Arshi FF : Sea Mist Thread #2 Epilogue pg 106 - Page 91

Since Shyam is sia ‘s brother , he might have killed payal along with Rishabh , who is a politician s son as well

and he was rejected by payal

He also blamed Arnav becos of his hatred for Arnav & Shyam s friendship

Too many revelations

Kidnapping kh & blaming it on Raizadas

Fantastic twist, payal is alive

Payash have a son, thank god

No more arranged marriages for greed , family connections

Where is Anjali & Ananya ?

Perfect epilogue

Payash got a breakthrough , Indrani never gives Akash a break, first tied him to a sick woman, then when he found the love of his life still unhappy

Anjali said I do to Manav

At last our fav couple, by the beach, so responsible & caring

What s perfect ending for a perfect story

Will miss this FF

Amidst the lockdown madness, I was looking for a nice read to divert my mind....and logged into IF after ages...I couldn’t believe my eyes when I saw a new FF by you...was so excited!

Desert rose is my most favorite FF ever...I have read it so many times, I almost know it by heart. Monsoon Rain, Harvest Moon, Valley of Flowers also were wonderful stories and I have read them multiple times...I bought Monsoon Rain on Amazon

Sea mist has the most intricate plot amongst your stories...the mystery, the investigation around Payal..and an unexpected climax....it was like watching a romantic thriller suspense movie...and you tied all the threads up neatly at the end...everything fell into place.

I dabble in writing myself, some amateur FF etc. I am in awe of how you manage to transport us to different locales and immerse us in the local culture...whether it was Katariasar, Coorg, Punjab or Uttarakhand...and it was South Canara this time...I could see the my husband studied in that area and has told me such wonderful things...now after reading your descriptions, I am surely keen to visit..

The romance is always so well depicted.. .just wraps me up in a warm, fuzzy feeling... the little things, tiny details like Arnav pinning her saree blouse, Khushi applying the rash cream...the way he always looks out for her, the way she understands him and doesn’t judge him..

Was heartwarming to see the familiar, recurring themes from your stories...like Khushi/Arnav meeting in the prologue and the timeline jumping by several years in chapter 1...Manav-Anjali jodi, Shyam the eternal bad guy... I don’t know how you manage to keep true to these core elements...in different narratives, with different settings, but still blend in all the characters and incidents so well with the story.

I would say that some elements of the plot were confusing...Nandita was mentioned vaguely/suddenly and it was not clear as to when she had gone missing...

there was too much explanation around what the other characters were up to, when Arnav was resucing Khushi from the toilet in the jungle, could’ve been simple..

I couldn’t understand the purpose of Ramya’s character...I also wish that all the names of the boys from Payal’s group - Rakesh, Rahul, Rishabh etc didn’t begin with R ....I kept mixing them up...I am trying to give constructive feedback, hoping to help you understand a reader’s perspective..no offense intended at all!!! I love your writing and your stories....if I were a rich bollywood producer or if I worked for Ekta Kapoor, I would snap up the copyright to all your stories and make movies or TV shows...which I am sure will be huge hits!

I see you have started another new story and I am looking forward to reading it...

Cheers

Maya

This story stole my heart.. loved your style of explaining everything.. loved your plot.. character of Khushi Arnav.. comeback of Payal which I was hoping since long ... Keep writing your stories dr.. Just loved this Arshi story from chapter one to epilogue.❤️

Read this wonderful FF in one go! What a beautiful and unique ArHi story!! The twists in the story were pretty gripping too. Could never have imagined the surprises, esp, in the last 3 chapters!! 😮

Thank you for sharing it here. :)

Hello Charlotte74

This is the first story of yours I read. The story plot is AMAZING👏full of romance, suspense and even action too.....😃this story was suggested by a friend when I asked her for some good Arshi FF and I am glad that she suggested me this one...the best way to spend lockdown though😊I loved the way you moved the story from sadness to happiness, from suspicion to belief, from hatred to love, from loneliness to companionship, love.... FULL OF LIFE......I enjoyed reading this story very much...the beauty of different places you have given in detail like Udupi, Hebri and sea beaches are fascinating and made me dream about the places😳 The rituals and pooja 'Nagamandala and Bhoota Kola' you have mentioned in the story I never knew untill you explained it....The story is full of ups and downs with Arshi moments...... all in all the story is👏

Amazing story. Read all parts in one go. I love the way you incorporated twist and turn in this story and payal coming out live was the best one.

Absolutely beautiful this story was.

Life always has a way of surprising us when we least except. Coincidences are just well planned happenings in our path through life.

I loved your Arnav and Khushi and the bond they shared.

Great work....going to read more of your stories now!

Peace

LibranAngel

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I really liked the story Kavitha. I loved it until the portion Payal comes back alive. I will honestly tell you that I didn't care to find Payal alive and well, living with her son somewhere. I can't get over the fact that she stayed away from her parents in spite of being alive. I felt she should have somehow let them know that she was alive at least. No parent deserves to mourn their child and definitely not when he or she is alive and well! They may have had issues amongst themselves but they have never made either Khushi or Payal feel unwanted, right? And even that does not give any child the right to pretend to be dead. Her dad died mourning her !! That's just so piteous!! 😒

Anyways, apart from that, I really liked the story. The mystery and romance. I think the Arnav in this story is one of the most genuinely good Arnav's I have ever read. I loved his characterization.