Arshi FF : Sea Mist Thread #2 Epilogue pg 106 - Page 84

Love love love love lovedddd it

Awesome story and awesome ending but I think there should be one more epilogue regarding post arshi marriage life.

This was such a nice story..... gonna miss reading it! Please start a new story:)

Awesome! They r all married n settled overcoming their own fears..

I really liked the way arnav proposed.. soo cute..

I’m going to miss this story.. but I must say it was a wonderful journey..

Thank you..

I can feel ur sense of loss as well as accomplishment ,Kavi..

When u r fully into something,it's hard to part from it..

But at the same time,this achievement gives u immense pleasure that u have nailed it..

Same pinch here..

As a reader,I m sad that SM has come to an end but the happiness that I was here from the very start to the end is overwhelming..

Arnav -Khushi convo provides us with all the knowledge about all the three couples..

Akash,Payal n their baby..

Aarav ,Rashmi n their daughter..

Manav n Anjali n their son...

I m happy for the couples n happier for the kids who get their family completed..

Finally.... ah finally..

Arnav talks about his attraction towards Khushi so many years ago..

🤪

I have been waiting for it all the time,Kavi..

n u r such a teaser..

😈

I must say..

😆

I just love Khushi's confession...

❤️

She doesn't shy away from mouthing her emotions n thoughts..

Arnav n Khushi ..

Made for each other...mad for each other ...Hamesha ..

I can never get enough of this reel jodi..

Originally posted by: pakpearl

I can feel ur sense of loss as well as accomplishment ,Kavi..

When u r fully into something,it's hard to part from it..

But at the same time,this achievement gives u immense pleasure that u have nailed it..

Same pinch here..

As a reader,I m sad that SM has come to an end but the happiness that I was here from the very start to the end is overwhelming..

Arnav -Khushi convo provides us with all the knowledge about all the three couples..

Akash,Payal n their baby..

Aarav ,Rashmi n their daughter..

Manav n Anjali n their son...

I m happy for the couples n happier for the kids who get their family completed..

Finally.... ah finally..

Arnav talks about his attraction towards Khushi so many years ago..

🤪

I have been waiting for it all the time,Kavi..

n u r such a teaser..

😈

I must say..

😆

I just love Khushi's confession...

❤️

She doesn't shy away from mouthing her emotions n thoughts..

Arnav n Khushi ..

Made for each other...mad for each other ...Hamesha ..

I can never get enough of this reel jodi..

I guess I cannot get enough of them as well..... that's why I wrote 6 FFs on them 😃 I still can't believe it sometimes

Thank you for all the wonderful and colorful comments ! I will miss them :-)

Originally posted by: ohminfinite

Hi Kavi,

That was one beautiful work. This story sucked me in with the word go. You have a unique style of narrating the story. This story had all the elements to have me absorbed. The typical 'who dunnit ' with ample amount of Arshi romance. You carefully created each characters and situations and used them cleverly to create intrigue. I especially loved the Karvalli background. You took us all in that region and introduced us the wonderful way of life,food , culture . Kudos Kavi.

I have one regret though. This amazing story was very much rushed up when it reached the ending. I totally understand the AD and its demands. But I loved this story so much that I felt this one deserved a better wrapping.

I appreciate and applaud the enormous efforts you took for this captivating story .I enjoyed it thoroughly . Please, whenever possible give us beautiful stories like this one.

Cheers Kavi.

Vandana

Hi Vandana

Thanks for you comments :-)

May I know why you thought it was rushed? What was lacking in the wrapping ?

HI Kavi

Awesome story. I really want to read next part of epilogue . There is just a a confession and then they are surrounded by all the issues. Would love to see how they are as a couple . How much they have understand each other

HI Kavi

Awesome story. I really want to read next part of epilogue . There is just a a confession and then they are surrounded by all the issues. Would love to see how they are as a couple . How much they have understand each other. I love there story. It was so much of about past rather than their future. I would like to have some more chapters for them to find a way to move forward with each other . Like the way you did it in harvest moon. Their combined past was just a part of them but being together was more important and each other’s happiness was more important.

Please start new story soon. I love your stoires

Originally posted by: charlotte74

I guess I cannot get enough of them as well..... that's why I wrote 6 FFs on them 😃 I still can't believe it sometimes

Thank you for all the wonderful and colorful comments ! I will miss them :-)