OS - Rishabh Bajaj: A Father and a Husband - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is Prabhudeva ka isn't it. 😈

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: SehLengeThoda

OK I wrote this.

First time I attempted something.

English teacher in me caught you but popat i see you already saying so 🙄🤦 Kyun bhai ruk jate thoda.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very Good writing....

But kind of summarized version tha....hopefully next one will have dialogues too😆

Continue soonish..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

This was TOOOOOOOOO SMALL 😭💔

Your feedback is also way too small.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

Very Good writing....

But kind of summarized version tha....hopefully next one will have dialogues too😆

Continue soonish..

I attempted for the first time. So you have to take that into consideration.

Edited by prb4eva - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: SehLengeThoda

Your feedback is also way too small.

write huge update feedback bhi huge milega.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

Very Good writing....

But kind of summarized version tha....hopefully next one will have dialogues too😆

Continue soonish..

exactly summary report tha. Nice suggestions👍🏼
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: SehLengeThoda

I attempted for the first time. So you have to take that into consideration.

defense dekho 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: SehLengeThoda

I attempted for the first time. So you have to take that into consideration.

I am so sorryyy....maine dekha bhi nahi ki story aapne likhi hai😳....just flow aur achi writing dekhke padhne lagg gaya...😆

and i am not Criticizing it but ek genuine observation tha..

It was a good part jaise maine bola hai....😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Pls update soon yaar. Missing this a lot

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