

An awesome chapter.Liked it.

Ah! Finally Shree-Ri is coming to themselves with each other. Really Riya should at least in touch with Shree. But sometimes the human being gave so much importance to someone who doesn't deserve that ignoring the one cares.

Till now we, now Riya also acknowledged that she does have that feeling even after so much happened. What she'll do now, waiting to see.

What was the topic Sakshi wanted to talk ?

Will the story reveal how she helped Arjun in Sikander case & Arjun will know about it ?

And for the question, I'll choose Tea but black one not his cutting chai. But my question is, is there anyone like him in real life ? Would really like to meet.

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Wish you'll complete the story before you go. Yeah, only if you can manage.

Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb update

If Arjun has kept his personal emotions away from professional like then no one would be hurt as they are today.
Please do something about Sakshi she is getting on nerves.
cant wait to read next part

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Sometimes personal feelings make people vulnerable, so arjun wasnt any different. But that doesn't mean he was right!

LOL! Sakshi has a bigger role to play in this story so yeah she'll be dealt properly.😆

Thanks for your reply🤗

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Thanks for the pm

I just checked it..

Maybe it's a long gap for me...but I heard somewhere "a good reader never forget a good story line"😉

I'll pm you the update of gulabi ankein when I publish it...as I have already promised someone to update it as soon as possible😁

Btw I'm hoping we 'll get a sequel or season2 of ECBF as it is coming to it end but it has lots of potential to bring a sequel out of it.

We love your writing so don't let us miss this opportunity❤️👍🏼

Will be waiting for your decision

With lots of love

Tia💝

PS: check out below for comment on chapters

@bold

That's indeed true 😉

Yaar please update that story soonish

There will be sequel to this one as their story ain't anywhere near ending 😉

And thank you so much for taking out time and reviewing each chapter individually. ❤️That really means a lot to me.🤗

With love

Anki🤗

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

@chapter:17

Fabulous update

Excellent choice of words (which is always the case)😃

Thank you so much girl 🤗

I 'll little judgemental about Arjun character- IS he any better than Mohit

At least Mohit doesn't hurt her so pathetically, again the person we love the most has the power to hurt us the most hasn't he??

In a practical approach we say (according to me ofcourse) that Arjun was the villain of Riya's life as he broke him little bit more during breaking her fully due to his insecurities and vulnerability.

Thanks for pm

Love

Tia❤️

@ Bold

It's just we give power to the ones to hurt us and it does hurt like hell when they do. Riya wasnt any different.